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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dreamfanatic


Hunh...jee nahi...😡
Yeh bas parrot clan ki chaal hai bunni ko phasane ki...😭
Explain boss...😛
Who gave whose supari to whom?😆


oops...😲
Didn't I Explain that...
ooohhh...
acha abhi jub Yaashir, CID Team ki Girift mein aata hy na...
wahan sy Parhna...
after 5 minutes...
OK...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
I apologise for being so late 🤔 .. But acha hua I read the whole story in one go 😃 .. Right from the start it was so gripping and full of suspense ⭐️ .. I loved and appreciate your hardwork for collecting so much information about the app part.. 👏 .. When Abhi sir was attacked second time I thought oh no same group attacked him again 😆 but yeh toh khud CID he nikli specially Daya sir 😛 .. Dada, Diya very very good job girls 👏 ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

I apologise for being so late 🤔 .. But acha hua I read the whole story in one go 😃 .. Right from the start it was so gripping and full of suspense ⭐️ .. I loved and appreciate your hardwork for collecting so much information about the app part.. 👏 .. When Abhi sir was attacked second time I thought oh no same group attacked him again 😆 but yeh toh khud CID he nikli specially Daya sir 😛 .. Dada, Diya very very good job girls 👏 ..



Thank you so much Beta kay kisi nay tou parhi...😆😆
Diya bechari tou isi Ghum mein IF Chor gayii...
Halankay Main ny Us ko Buht samjhaya tha kay tum Khud Release karo Story tou Kafi Readership hogi but She...🤔
haan, darasal is APP ka Panga Main nay hee daala tha aur sach yaar, Usy Fix krny mein Mujhy Pagal bana diya...🤪
I really Cant Handle so many things Correctly...👎🏼
Bechari Bacchi ki Story ka Bera-Gharaq hee kr diya Main ny...😭😭
haan, Ye Attack Idea Diya ka tha...👏👏
Sub Kuch hee Diya Baccha nay Likha...👏👏
i Only work on APP, YAASHIR and Tiwari...😉😉
Baaqi Us Bechari nay hee Story ko Gripped rakkha...👏👏
a Big Thank You so much Beta...😳😳
Sach...😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Amazing work
GD and Diya
Keep rocking

But what was the need of fake attack?and They used rubber bullets But was the wooden piece and door of vehicle too were made of Rubber?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: gadhadada



Thank you so much Beta kay kisi nay tou parhi...😆😆
Diya bechari tou isi Ghum mein IF Chor gayii...
Halankay Main ny Us ko Buht samjhaya tha kay tum Khud Release karo Story tou Kafi Readership hogi but She...🤔
haan, darasal is APP ka Panga Main nay hee daala tha aur sach yaar, Usy Fix krny mein Mujhy Pagal bana diya...🤪
I really Cant Handle so many things Correctly...👎🏼
Bechari Bacchi ki Story ka Bera-Gharaq hee kr diya Main ny...😭😭
haan, Ye Attack Idea Diya ka tha...👏👏
Sub Kuch hee Diya Baccha nay Likha...👏👏
i Only work on APP, YAASHIR and Tiwari...😉😉
Baaqi Us Bechari nay hee Story ko Gripped rakkha...👏👏
a Big Thank You so much Beta...😳😳
Sach...😃😃

Diya bechari tou isi Ghum mein IF Chor gayii...

What does this mean?
See we are all there to encourage her works but why did she leave? I hope she will be back soon to IF. GD please tell her to come IF. Sorry GD. It's a very big story so I am getting stuck at a point and couldn't move further. Don't worry I will try to complete reading within this week and I will review it soon. Sorry once again.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hello Everyone...
Diya is here...pehchana na😉

Diya is pareshaan...no, balki very very pareshaan, stressed and burdened with parhayi...
university ke teachers kitna dhamki dete hai...baat baat pe marks kaatne ki baat...
My little brain is overflowing with assignments and exam stuff.That's why I'm not able to come here. Sorry friends...really sorry.

Kya senior...kya EMO post tha...😆
Great...wo second reason hai.😉
Aur mujh se jyada koi dukhi ho raha tha...mai baccha to samjhaane ki koshish ker raha tha (jo kaam mujhe aata bhi nahi bilkul)😔

And THANK YOU SO MUCH all the readers and reviewers for taking out your precious time for this story. Reviews are so much important for encouraging us to write more. Love u all my friends...⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Hello Everyone...

Diya is here...pehchana na😉

Diya is pareshaan...no, balki very very pareshaan, stressed and burdened with parhayi...
university ke teachers kitna dhamki dete hai...baat baat pe marks kaatne ki baat...
My little brain is overflowing with assignments and exam stuff.That's why I'm not able to come here. Sorry friends...really sorry.

Kya senior...kya EMO post tha...😆
Great...wo second reason hai.😉
Aur mujh se jyada koi dukhi ho raha tha...mai baccha to samjhaane ki koshish ker raha tha (jo kaam mujhe aata bhi nahi bilkul)😔

And THANK YOU SO MUCH all the readers and reviewers for taking out your precious time for this story. Reviews are so much important for encouraging us to write more. Love u all my friends...⭐️


Hope now Some DUKHI Baachas, feeling Relaxed...😳😆
SWATHI, its TRP Tactice...😈😎
ab kuch tou FW sy seekhein na...😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
My apologies for being late, but a great story GD and Diya!!! I enjoyed the suspense and am I ever so glad that I read it all in one go instead of having to wait for parts to be uploaded. 😆 The app was an interesting part. And the ending...sweet! Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: KS_Minion

My apologies for being late, but a great story GD and Diya!!! I enjoyed the suspense and am I ever so glad that I read it all in one go instead of having to wait for parts to be uploaded. 😆 The app was an interesting part. And the ending...sweet! Thank you!



O...😲
a Biggi Thank you Yaar...😳😳
I m really Feeling Sad for Diya Baccha as She is Expecting so much Readers and here, Few Reads it (Sadly)...
Yeah, We Both are Trying to give Something Enjoyable either in Suspense side or Emotional View or Investigative Stuff...😳👏
its really Lovable Experience to Work with such Talented Baccha who gives so many Nice Lesson...🤗👏👏
its really DIYA Extra Skills makes Possible for this Ride...⭐️⭐️
a Biggest Thank You so much Yaar for Reading and Praising it...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Finally I read the story...
GD and Diya di...
Both of you did a great job...
I loved the last part of the story...
GD actually I couldn't understand the story at times especially your part bcoz of my language problem...
I am not good in Hindi since I learnt it long back and forgot the language
I found it confusing at some places... Sorry GD it is not your fault. I have a doubt...
Did higher officials like Tiwari and DIG got involved in that case? What about inspector Vikrant? Please try to explain it in English.
Great attempt GD... You have done some research and it really worked well...
Diya di's part was heart touching at the end...
Both deserve to get a great applause 👏👏
Thank you so much GD and Diya di for sharing a wonderful story...

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