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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Both the parts are awesome loved them ... keep updating soon 😊


Thank you mate. I will update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome work dear👍🏼

Thanks

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read the whole story just now!😃
you've nailed it yaar!👏👍🏼
must say, you really do have a very good sense of humor! oh god, those punch lines you added in between were so, so good!🤣🤣
Kabir and Karthik talking on the topic "Mera baap jallaad hain" and later Kabir saying it out loud was hilarious! 🤪🤣🤣
and vasu and arjun's conversation with their kids.🤣
the first part just cracked me up!🤣
Kirti sad about not being able to tell her parents about her love and not being able to do anything but to agree to what her father says was good, i mean that's how normal people are like! (as the story changes when it turns into the reels from real!)👏😛
Nisha and sukku's constant bickering was fun!🤣
and ramesh's remarks on the capsicum! - A big fat beast wearing a green gown! that's what it is!🤣🤣🤣
and later the Rathore family arriving at gangwal house and then the proposal!😳

eager to see Kabir and Nisha meeting each other!☺️☺️
because Kabir us type ka hi hain and Nisha us type ki bilkul nahi hain! 🤣🤣🤣
eager to see the clash of two completely different people and how they fall for each other!☺️😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice updates👍🏼
Nisha aur sukku kitne badnash hai😆
Waiting for nibir's meeting😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 357159pikachu


Thanks a lot Niha
And yes you are right. i hate capsicum 🤢 and believe me the feeling is mutual between me and capsicum😉
Thanks a lot for sending pms. i owe it u friend. i will be updating it as soon as possible. i had one exam today so i will have some time free. i will see if i can complete it. Thanks a lot for ur ATB. i am sure it would work.
THANKS AGAIN.

no thanku in paagal family😆
i knew u hated capsicum😆

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Chapter-4
Their Meeting

It was evening by now. Laxmi requested Kartik and his family to have dinner at their place. But they were worried about Kabir. Vasu tried explaining this to Laxmi but she asked Vasu to call

Kabir over there.

L- Suku toh ghar par hai nahi. Nisha beta, tu jaakar Kabir ko le Aa.

V- Nahi Laxmi uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Humne usse yahan ka address text kar diya hai.

L- Dekho Vasu, its already late. He might get lost while entering in the streets. Let Nisha go to him. she will bring him safe and sound here.

While Vasu and Laxmi were arguing Nisha was like WILL ANYBODY ASK ME?'

Well, she loves to roam around the streets but to bring a guy home to his parents! Well this was not her choice. He was not small. Laxmi and Vasu were still arguing about the matter.

Nisha spoke in between- "Aunty, mom! I am going! Kartik jiju text me the address of his academy."

Saying so Nisha just left.

N- (To herself, while driving) Yeh mom apne aap ko samjhti kya hain! I mean seriously, I have to get a big guy to our place. Is he this small that he can't find the place? Come on Aaj kal toh chotte bache GPS ke through apni mammi ko dhundh lete hain. Yeh chote bache ko main kyun lene jaaon!

She was babbling to herself when she saw a guy crossing the streets. She applied the brakes suddenly. But it was a bit too late. The guy fell on the ground. It was sure that he was not seriously injured but he might have got a severe sprain in his leg. She parked the scooty to a corner of the road and went to the guy and sat down.

N- Hey! Are you okay?

She asked with concern.

Guy- (DAMN ARROGANTLY) Surely miss after hitting a guy so badly, then leaving him on the road just to park your vehicle and finally after this you are coming back and asking if I a alright!!! These lady drivers don't have common sense forget about driving or traffic sense.

N- Oh Hello mister! You should be thankful that I came back. There something called hit and run which is quite common these days. You should be glad that I didn't leave you here and go away.

Guy- You couldn't have. I have got your vehicle's number. (He gave a smirk)

N- What do you think of yourself Mr. Whatever in the hell you are! You do what you want to, I am leaving you here in this position and wait till someone who is really nice according to you comes and takes you to the hospital. (GETS UP) By the way if you lose your leg by any means. I am not responsible. Good bye.

