14 Feburary - Swasan Raglak - Os

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A/N- hi all I know valentines day is far away but once an idea pops up in my head I can't resist.. so here I present to you all a short love story of eternal love...
Two hearts which beat as one... Two different bodies yet a single soul.. pls do leave replies , criticize point out mistakes.. if u feel confused about anything leave questions I will answer them definitely ...but do leave replies... Waiting for it.
Kindly do not copy the updates. They r written by pouring loads of feelings...
Loads of Love.
Harshita

14 February
He leaning on his stick n slowly pacing here n there stood in the hospital corridor... His son requested him to sit but he denied ..
Few hours later-
Doctor came n informed him.. they couldn't save his wife... Moisture formed in his eyes now covered with thick glasses... All were shocked numb n dumbstruck but he wiping his tears started to move slowly inside...
His son ran behind him...
"Paap.." he called him from behind but he showed his hand indicating he was fine...
His son stayed glued to his place .. weeping n crying missing her mother.. regretting her death...
The old man giving his whole weight on his stick slowly moved to her room.. he moved closer to her dead body.. n slowly touched her hand... It was wrinkled n cold... He slowly pulled a stool n sat by her side... He pecked her hand.. n caressed her pale old cod wrinkled face...
He bend himself n pecked her forehead.. he rested his head on her head ... Her body was getting wet due to his tears but unfortunately this time she couldn't feel them.. or rather couldn't wipe them.
He remembered how much special he used make this day ..."14 Feburary" for her... Since they met... None other Day of this valentine week he remembered or celebrated but only this event... It Started from his early days .. he wasn't that stable man... All he could manage to get from his Petit first salary was a white coffee mug.. printed with 2 hearts n a love quotation..." Today Tomorrow Always... I will Love U Forever and Ever and Ever..." He had gifted it in a park.. she wore a Red knee length dress ... Her long straight black silky hair which were left free that day flew again and again... Covering her beautiful face .. hampering his view ... He simply moved his hand n tug them behind her ear.. All he could see was her big beautiful eyes conveying happiness... It was a small inexpensive gift... Yet her lips were curled into a million dollar smile... Overwhelmed with his sweet short gesture she pecked his cheek giving him a shiver.. he turned to see her... Her cheeks flush crimson red... Before his mind could register n digest the event ... She was gone... He left a deep breath... Yes he had forgotten to breathe for a few seconds... His heart had Skipped uncountable beats... He sat on the bench long smiling like an idiot ... Reminding and replaying the event again n again in his mind...

It continued the next year as well... This time the gift was for his wife... his girlfriend turned wife.. it took him long hours... Actually long hours to bake a Red Velvet Cake for her... With his weak culinary skills he managed to bake an edible cake... It wasn't a material gift .. n her eyes reflected immense content... She was surprised by this... Today too she wore a Red a red salwar n matching white kutra .. complemented by her red pearl chunri... She was next to a kid enjoying the cake... She offered him the cake... When he pulled her close.. her lips covered with the fine particles of cake helped him get his share...
Time flew within a blink of eye... The next valentine's day... They surrounded by beautiful vallies mountains rivers n waterfalls of Shimla... She wore a Red Saree this time... A platinum and gold chain... He tied it around her neck ... Standing behind her... His eyes fell on her white milky back.. reveled by her deep Blouse ... She blushed due to his intense gaze...
Years passed... The another most special Valentine's day was his Unborn baby.. 4 months before his baby was born... They both sat on the sea shore... They weren't talking to eachother but her Baby bump... He never missed a chance to tease her... He teased her saying now he will miss her sexy waist.. she pouted .. her nose turned red ... He smiled at her childish act.. he moved to her cheek n pecked it leaving her all surprised.. she smiled...
"Sorry .." he slowly whispered in her ear... She smiled back to him... N he pulled her in his embrace...
"I love you" he slowly spoke...
"Love u too,3 ,4 & infinity..." She spoke in her melodious voice... Causing music in his ears...
He placed his lips on his hairline giving a peck...
They took deep breaths , inhaling the cool sea Breeze... N absorbing the musically rhythmic movement of waves hitting the shore... Giving them immense peace...

