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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice

maan feeling guilty after wat he did he have no intention to cross this limitbut he don't knw how he went with flow
he only want to make jealous his ex but in all this he hurt
seems geet loved him she's not feeling any kind of tension
maan want gee to have ipill but geet want his part in hr womb
geet to excited to b with maan



Yes geet truly loves him
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Congrats for new story..
Intresting start..
Maaneet together hai but maan guilty hai geet ka feelings ka saath kheal kar par maan kya chupa raha hai geet sa..
Geet maan ka pyar ma pagal hai uski har baat sa usa pyar nazar ata hai..
Waiting for next part..
Update your other story too..



Thoda thoda raaz next chapter mei khulega
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeldream14

intriguing

betrayed in love



Yes u r right
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome starting
Loved the madness and love of geet to maan
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start. Maaneet crossed their limits, Maan is worried and guilty about it whereas Geet has no issue. Maan wants her to take pills but it seems Geet has different plan. Loved it. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: payal.gupta177

Interesting start. Maaneet crossed their limits, Maan is worried and guilty about it whereas Geet has no issue. Maan wants her to take pills but it seems Geet has different plan. Loved it. Waiting for next.



Thnx for ur comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2

If Maan would not have been riding his bike for past 5 years he would not have been able to withstand the various assault on his senses. Geet was sitting behind him , both her legs on either side of his bike and her hands holding his waist tightly , infact one of her hands was inside his t-shirt. While Maan was driving she was busy showering his back with small kisses. There were many instances where he wanted to stop his bike , drag Geet to the nearest available room and take care of their needs. Maan thanked God when he reached the nearest drugstore. However his relief was short lived when he saw his room mate with his di there.

Aditya : Arey Maan .. Tu yahan kya hua..

K.. k.. Kuch nahi.. Tu yahan

Aditya : Haan yaar .. My brand of cigarette is nt available at corner store .. So I took my risk here.. But my bad luck.. I saw ur didi.. Or rather she saw me.. So I lied that I have stomach upset and I am here for medicines... and ur bhanja has tagged along with me since then.. And I have actually ended up buying belly medicines..

Anni : Hey bacha... my baby bro.. What are u doing..


Before she could finish her sentence she saw a girl standing behind her brother. Co incidentally she was wearing the same suit, which Anni was supposed to get as gift on her birthday. Of course she knew what her gift was. In fact she had given her discreet approval for it. All she had to do was force Adi to accompany Maan on his gift shopping. Then Adi had send her pic of their final choices and she had approved 2 of them . Adi had then convinced Maan that those 2 suits would look very good on his sister.

Woh.. Didi... she is Geet.. My ..

Aditya: She is Dev's friend.. She now hangs with us di.. Hi Geet.. What happened ... quick change of dress.. I remember u were wearing something else in the evening..

Yeah.. Wo.. My dress got torn.. It is is so embarrassing..

Actually her dress got torn because of me.. So I gave her Di's dress

Anni : Good job bacha.. I am so proud of u.. Hi Geet.. I am Anni.. Maan's sister..


Hi Di..i am Geet.. I am a new member in their gang I guess

Aditya : Waise what are both of u doing in pharmacy store...

Maan saw this a case of Murphy's law. Everything was going wrong. He just culd not tell anyone what the hell was he doing here. He looked at Geet pleading her to save him in this situation.

Actually I wanted to buy some stuff..

Both Anni and Geet were at the counter at the same time. And both were uncomfortable. Geet could not understand why was Maan's Di uncomfortable . After much deliberation Geet blurted out the first thing that came to her mind.

Sanitary napkins...

Shopkeeper: just a sec mam..

Anni: Pregnancy test kit..

Geet almost dropped her bag from her hands. Shouldn't she be buying that too. She looked at Anni.

Congrates Di.. I did not know..

Anni: No one knows.. I am nt yet sure.. Can u keep my secrets..

Sure Di..

Anni: waise what were u doing Maan and Adi's house... forget it I am sorry.. I should not have asked.. Ofcourse u guys are friends .. So nothing wrong in visiting each other's house..

Maan could see that both Geet and Di were very comfortable with each other. He was close to his sister and she knew about his previous heartbreak too. Incidentally she was still close to his ex and knew about her current boyfriend Dev. But after seeing how close she was with Geet now, he was sure that she will kill him if she came to know about his sin.

