Rishbala TS: Love Politics: Part 1 updated on pg.1 (2/10/16)

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res FOR PART 2

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

Firstly, Thank you so much Souwmi my baby for your sweet dedication!

More than getting promotion your dedication made me so happy!

Love politics! hmm... i hate politics... its quite nasty... vicious and corrupted...

but I loved your politics... hehe!

okay... lots of funny things came to my mind while reading the update... so let me share it with you one by one...

Madhu a reporter! cool! atleast she is working unlike my madhu in hily... she has never reported anything... always trying her husband to get into romance.. LOL!

Okay, Rk is a son of a politician?? and Sultan is his f**king brother? eewww...🤢

I got so mad when those gundas misbehaved with madhu... god! to be honest i didn't like it one bit you made some f**ker steal Madhu's first kiss... yeah, you made it up later by making Rk kiss her which she accepted it as she wanted to forget the bitter taste of her previous kiss by his sweetness... but still... that f**king idiot could have just tried and madhu could have turned her face so that he couldn't have kissed her lips... well, its okay! 😔

Dipali? sister to Madhu and she is only 9 years old... with a baby voice... 😲😲 my darling sexy dips is a kiddo? unbelievable... she even called Rk "hero" but she couldn't seduce him saying "My hero" becos she knew he is meant to be her sister's... LOL!!!

Baby voice? at 9 years? i lost my baby voice when i was 3 or 4 i guess... you know i have a katta kural!! 😆

you know that whole scene... Malik's getting beaten up and tortured except for Dipali reminded me of Papanasam movie scene ... LOL! little ones always escapes nah? i m a little one at my house too... 😉😆

I'm so proud of this madhu.. she has so much guts.. she slapped those morons for touching her and she even kicked one guy on his crotch... how cool is that? 😳

I didn't get actually what's going n between Rk and Madhu... Rk says she accepted to be his friend... but then he let those goons to attack her.. yeah u gave me the reason he just landed India from US... but then how come he knew how his father's order to threaten them and if they didn't budge then kill them but not to rape her? he was aware of everything right then he could have taken some measure to prevent the event right? nevertheless, he came on time and saved her dignity and life...

hehe... i agree with my dips... even i vote for Rk's dimples... 😉😆

I loved Dipali's thesis that hero will save heroine and they live happily ever after... oh and that sleeping beauty waking up when her prince charming kissed her... hard to imagine Dips as a small kid but i find the little girl's sweet dreamy dialogues...

when Rk asked you know to read time i was like.. are you fool man? she is 9 years old... which means she is studying 4th std... by 6th std she will be having Algebra then why the hell not she know time? from which medieval chronic you are from? never been to school before? how the hell you got Visa to Us? i wanna scream all that to Rk... but Dipali gave him back nicely making him realize how stupid his question was... 🤣

aww..i find the scene cute where Dips will fume seeing him so tall even when he was sitting..and Rk's frustrated answer. "for God sake dips you are a child.. you will grow up" 😆

I love this cute Jiju-saali combo!😉😆

loved the little romantic-teasing moment between Rishbala... it was fun to read...

over all super interesting and funny update.. loved it so much... now can't wait to read more... please do update soonish!😛

Thanks again for your lovely dedication Souwmi... i m so happy!

love you... 🤗

Edit - here is my doubt...

Dips is 9 yrs old...

Madhu must be some 24 or 25... becos she has 4 years of work experience after her UG...

so the age difference between Madhu and trishna will be some 15 years..😲

now tell me at what age Malik uncle and Padmini aunty did "jalabulajangs"??🤣

answer me Souwmi... the nation wants to know!!!😆

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brilliant Sowmiya!!!⭐️⭐️

Politics..yeah...politics is really a dirty game...

People have to bear a lot- lot more consequences due to it..

But what impressing here is Madhu didnot flinch...she faced all so bravely...

At first, while reading, I thought all troubles must be related to Malik as

he came in picture first, but it was Madhu...

For Madhu, reporting is everything..it seems...she fought and skipped eating

to pursue her dream career...and she couldnot even imagine her life without her

dreams...wow!! she is great!!

Sikky!!😡...he is the goon...the goons.. they didnot even let the small girl free..

disgusting...

For a moment, I thought Rk is the similar type of goon, only he loves her..

but from her talks, of Madhu being inspiration, he seems a good person...

only he came from that goon family...and he doesnot live in India? what does he do?

Thank god, Rk came in time...That goon kissed her, touched her with their filthy

hands, chhiii...tried to rape her...

From Madhu's blush and talks, it seems Madhu too has feelings for him...but he said they met

only once...waiting to know who Rk really is and how did they meet..

The person who stole the show is Deepali...had never imagined Deepali to be such a

little girl...but wow!! loved her antics..

She proudly. bravely told her sister hadnot done anything wrong, at such a age..brave...

And her hero- heroine theory..she was confirmed that Madhu would be alright as story never becomes incomplete...I am scared..does it has great meaning? Are you trying to show

that child's thinking may not be always right?

Rishbala's precious moment was interrupted by cute Deepali..thank god that was not parents..who saw it..

So, Sultan comes in picture at last...I am sure he is not a good person...he only instructed the goons, right?

Waiting for more..

Thanks for pm..

Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago

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Yas

@IcecreamCupcake

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hai Soum..
Thanks for d TS..U finally Posted..

Part - 1
Wow totally wow wat a Story the way u penned it is Fab and Amazing..Totally loved it..Seriously was Totally Worth waiting for this..The way Madhu's pain and suffering was written Wonderfully..
Dipali so small..Aww..She is cute in this..i like it..
Love the point wen Madhu said about Respect. That goon was going to rape her..i wanted Rk to beat him black and blue..Rk's dad is the Villain out here..Sultan too..
The way Rk was worried was too good and Kissing Session too..lol..Dipali's entry and princess and prince story was too Awesome..in short Amazing,Awesome Soumu..love u and Thanks for d pm and This TS..
Eagerly waiting for next..Update soon..U made me wait alot..So update next soon..

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Anish

@anish17

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow sowmy awesome different and interesting story

Thank god Rk wiped those ugly forced kiss on madhu by kissing her

Hahaha u made dipali madhu's 9 yr old sister 🤣🤣 I know y u made like that 🤣 our little secret lol

Who is Rohan and sultan ? Rendu dogs um ore team illaiya ?

Loved madhu's character very much .very bold and interesting girl

Btw how did rishbala become friends ?

Update next part soon

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats sudha di. ..
and thanks Sowmi for this beautiful story. ..

awesome start ...Sowmi,
madhu is so brave, ..
she loves her jobs. .
i want to kick and beat that goon. .
how dare, they kiss madhu and going to rape her. ..
Thanks god our hero come.
and depali, she was so cute, &
her hero heroine logic...love it. .
i love this baby depali.

rk stay away from their family! !
so ...rishbala know each other. ..
excited for next update. ..
Thanks for pm. ..

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dharsii

@dharsii

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Supeeer Start Sowmy.
I like madhu character very much.
She is very bold and honest.
Sikky is villian..
Always he is comedy piece in most of the story.
But Here he is working under sultan.
Dipali is so sweet and cute.
She is young and naughty girl.
I like this Dipali.
Always She is irritating character in some stories.
But here,She is a interesting character.
Madhu was knifed by goons.
But Hero comes at correct time.
Dipali prays for her sister...So cute she is.
Dipali -Rk conversation is nice.
Madhu -Rk scenes are classy.
Finally Our Big Villan has entered with gun & pointed RK.
Eagerly waiting for ur update.

Edited by dharsii - 9 years ago