Saying so she left. the guy called someone and asked him to come. Nisha went to Kartik's house (Kirti took her once) but no one was there. Neither was Kabir in his academy.

N- Ab yeh mahashay kahan hain! Ek hi kaam nahi reh gaya hai meri zindagi mein. Main toh chali iss popat ko jab aana ho wo Aa sakta hai.

Saying so she went back home.

N- Maa Kartik jiju ke bhai wahan nahi the. Maine unke ghar bhi jaakar dekha lekin...

Before she could say anything she heard a groaning sound form the back. She turned and saw Kartik with a guy.

Nisha and Kabir together- You!!!

Ka-(leaving Kartik and walking to her) tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Ni- (puts her hand on her hips) Ye mera ilaka hai. Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Ka- (Smirks) Ilaka kutton ka hota hai. Aur vaise bhi main yahan apni hone wali bhabhi aur unke parivaar se milne aaya hoon.

N- Jo dusron ke ilakon mein aaye vo bhi ussi prajati ka hota hai. Aur kaun teri bhabhi! Yahan par meri behen aur mere jiju ka rishta...

She stopped and realized something and so did Kabir.

Ka and Nisha- Are you!!! Chiii!!!!!!!!!!

Kartik- How do you guys know each other?

N- Know? Jiju this is the most arrogant guy I have ever met!

Ka- I thought that you only did not have common sense but now I realized even your English is hell bad. You used THIS instead on HE! (smirks)

Ni- Control your smirk LOVE, I wanted to tell that you are a thing and not a person. (smirks)

Ka- I wish I never saw you.

N- Feeling's mutual.

Va- what is matter tell us?

Ka- Mom, yeh ladki ki wajah se hi mera accident hua hai aur yeh wahi hai jo mujhe beech sadak par chod aayi thi.

La- Nisha!

N- K kahinke! Apni galti nahi batayega! Mom this guy was so arrogant to me even when I was helping him. that is why I left him.

Va- Kabir!

K-K Kahinki! Tu mujhe maarne ke baad uss scooty ko pehle park kara tha and just left me in the middle of the road.

Va- Kabir!

La- Nisha!

They said together getting frustrated.

Va- Apologise to her! (in a commanding tone)

La- Same goes for you Nisha!

Na and Ka- Never in my wildest dreams

Ka- See now she can't even stop mimicking me!

N- Mimicking you! Good at day dreaming!

Kartik- Lets go and have our food.

Ar- Kabir did you go to the doctor?

Ka- Dad bhai took me.

Kar- The doctor said that I should take rest for a day. it is minor sprain. It will get perfect within 2 days.

Ka- After that I won't even mind running!

All of them chuckled at his statement whereas Nisha looked away.

Ka- Mera koi introduction toh karao! (IN a hildish way)

Va- Sorry sorry Kabir beta! I will introduce you to everyone. Well all of them know you a bit by now but still I will introduce you. (Looking at everyone) So this is my younger son Kabir Kumar.

Kar- (To Kabir) And Kabir he is Ramesh uncle, Kirti's dad.

Kabir bowed down to take Ramesh's blessings.

Ra- Kartik beta ab toh papa bulaane ki aadat daal lo.

Ka- Arre uncle main toh kabse keh raha hoon manta hi nahi hai. (joined Ramesh)

Kartik looked angrily at Kabir. Kabir murmured a sorry.

Kar- She is Laxmi Aun... mom, Kirti's mother.

Everyone smiled at Kartik. Kabir bowed down and took Laxmi's blessings. Laxmi cupped Kabir's face with one hand.

La- Bahut pyaare bacche ho tum.

Kabir smiled cutely.

Va- Isse sar par mat chadana Laxmi warna yeh toh tumhari jaan hi le lega.

Kabir gave an angry look to his mom while she just smirked.

La- Koi baat nahi!

Ka- Aunty you are really great! (Kabir said and hugged her)

Kar- Well, you know her. She is Kirti.

Ka- Haan haan, meri bahuji hain.

Kirti smiled at Kabir.