Another valentine day approached ... This time he was walking to n fro n the balcony of his room ... Patting the back of his champ .. his son... Making her gift to him sleep peacefully... He moved in with the baby n touched her forehead.. her fever went down... He turned around... When she held his hand...
"Did he sleep??" She quized him... in a low voice...
"Yes .. u don't worry... Take care...N sleep my Jaan.." he replied ... N bend down..He rubbed his cheeks on her soft ones... She pecked his cheek... He moved back .. n they smiled at eachother...
He moved to the other side of the bed.. rested on his side.. made his son sleep in b/w them..She turned to him.. they both patted the baby... Her head lied on the pillow... N hiis head rest on the headrest.. they shared an eyelock...when she wispred..."Won't u gift me something today..."
He smiled n moved to his drawer n pulled a royal blue box out... He moved to her side.. n helped her sit... He sat in front of her on the bed... She looked at him with her big eyes... Her face looking angelic in the pale moonlight... He opened the box.. it had two golden Bangles.. it was worked with Red Amber beads ... He held her hands.. they had temperature due to fever.. he slid the bangles one in each hand... N held her beautiful hands in his.. giving a soft peck on them...
"And now I want my gift" he saying this smiled mischievously at her...
She smiled n moved forward.. lifted her neck a bit .. placing her warm lips on his... This was his gift for this valentine day...

Years passed n slowly his valentine day had two people... His wife n his son.. his 2 valentines on a single day .. dated at the same time...
His old lips curved with their old memories of three of them...
When he felt a touch on his lap... it was his son... Whose head rested in his lap... Making it wet due to Tears.. his gaze shifted to him... He caressed his hair... N face his old hand roamed on his fresh young skin wiping his tears away... giving him strength... When again his thoughts flew to this evening few hours back... His most dreatful valentine day...
"Jaan.. " she said panting... N keeping her hands on her week knees she continued.."I .. I can't walk more.."
He supported her n made her sit there on the stair case on the way to their terrace.. he taking support from the railing sat by her side...
"Jaan" he called her .. she lifted her eyes to him...
"Say" she asked him continue...
"U r looking .. beautiful.. " he said slowly in his old shivering weak voice.. she smiled at him.. her big eyes gazed at him.. showed her content just the way they did years back... He looked at her once again... She wore a Red Salwar , White Kurti, Red Perl Chunri.. like she wore years back... Her hair... They weren't they same.. they were gray mixed with black... Her hands skin was wrinkled.. her hands beautifully accessorized with the Red Amber Bead Bangles He gifted.. Her neck delicately decorated with the chain he gifted her...
Soon she stood up with his support n he with his stick... He held her hand n moved to the terrace .. beautifully decorated with Red N white Flowers...
He made her sit on a chair.. n presented her a cake he baked... Like he did years back...
He served her.. n then forwarded his hand to take his share, when she held his hand...
"Y u are taking ur share from there.. take it the way u used to take it earlier..." She raised her eyebrows... He smiled placed his lips on his... Grabbing his share...
"How was it..." She quized...
"As tasty as it was years back..." He spoke n giggled along with her...
He served her coffe in the Same mug he gifted her years back...
"Well Jaan tell me u have kept this cup for so long... " He asked her while pouring her favourite coffee in the mug...
"Y not.. " she replied "it was ur first gift to me..."
He smiled n forwarded the coffee to her...He was about to capture his cup when she stopped him..
"Jaan" she interrupted
"Say" he replied
"Y r u pouring ur coffee separately... Can't we have it together..." She smiled at him...
"Y not.." he replied..N held the cup...
He kept his hands on hers.. made her sip the coffee n vice versa
Soon after it they were sitting I n eachother's embrace when he felt all her weight on him... She fell unconscious on his chest ..
He shouted when his son came running... N they rushed to the hospital...
He looked at her once again ... When slowly... His own breath slowered down... His eyes turned heavy n his hand stopped caressing his son's hair n face...
He slept forever resting his head on hers ...
On his way to meet her once again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshu...
It was heart warming.. touching ..update..i really was engrossed in it...imagined old n young swasan...their everlasting love for each other..they lived..loved n laughed together...stay with each other in happie n tough situation...health n sickness...n died together...it was soo touching n magicsl as well...loved it baby...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshu...

It was heart warming.. touching ..update..i really was engrossed in it...imagined old n young swasan...their everlasting love for each other..they lived..loved n laughed together...stay with each other in happie n tough situation...health n sickness...n died together...it was soo touching n magicsl as well...loved it baby...

Talia

Thanks for reading and replying Talia
Glad you liked it
Well Baawre part 9 .. l am still waiting for your reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow this was beautiful
no words... excellent
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Harshita,
A very beautiful and moving tale, of a love that death cannot touch. I liked it very very much.

Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res Harshi.😳
Unresed dearest.😃
This was such an heart warming, heart touching, emotional and soulful OS.👏 Each and every description was so beautifully written by u.👏 U know, by the end of the story, I was having tears of joy after reading this wonderful OS.😳 I loved it.❤️ Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed dear.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey harshu..
Ll read when my exams get over😳

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