ShivIka/RiKara/RuMya FF-Rab ne bana di jodi [ch13/pg45][12/6/18]

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Hiii guys...

Again I am back...ok I know I hv one SS pending but I m nt willing to update that at this pnt of time...

Hope u all like this...

Now about the SS may be it will turn into an FF if u all like it...

Everything is same in this story as the show but there is difference here

Anika and shivaay had never met each other...and

Same with omkara and gauri...but

Rudra and saumya had met each other...and soon u will know about their relation...

And one more thing there is less change in their character...but u know love change everyone...

and ya there is no tia and mallika...

And more you will know as the story will proceed...

Hope u all like the concept...do let me know whether I should cont. it or drop it...

Will wait for ur response...

NOTE: If u all like this then I would like to inform u that I will be late with the updates because of studies...(actually this came into my mind so i was not able to stop my self from posting it) hope u all will adjust with late updates...


--Rab ne bana di jodi--

Chapter 1

Dadi's room

Dadi was sitting on her chair and everyone were present in the room

Dadi-"Om..shivaay kahan hai"

Om-"Maine usse call kar Diya tha Vo aa raha hoga"

Dadi-"Thik hai"

Pinky-"mummy ji aapko kya talks karni hai shivaay se"

Dadi-"abhi shivaay aa jaye phir batati hun" and in the mean time shivaay entered into the room and Om looked towards the door

Om-"lijiye shivaay bhi aa gya" and looked at every one with a confused expression and went close to his dadi

Shivaay -"haan dadi kya Hua"

Dadi-"baitho..mujhe bahut zaroori baat karni hai" and shivaay sat on the sofa

Dadi-"Main chahti hun Ki..billu tum shaadi karlo"

All-"what???" And looked at dadi with wide eyes

Dadi-"aise kya dekh rahe Ho tum sab...shaadi karne ko kaha hai..jung par jaane ko nahi"

Tej(in low voice)-"shaadi bhi toh ek jung hai" and janvi who was standing beside him turned to him

Janvi-"aapne kuch kaha"

Tej-"nahi toh..." And janvi turned and tej took a breath of relief

Shivaay-"dadi aap ye kya keh rahin hai"

Dadi-"shaadi karne ko keh rahin hun"

Shivaay-"I know that..par"

Pinky-"par mummy ji itni saari taiyaari, aur sabse important ladki"

Shivaay-"mom"

Dadi-"pinky tum ladki Ki chinta mat karo..maine ladki pasand kar li hai"

Pinky-"wah mummy ji aap toh badi fasts Ho...waise kaun hai Vo"

Dadi-"bahut achhi ladki hai, bahut suljhi hui hai, samajhdar hai...aur Maine tum logo ko bhi pasand kiya..shivaay ke liye bhi ladki Maine hi pasand Ki hai toh"

Janvi-"toh Vo zaroor achhi hogi"

Dadi-"aur main apne billu ke liye best ladki la rahin hun" and now shivaay had enough of their talks

Shivaay-"shaadi mujhe karni hai" but before he could complete rudra interrupted him

Rudra-"dadiii, Bhaiya maan gye" and started his dance and dadi gave a wide smile

Shivaay-"what??kab" and rudra stopped dancing

Rudra-"abhi toh aapne kaha Ki aapko shaadi karni hai"

Shivaay-"just shut up...aur dadi shaadi mujhe karni hai toh yeh mera faisla hona chahiye"

Dadi-"thik hai billu toh main usse kal bula leti hun"

Shivaay-"ok..toh main jaun"

Dadi-"haan billu" and shivaay turned to go

Rudra-"Bhaiya" and shivaay turned

Shivaay-"hmmm"

Rudra-"aapne unka naam nahi pucha" and shivaay just smiled and went out the room and just took few steps when he heard rudra saying something which made him stop

In the room

Rudra-"hame toh unka naam Bata dijiye"

OmPri-"haan dadi"

Dadi-"Anika" and everyone smiled

And outside the room, listening her name shivaay smiled

Shivaay-"toh Anika naam hai uska" and went.

Hope u guys like it

Do hit like and comment...

P.S: those who want pm do buddy me as I will be able to snd pms to only my buddy dear...😊

WAITING FR UR RESPONSE...

THANK YOU😊


chapter 2- pg 4



INDEX

chapter 1 - pg 1

chapter 2 - pg 4

chapter 3 - pg 7

chapter 4 - pg 10

chapter 5 - pg 15

chapter 6- pg 20

chapter 7- pg 23

chapter 8- pg 28

chapter 9- pg 32

chapter 10- pg 37

chapter 11- pg 41

chapter 12- pg 43

chapter 13- pg 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushboonankani

amazing...do continue...:)


glad u like it dear
will do..as per the comments...
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let see...😊
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Nice start plz continue soon 😊
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Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Hmmm...different but sounds interesting...


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Originally posted by: zyrah17

Nice start plz continue soon 😊


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Originally posted by: rinku95

Interesting start
Continue soon


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Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Really intriguing

Continue soon

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will try to be soon...
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Originally posted by: itzanya32

nice concept...

continue soon...


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really interesting
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

really interesting

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