Originally posted by: swathi17
Finally I read the story...
GD and Diya di...
Both of you did a great job...
I loved the last part of the story...
GD actually I couldn't understand the story at times especially your part bcoz of my language problem...
I am not good in Hindi since I learnt it long back and forgot the language
I found it confusing at some places... Sorry GD it is not your fault. I have a doubt...
Did higher officials like Tiwari and DIG got involved in that case? What about inspector Vikrant? Please try to explain it in English.
Great attempt GD... You have done some research and it really worked well...
Diya di's part was heart touching at the end...
Both deserve to get a great applause 👏👏
Thank you so much GD and Diya di for sharing a wonderful story...
Originally posted by: swathi17
I forgot to mention few things bcoz I was in a hurry to sleep...
The beginning itself was interesting...
I got stuck before the app part due to my laziness 🤔
Yesterday I decided to read it with full swing...
I loved each and every part...
Though I didn't understand some parts I managed to understand the whole story...
GD connected well with Diya di's part...
GD I wish to see some emotional concept in your future stories...
I will try to read your previous stories too... 😊
Thank you so much once again GD and Diya di...🤗
First of All SWATHI Baccha...😃😃
a Big Big Thank You so much that U take out Time and Read this Long story...😳👏👏
Yeah I knew...😃😃
Diya makes this Possible with Her Wonderful Piece of Work...⭐️⭐️
Her Part is always Touching...😳⭐️⭐️
Baccha, APP Part Basically turn Difficult...
so its Not Your fault...😊😊
its My Fault to No make it Realistic and Simple...😒👎🏼
Yeah Inspector Vikrant, Soper Tiwari and Yaashir all are Part of Gang...😊😊
Tiwari mostly giving Information about those People Gang Figure Out having Criminal Background as He is in Police so its easier for Him to get out these People Data...
Super using His Swiss Bank Account, in which People Transit Money for Fulfilling their Supari...
Yaashir Engaging Different New/Old Supari Killers for Killing People in Different ways...
Its really a Big Achievement having New Readers Beta...😳👏👏
again a Big Thank You from Diya and My Side...😳😳
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