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Scary update who killed dev geet so scared strang that when they went nothing was there
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Scary update who killed dev geet so scared strang that when they went nothing was there


😊 Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago


part 5


Next day geet looked like a machine,she was just working and getting things ready for clg but not once she uttered any word,naina was feeling sad looking at geet but she herself was in dilemma,both left to clg leaving pari who was still in effect of drug,but naina made sure both her frnds who were out of senses had a little food,the moment geet and naina entered clg all gave a look to geet as the news spread like fire,next thing she was called to the principal office,maan who too got the news about mishap wants to talk with her,but as soon as she came she was called for office,as few proffessors were also there along with warden,maan too entered to support geet.naina too accompanied geet knowing her condition,geet was not in a position to answer the questions,let alone normal talk.before entering the office naina pressed geet hand silently assuring she was with geet.geet stood with head hung before them.

Warden started to narrate what happened yday night again before principal,on hearing everything he asked geet what she had to say,but geet kept mum,seeing her not answering all were thinking she did played a prank again.he lost his cool and finally shouted at her.

P:geet even after knowing you were charged in terms of ragging,even after being the reason for a innocent to loose her life few yrs before, yet on your father insistence I gave you and your frnds a chance to study,but seems like you never got a lesson from your doings,u still feel happy hurting others,what u did with dev,u again played a prank on him in forest ya u did something with dev again,like u did yrs before?now speak up,why r u silent now?!!!

His every word was not less than a slap on her face yet she didn't budge,the principal didn't want to cal police again in campus,as meera fiasco was just cooled down,if again their clg name came in news it may earn a black mark,as both dev and his car were missing,they decided to wait for sometym before taking any step,so he warned geet to tell the truth if she did anything wrong,geet was still silent ,so naina took the charge to speak ,she told what geet had witnessed last night,she even said it mayb dev who did the whole drama so that he can went in search of meera,she desperately tried to defend geet saying mayb dev was playing tricks on them,if not there was no way his car and himself will go missing in few minutes,it mayb hardly half an hour for all of them to reach the place where geet said.it did make sense and few suggested to just inform Arjun the happenings and ask him to keep things under wraps.so all the members agreed but one person was still in schok state hearing the words princi just uttered,geet was responsible for someones death,he just wants to hide her in his arms seeing her terrible state.geet did feel his gaze on her but she didn't once look at him,knowing what he wants to know!!!

All went from there towards their class even naina dragged geet with her,,but maan blocked their way in middle ,he asked naina to leave but geet didn't left her hand ,maan again asked her to come with him,but geet was fearing to face the questions which were uninviatable now!!

Maan:geet talk with me plz

Geet:

Maan:tum kuch bologi nahi mein kaise help kahroonga geet!!plz talk with me,what happened

Geet:

Maan:geet,everyone was accusing you on false grounds ,I know just speak up geet...

Geet:woh sach hai maan

Maan:kya sach,khi tum neh dev khey sath prank kiya,he slightly had the idea what she was saying about,but still tried to hear from her...

Geet:nahi,dushri bath that I was charged for murder

Naina:for god sake geet,not only you,we all were equally responsible so stop this blame game,naina lost hearing geet repeating same lines over and over

Geet:uss koh room mein ,maine hi lehkar gayi thi naina..

Naina:but u don't know,that we played trick that tym,it was for fun but that girl had lost it to ruin her life with ours.

Maan who was till now watching both finally asked loosing his control:could anyone b clear,seeing geet still mum naina started to reveal what exactly happened.

Naina:maan sir,it was tym of few yrs back,geet adi pinky yash pari and me r frnds from yrs,we were inseperable we used to play pranks on students just for fun,one such girl named neha,we always helped her in studies yet her scared nature made always try to pick on her,but just on frndly basis not serios ones,on holi day neha was terrified seeing us while she ran from us,she fell in color water geet offered her change of dress as we all carry one as its holi,unaware to geet we all followed as geet left neha in room with dress,pari just made a flash just a flash light like faking neha that we r taking her pics,then pari told in loud voice,but just to hear us not others

Pari:see guys,I have clicked pics of neha!!!!

Yash:really pari plz let me see it

Naina:no,I want to see first!!

Pinky:wow,yaar kitne acche pics hai,pari tuh kya kahregi iss pics kah...