N- (monologue) Pata nahi kya hai iss idiot mein! I mean like he just talked to me arrogantly and my dad who said that hewould kill the person who hurts me is joining him. Suku mujhe maloon hai mera saath dega. He won't even take a fly hurting me. yeh toh poori badi madhumakhi hai. (smirks)

Kar- This is Suketu, Kirti's brother.

Kabir was about to do a handshake with Suku when Suku said "Arre dost! Aise thodi hi dosti ki shuruvat karte hain. Gale lag yaar!"

Suku said and they hugged each other. Nisha smirked because she knew his brother very well.

Su- (While hugging, slowly) Meri behen Nishu se door rehna warna tere jaise bahut macchar ko kuchla hai maine.

Kabir gulped in fear. Suku broke the hug and smiled. What Suku said was only audible to Kabir.

N- (To herself) Mil gayi warning! (Smirks)

Kartik also found something fishy with Suku's behavior because he would smack anyone would say anything wrong to his sisters. And he was hugging Kabir, who just insulted, rather fought with Nisha.

Kar- She is...

Ka- Nisha (Smirks) Iss bhinbhinati hui makhi ko main main janta hoon.

N- Makhi kisko bola?

Ka- tereko

Kar- (monologue) Kabir is really courageous. He actually dared to speak to the Suketu Gangwal's sister and that too rudely. I love my bro.

Ni- Teri toh!

Va and la- Not again!

Ra- Let us have our food!


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Chapter-5
Some Discussions


All of them had their dinner with some bickering and chatting about the wedding preparations. They distributed the work among the families and the families decided that they would distribute the work within their members accordingly.

The Sagai- Both the families

Sangeet- Both the families

Mehendi- Ramesh and family

Haldi- Both families separately

Wedding- Both families together

Reception- both the families together but more amount by Arjun and family as they could not get equal functions.

Ar- I think its time we should leave. It's already late. We should start the wedding preparations from tomorrow.

Ra- You are right Arjun. And Arjun please inform who is going to do which job so that we can get the arrangements done properly.

Ar- We will surely.

Va- Tomorrow I think the children should go and get a card. It would take time for the printing of the cards as well.

La- You are right Vasundhara. Tomorrow the kids will go and select a card.

Nisha and Kabir looked at each other with NOT AGAIN' expression.

Ni- Mom I have to prepare for an event tomorrow so I cannot go. (she tried making an excuse)

Ka- And mom, tomorrow new students would come so I have to teach them some more basics that I could not teach today. (he tried to do the same)

La- Nisha you cannot lie to me. You are not having any event till the 3rd week of this month and the preparations will start by the next week. I have talked to Viraj and he told me everything.

N- (monologue) Har samay kaam bigaad deta hai ye Viraj.

Nisha just looked down and Kabir giggled.

Va- What are you giggling for Kabir? Come on tell me how are you going to teach with a broken leg? And moreover the doctor has asked you to take rest, not like complete bed rest but still these activities are not allowed. So I dare you to do it. (Vasu gave a stern look to Kabir)

This time Kabir looked down and Nisha giggled.

Ra- So it is final tomorrow morning, the kids are going to get the cards selected.

Ar- We should leave.

They all left.

Nisha's room

N- Uss pehalwan buddhi ke saath main kahi nahi jaungi. Idiot, duffer, moron. I cant really take him even for a minute and I will have to be with him for more than an hour because Kirti wont stop, would she? She would get the most perfect card ever and till that time we will have to stay in the shop. I cant really do that. Oh God! Save me tomorrow!

Saying so she went to sleep.

Kabir's room

K- Uss moti akal wali ke saath main itni der kaise rahunga. She is an idiot. I cant really bear her a second and she would be with me for more than an hour. Well, because Kartik would want to spend more time with Kirti, as much as he can. That is why I love the feeling of love. Khud toh doobte hi ho doosron ko bhi le doobte ho. Oh God! Please save me tomorrow.

Saying so he also went to sleep.

Next morning, by 9 all the children were ready. Kartik decided to pick up Kirti, Nisha and Suku along with Kabir.

