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Sonia

@sonikudi1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

As they are about to go in the car the rain starts to fall down extremely heavily....Rani holds onto Saumya as he looks at her surprised but doesn't ask her to let go... 😳 then he says maybe we should hold on till the rain stops and they in a little typical hut as Rani dries her hair and Saumya stares at her..."Why does it seem like I know you from b4, Rani?" he asks...

LOLZ i thought of taking the story somewhere else 😆

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natasha

@mahandra

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

😆 😆 okie so den rani replies dat wen 2 hearts cum soooo close it seems like v no each other since ages(typical hindi film herione dialogue naa 😆 )
den saum just stares & stares at her & rani is enjoying the moment as she cudnt even imagine this in her dreams dat ek din saum wud b so close 2 her 😳 den suddenly there is thunder,lightening & dhamaka 😆 which scares rani very much & she just holds on to him once again & both luk into each other's eyes 😳 .........sum flashes cum in front of both theirs eyes about the past & the feeling saum had...is now even rani's(of knowing each other from b4 😉

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nimmy

@nimmy1010

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

they r in a awkward state n immediately let go of each other...
rani is shivering n saum gets up n wraps his jaket around her...
she luks up surprised....n says thanks....
rani falls asleep....but saum keeps on lukin....lukin...
rani turns in her sleep...n da jaket falls off..
saum gets up n goes to put it bak on her, n den her hands falls on his...

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nimmy

@nimmy1010

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

sowwy...had posted twice..so i thot of editing this one...
anyway lage raho....😃

Edited by nimy.10 - 17 years ago

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Sonia

@sonikudi1

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Saumya suddenly feels a little shock as he stared at Rani's hand...she shivers and wakes up...Saumya looks at her and blurts, "pari, tum teek ho?!" Rani looks at him surprised...He suddenly looks confused..."I man..um, Rani, are you ok?" Rani nods. "Main teek hoon...lakein aapne mujhe Pari kyun kaha...?"

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nimmy

@nimmy1010

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

saum himself is not sure y he called her dat...
he tells rani ke by mistake...just came out...
she tells him to rest too..n he goes to another corner n lies down... 😊

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natasha

@mahandra

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

he tries 2 go of 2 sleep too but cant coz the incident goes on keeps on haunting him..........he keeps on thinking bout it & again sum flashes cum in front of his face........he rembs da time wen a rani-look-alike & him r entering a temple & den dat of both taking da "pavitra saath vachan" 😳 ]
his thots r distruptd wen he hears rani askin 4 water in er sleep & then he wakes her up & tells her dat he will go & search 4 some

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richa

@richa_s

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

pari asks somya if she could accompany him as she would get bored alone...
somya says fine after a long discussion..and they get out of the cottage..suddenly somya's phone rings and it is danima..his mom..she is nervous and asks somya if he's fine...and where is he..

somya replies that he is perfevtly fine..with some friend...he feels shy to mention that he is wid rani😳..and so just smiles..rani looks at him..

Edited by richa_s - 17 years ago

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richa

@richa_s

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

rani smiles and looks at somya...she then asks whose phone was it...after somya quickly tells gudbye to danima...somya replies that it was his danima..
pari looks confused
he says, -she is his mom..but she also gave love of dadi and nani to him...so he calls her danima 😆
pari nods her head and asks if she could use his phone to call her mom...
somya is about to give phone to her when the fone rings..
he looks at the caller id..and it is--sanjana

he just keeps looking at the phone..looking uncomfortable..
finally pari asks him to answer the phone...he reluctantly picks it up and says.."hello..
sanj-hey somya kahaan ho tum?
ghar pe call kiya par auntie ko to khud nahi pata..
where r u?..pata hai mein kitni ghabra gayi thi?
somya-umm..mein bas aa raha hoon..thoda mausam kharab ho gaya hai..toh..
sanj-accha toh batao tum kahan ho mein abhi lene aati hoon..
som-nahi..it's okay..mein bas nikal raha hoon
sanj-kya hua...is everything ok?..tum tensed sound kar rahe ho..
som-ha-haan--sab theek hai..
sanj-accha jaldi ghar pahoncho mein tumse milne aa rahi hoon..
mujhe kuchh class mein samajh nahi aaya 😆 ..socha thoda grp study kar lenge..
som-uumm...ha-haan..umm...mein start karta hoon..theek hai bye
sanj-bye somya..i..l-l-l
som cuts the phone
sanj-kaat diya!?!?!?..mere som ko kya ho gaya hai?
mujhse aise kyun baat kar raha tha?."
.she gets all disturbed..

som to rani-umm tum apni mum kko call kar lo..
rani-ok
umm...
struggling to find the way to handle somya's extra delicate and cool mobile..somya laughs and then asks her for the #..
he dials it for her and gives her the phone..
she talks to her mom and tells she'll be back soon and is stuck in bad weather..she gives back the fone to som and som quickly saves the dialled # as pari walks away to observe the weather..
suddenly it starts to rain..and rani opens her arms wide getting wet..
somy looks at her..
he then walks toweards her as she goes around in circles keeking her face facing the sky..
her salwar kameez begins to get drenched..
and som calls out to her..
rani andar aa jao..thand mein beemar hona hai kya?
rani-somya..yeh baarish kitni pure hai na..aise lagta hai jaise saari duniya ki prob yeh apne saath le jaayegi..
som-haan pari..ab chalo nahi toh hum dono ki mummy humpar aur gussa ho jaayegi..
rani--pari?..pari kaun hai saumaya? tum pehle bhi mujhe us naam se bula rahe the..
som-ummm...yaad nahi aarha lekin..i geuess pari..umm...pata nahi kaun hai pari..mere dimaag mein yeh naam baar baar gunjta hai..
aur tumhe dekhne par mujhe pari naam hi yaad aata hai..shayad tum pari ki tarah lagti ho isliye..(smile)
rani-shy..and smiles..accha!
they laugh..
som-chalo rani ab andar aa jao..
rani-lekin ek baar tum bhi bheeg ke dekho somya!
som-nahi rani..chalo
rani-(acting sad) theek hai ..chalo
somya coming outside towards her..dekho...ab khush?
rani-smiling..and then starts to giggle with somya..as they both are now soaked..
they both quickly run towards the car and wait there..for rain to slow down..they keep looking outside as they feel thoda sa diff as a heart beat begins to skip everytime they look at each other..
then pari says-somya lagta hai barish ab thodi kam ho gayi..
som-haan theek hai..let's go
they drive and itne hum kareeb kaise aa gaye song's played..as they look at each other chup-cupke and smile!
😳

Edited by richa_s - 17 years ago

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