All the sane thought flew away from his mind when he saw Sameera getting down from Dev's car. The green monster started raising his head again when he saw Geet running to hug Dev.

Hey Dev.. Yahan kaise..

Dev : Hey my girl.. What a pleasant surprise.. Tum yahan kaise..

I am with Maan... and Aditya and Anni Di..

Dev : Arey yaar a new resturant has come up .. So we were thinking of trying it.. But I guess ek wrong turn ho gaya.. N then I saw u guys standing here..

Hi Sameera..

Imli: Hi Geet..

Dev sighed again. No matter how much ever he tried he was not able to break the ice between Geet and Sameera , his present serious girlfriend and the other his childhood friend whom he briefly dated for few DAYS.. Yes days.. Before both of them realised that it was super awkward. Sameera was from a small town who had different outlook on the life. He was pretty sure that Sameera and her grp of friends treated Geet like a spoilt brat thrust on their life because of him.

Dev : Hi Maan , Hi Aditya.. Hi Di.. I am Dev.. I don't think we have met before but I have heard a lot about you from Sameera.

After a small chit chat.. Dev suggested that all of them have dinner together. Maan quickly searched if that restaurant had a pharmacy store near it so that he can buy the ipills. But was interrupted by everyone discussing the logistical travel plan.

Anni : I have my scooty..

No Di .. Don't take scooty in this cond..

Sameera : Why cant Di take her own scooty.. She has been driving it all her life..

Geet looked at Anni and prayed that she gets her point . Maan looked at both of them . It had not even been 10 min that they have met and both of them had already shared a secret excluding him completely.

Ok.. I can take Di and jr with me on Bike..

Dev : yes Geet can take the scooty..

NO.. I mean she has hurt her legs.. Cant u see she is slightly limping

Sameera: How do u know..

Dev : Ok Ok.. I will take di and kiddo in my car .. Adi and Geet can come in bike..

I will drop her .. She came here with me and I will keep her with me..

Maan could feel everyone's eye on him especially Sameera's, but he did not care. He felt so cheap after using Geet like that he could do anything now to soothe his guilt.

Aditya: u guys are all dressed up.. Look at me.. I am looking like an idiot.. Maan atleast give me ur jacket.. My t-shirt is 100 yrs old..

No..

Sameera: Come on Adi .. U look good

Haan Aditya ji u r looking good..

Maan snickered. Adi tujhe pehli baar kisi ne ji bulaya hai... ja tera janam safal ho gaya... u can die in pea

Geet slightly slapped Maan, Arey.. Maan don't be mean.. Give ur jacket to him..

Yaar tum bhi na..Maan took off his jacket. His action did not go un-noticed by everyone.

Take care of it.. Ek daag bhi dikha na..

Forget daag Aditya ji .. Humlog ispe poora bowl gira denge.. Itna colourful ho jayega ki .

Aditya : Daag ... no no.. safaai dhoondte rah jaoge..

Anni looked at Maan now. She expected some fireworks from him since both Sameera and Dev were here and he had hopes of getting Sameera back. But Maan was trying his best to ignore Sameera and was concentrating on the new girl. Even Sameera was a bit stressed around Maan. Was Maan doing this to make Sameera jealous and Geet looked like a genuine girl to her. But Maan was behaving differently now.This was his fav jacket.. Brought by his first salary. He was quiet possessive about it. Then she saw Maan joining Geet and Aditya in their laugh.

Anni: Waise Adi tumhara pet toh theek hai na?

Both Geet and Maan giggled..yes Maan giggled.. Anni was sure now that pigs can fly..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update
sabhi sath main maan bechara cant even do what he want to sameera bhi sath main aa gyi with dev
annie is expecting
nd now they all r going for dinner
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tania90

nice update
sabhi sath main maan bechara cant even do what he want to sameera bhi sath main aa gyi with dev
annie is expecting
nd now they all r going for dinner
waiting for next


sure i will try to update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update geet and maan on bike so close and geets act was really arousing maan but he has to control he wanted to but pill but his bad luck adi and Annie maan sis there maan intro geet as devs friend geet jelled with Annie pretty quickly even shared a secret that she is pregnant geet Hayes Serra and so does Sameera maan is different when he is with geet even gave his fav jacket to adi Annie could see some good changes in maan coz of geet

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