Kirti and Nisha were waiting for Kartik as well as for Suku. Kartik didn't come but Suku did.

Ki- Where were you Suku? We have been waiting for you more than half an hour. (complained)

Su- Kirti actually I got a call last night for an audition to be held in Jaipur. These auditions can take me to the film line very easily. I cant miss them. Please can I go?

Ki- Suku, you should go. I mean this is a life time opportunity. And we have nothing today. We are just shopping the cards. You should leave fast. You might get late.

Suku and nisha smiled at her.

Ki- What???? Will you two kiss me now? (cracking a joke)

But that joke became serious one. Nisha kissed on Kirti's right cheeks and Suku kissed on her left cheek and then they shared a group hug.

N- (Still hugging) What will we do when you will be gone?

Su- (Still hugging) You are right Nishu. We are really lucky to have a sister like Kirti. I don't want you to go Kirti.

N- Neither do I!

Ki- Nor do I! but you see that is a part and parcel of life.

They broke the hug and saw Suku having tears in his eyes which off course he did not shed.

Ki- Suku! (cupping his left cheek with her hand)

N- Kya hua Suku? Aise kyun ro raha hai? (cupping his right cheek with her hand)

Su- Yaar tum dono ek din mujhe chod kar chali jaogi. Fir main kya karoonga?

Ki- Aisa kuch nahi hoga. Hum tere dil mein hamesha rahenge.

Kirti said trying to console him but the worst part was she could not console herself anymore. They heard Laxmi calling Kirti. Kirti went away.

Ni- Chinta mat kar! Main tujhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaungi. Jab pyar hi nahi karoongi toh chodkar kaise jaungi!

Su- Nishu pyaar karna galat nahi hai. Galat hai galat insaan se pyaar karna. Galat insaan ko apna banana. Main isiliye tum dono ke saath 24*7 rehta hoon kyonki darr lagta hai mujhe ki main tum dono ko kisi bhi reason se kho na doon. Ab Kirti ka toh ho gaya. Mujhe yakeen hai uska khayal Kartik bahut acchi tarah rakhega but mujhe darr hai tera Nishu. Tu jitni upar se strong banti hai utni hi andar se bholi hai. Kirti ke saath bhi yahi problem thi. That is the reason I cant leave you two alone. I fear it Nishu! Agar tum dono mein se koi bhi udaas bhi hota hai na toh mann karta hai tumhari udasi ke kaaran ko jad se ukhaad kar fhenk doon.

Suku tried expressing his feelings. Nisha straight away hugged him tight and Suku responded it.

N- Suku I am really lucky to have siblings like you. (breaks the hug) Aur chal maan lete hain ki mujhe koi mil gaya aur main uske saath chali gayi. Toh tera kya hoga? Isiliye kehti hoon mujhe ek bhabhi la de. Duniya mein itni saari ladkiyan hai. Sabko apne woh behnon wali nazron se dekhna chodega tabhi toh koi dhundh payega.

Nisha teased Suku and he was all red. Nisha wanted to enjoy further but realizing that Suku was getting late she let him go. Suku went. Kartik came along with Kabir. Kirti and nisha sat in the car with Kirti and Kartik in the front and Kabir and Nisha at the back.


PRECAP- Nibir outing.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

😃exam khatham hua kya

Nahi Niha Exams toh khatam nahi hue hai but i have updated two parts. and i can see curiosity binding u in its glue. i will update next after 21st. that is when my exams end.
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

no thanku in paagal family😆
i knew u hated capsicum😆


Thanks for telling me that Pagal family mein thanks nahi bola jaata hai. SO THANK YOU😉and you really are some mind reader or rather someone who would tell abt the person by reading some matter.😆
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Very nice updates👍🏼

Nisha aur sukku kitne badnash hai😆
Waiting for nibir's meeting😉


Ur wait is over. i have updated 2 parts. and thanks for ur comments. they really do matter. And haan nishu aur sukku aur kabir ki aage masti wali bond dekhne ko mil sakti hai. but obviously that wont be a masti bon nibir because they are the biggest enemies of the town.

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