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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

One creative stroke and eye sticky picture is there. Who else can use his dizziness to create this amazing, enchanting outcome other than my writer-e-khass . A squishy hug again.🤗 They always lost in their world when they are together. It was so lovely and so emotional.Their convo was all about mirroring pain , unseen wound, lost of everything and identity which she also on verge of lose. Sharing thoughts between her and unlikely man equally without asking personal matter. Both in same condition and in this very emotional state she share her fear and gave away Durgbai's hidden clue to Him. Unknowingly she may give farman in HIS safe hands. How opposite na Durgabai had to save it from her would be and here she is given to barely known but trusted man's hand.

He stop her from go on further about relationship but unknowingly give her a promise "All will be fine."

Her almost blinded vision and she grabbed what he offered without seen and you gave them what person only can feel like mousam ki paheli barish . Beautiful ahshash of first touch, a lovely memory forever. 😳

Like their problems comes as a blessing😃

Her girlish imagination is like dew drop on blossoming flower. I don't have any word then beautiful but it is more then beautiful. How she is connecting to HIM. To write it is like a delicate glass and I feel it like a dream if I touch it will got disturb and lost own accent. So, I only want to savour it. It's too tuff to write feeling at first closeness, touch and her imagination of HIM. That's what can be only expecting when writer is YOU.

He was lost in thought of to collect farman and planning to start for New journey. His tunic brought HER first touch memory and he thought of if it was an another life what he will do but right now dutiful man wants to detaching himself from her. It was too touchy.

HE is a man of word but will be a man of silent word also.


Sensible yet sensational... that was your post, and the proof of it, are the above quoted paragraphs.

Loved it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Adwitiya...you and your writing style both are unique just like your name...khoob bhalo (I hope its correct).
This one is sheer beauty...hats off girl...

P.S. durga mata in your dp...lovely pic. Wanna visit Kolkata for durgapooja one day.BTW r u there on Facebook?
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Posted: 8 years ago


Chapter 17.


Image result for silhouette hands only of lovers



Haikus:

1. Two souls but single thought
Beat as one ,their two hearts
In Keats' love poem

2. Dusk, horizon and silence
Tears and hand kerchief, became
Cupid's playground..

3. Why did God give her
Why did God take her from me
Snatching cruelly..

4. God made him and her
To be there together
Where comes the loneliness?

5. Game of hide and seek
Riddle about the farmaan
Will he solve it?

6. The touch makes her blush
Makes her cheeks go warm
She is Sweet Sixteen

7. The touch makes him think
Will clasp her delicate hand
In another life...

Karkuzhali.
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Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi



Yeah, I know this... but his horses were common in the region. Hai na?

And he had told heera's people after canal incident, that he knows them because of his marvari horse.then how come nobody doubt him? That if he knows about horse, he must be knowing about them being panhargarhis too?


Of course dear, he knew they were from Parnagarh... he is an intelligence officer... ever since he got the assignment, his men would have been trailing them... keeping an eye... he had to have them intercepted at the forest there so he could direct them to Aidabad... once they reached the kingdom of Bansi, it would be very difficult to infiltrate their group to find out if they had the Farmaan na... if the tribals hadn't attacked them at that point, his own men would've possibly done something to get them to take a halt at Aidabad


and Yes Heera did have her doubts ...
why is why she asks Bindiya to check how old the stables are to ensure he really is a businessman... that he's been there for years... and not a spy spying on them.

Remember this convo from chapter 6

how could one so young achieve such fame? What if those claims were just an exaggeration?

'Observe those sheds... out there... the barns, the sheds, the structures... do they look new, Bindiya? Or, would you say the stables have been here, for a while?'

After close scrutiny, she nodded 'No baisa... the barns don't look new...'

'Which means, his business has been here long enough... so, his men are not exaggerating... the man is well-known, around here...' having said that, the answers only gave rise to further doubts 'But, if he's prominent-enough that the local thugs know him... that the Kotwal respects him... why wasn't he travelling with any guards in the forest?' Her solemn frown curved into a sceptical one 'Then again... why WOULD he need protection, if his senses are smarter than mine, and his skills are sharper than a warrior's?'

At different points, Mohan is also suspicious of him as is Daya banna...

But after two investigations, Heera's men aren't able to find anything else about him to support her suspicions na...

and as time went by, all the help he's meted out to her group overrode those doubts steadily... she started trusting him... till she again heard the 'I'm immune to most poisons and venoms...' sentence




Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 17.


Image result for silhouette hands only of lovers



Haikus:

1. Two souls but single thought
Beat as one ,their two hearts
In Keats' love poem

2. Dusk, horizon and silence
Tears and hand kerchief, became
Cupid's playground..

3. Why did God give her
Why did God take her from me
Snatching cruelly..

4. God made him and her
To be there together
Where comes the loneliness?

5. Game of hide and seek
Riddle about the farmaan
Will he solve it?

6. The touch makes her blush
Makes her cheeks go warm
She is Sweet Sixteen

7. The touch makes him think
Will clasp her delicate hand
In another life...

Karkuzhali.
Image result for symbolism of love

I loved all of it so so so so much... but the one is red is just marvellous... ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
No dear... you hadn't liked or responded so just asked... if you'd seen it.. 😳
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi


You are so cute. Don't take it seriously. Chill , I was just teasing you.
😳

You cheeky lil girl...
Bichaari Bindu... she got so tensed for a while... 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manu_ak

No words to describe the beauty of this chappy ...
U Rock lashy di 😊
Love u 🤗



This is as beautiful as the chapter itself ... 👏


Thank you so so so so so so much Manali 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Suganya.S


So Many issues , one bigger than the other Not only for Heera/AMK combo 😭

Sokku podi why are you crying 😭


Originally posted by: melovesja


It was his part of plan to guide them and bandit attack helpful for them but lashy will better explain you in detail.


Yes dear it was... 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvuyuvi

Lashy di, when AMK had met heera and her people in forest, how did he guess that they are from panhargarh?

P.S. lashy di, tell your khan sahib to do whatever he want, in this life.this way, not only him and heera , all of us would be happy too. Only one life is given to us.aage ka kya pata?


To do anything he wants 😆 kyaa karein the man is duty-bound na...at least he's trying to be

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