Pari:soch rahi hoon sab koh dhikadhoon,haan agar neha neh meri project complete kiya toh nahi,warna sab koh dhikadhoogi

We though she will come running to us with scared face filled with tears,we all laughed unknown what our talks doing to neha,geet too came looking for us and we just briefed about the prank but none was aware neha will do the thing,which will end not only hers,infact our lifes too,she hanged herself and she wrote we r reason for her death,this lead lot of difficulties on us,mostly effected was geet as its her dress which neha wore,none believed on us,we don't know how she ended up like that,but we were treated as criminals sir,as still u can see principal sir thinks geet was wrong,geet still blames herself for this mishap,sir we r just kids that tym ,our fun landed us here sir,but we swear sir from that day neither me r our group tried any pranks sir,saying neha broked into tears,geet hugged naina tightly .from yrs they were facing this blames and they all were eachothers support.

but maan was in total different emotion,he fisted his palm with such intensity that pierced his skin,but his trance broke with geet words

geet:maan do u think like others too, I am a murderer,but maan we...

maan:shh,geet don't blame yourself,I promise u don't have to bear any more leave all that to me,I will see to it,just relax.i am sure dev was doing all this.

Geet:no,maan dev cant do that,dev was brusied badly,someone attacked him maan,that person wants to hurt me too but I escaped.

Saying she shaked maan arms,to which he winced a bit,geet was alarmed thiking he was hurt,she gave a questioning look to maan,he replied before she dig on things,its nothing geet yday I went on walk backside of our clg,as you know its forest area some thing scratched on my arms .

Geet:maan,lets go to doctor,it mayb poisonous.

Maan:no,no geet he almost shouted making geet and naina frown

Maan:hmm,I am ok the wound was taken care of nothing to worry,ok u relax I will speak to Arjun about dev,saying maan left in hurry leaving both naina and geet in confused state.both moved to their class but they were not in a state to concentrate,adi ,yash pinky too joined geet and gave their support ,geet wants to meet maan but he was not in sight for whole day,she needs to know he was ok,but he was not in clg.

By evening geet to went to her room ,even before she switch on the lights she heared pari moaning ,thinking pari again took drugs and she hates light geet silently moved to washroom to remove her stress,but pari was trying to free herself from the strong grip of the person who just ran the knife on her hands vein,blood was oozing from her hand yet the person grip kept captive her,the death was engulfing her slowly with each drop draining from her body,before she took her last breaths the person left pari seeing her struggle was weaking ,the moment geet was about to step out of washroom,the person too stepped out from the room as if nothing happened,as its evening everyone was just arrived and busy in rooms the corridor was empty making person exit ease even without any trace.

Geet came out and finding the silence in room,she thought pari slept and she swiched on the lights,the moment her eyes fell on pari who was looking at ceiling with wide eyes and her hands bloodied,geet shrieked making every person ran to see whats wrong,everyone stood schoked seeing pari in that state,the warden was quick enough to cal police

TO B CONTINUED...

PRECAP:after answering all the questions of Arjun, geet moved to have a look at maan towards his quarters ,but the room was empty as maan was in washroom she decided to wait for him and her eyes landed on the cloth below bed which had a red stains she slowly removed the cloth and was about to shriek seeing it with blood marks but the knife with blood spots made her rooted to the spot.

Well now I guess I made it clear

1. Why someone wants to harm geet batch

2. Most impotantly who the killer is!!!!????

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago
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THANKS FOR CMNTS DEARIES
I REPLIED TO ALL CMNTS IF BY MISTAKE LEFT ANYONE SRY
IGNORE MISTAKES
BUDDY ME FOR PM
LOVE U
SANJU
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update di!!
Loved it
Though I know the entire plot ur way of writing keeps me hookup to read more
Princi to blamed Geet thinking that it's one of her prank which she pulled
Maan was shocked hearing that Geet had charged filed on her for murder
Naina seeing geet's condition came in rescue of Geet and said may be it's one the prank played by dev
Maan confronted geet
Naina said whole truth abt their past prank which led neha to give her life
Maan said he will be their for Geet and left abruptly leaving Geet and Naina
Pari died !!
Nyc precap !!
😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for update and pm di!!
Will be waiting for the next update!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
why someone's wants to kill Geet batch? hmmm ...may be she has hotty maan with her. And who is the killer? Its maan because only he has killing eyes and smile. lol :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update didi.
But seriously, i felt very ashamed and disappointed with the whole group.

Just because some person is really sensitive and gets nervous and/or scared easily, people should not take advantage of it.

NAturally naina and the whole group is responsible for poor innocent neha's death.

As for geet, she was clueless about that vulgar and dirty prank, so i won't blame her.

But pinky adi pari and yash along with naina should suffer all their lives.

They should get a very bad and harshest punishment. They deliberately made an innocent girl end her life.

I cannot forgive such people even if they spend their entire lives in social service.

Your pranks can get out of hand if they cross their limits.

Everything within a limit is permissible, but limitless pranks are crimes, and perpetrators are criminals.

Please make the whole group rot in a dark dingy prison for ever.

My sympathies are with geet, hope she and maan live everything through.

Wonderful twist, didi. Please update soon.
Edited by turbulence - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
every one blame geet thought she is playing same prank which she did years ago
maan support her
but how he got hurt
n now pari
is maan behind it?
thnx for pm

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