~~Shivika TS~~PYAAR REBOOTED~~Authors Note~~page 8~~(Completed)

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~~Shivika TS~~PYAAR REBOOTED~~

Part 1:


Shivaay and Anika had been married for a month. Both loved each other madly but never accepted the fact in front of family. The family though knew how madly in love the two were.

Shivaay had been away on a business tour for 10 long days. Both were missing each others company and their nok-jhoks . On the 9th day he had became free earlier than
expected. So he thought of surprising the family specifically Anika. He had to
coordinate with someone from the family so he choose Om.

Om was with Rudra when Shivaay informed him and both came up with the idea of giving the
lovebirds some space. As it is the family was going to attend a wedding at a
neighbouring city. They made sure Anika stayed back and also told her of Shivaay's surprise return so that she could surprise him.

The two of them also included Daadi in the plan. Anika made an excuse of sprain in her
ankle and throat infection. Jhanvi dint want to leave Anika in that condition
but Anika convinced her that she would be fine and that it was only a matter of
a day. And they left.


Anika-"Aaj toh bahut mazaa aayega aane do us baagad bille ko..!!" she said excitedly to herself with a wide wicked smile on her face."Mujhse baat karne kii fursat nahi hain naa..!! Ab dehkna mera khidki to jawaab..!!...she claps excitedly thinking of her plan.



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Rudra-"Aap ko kya lagta hainAnika Di kya surprise dengi bhaiya koo?"

Om-"I have no idea, I hope surprise de shock nahi..!! "

Rudra-"Don't worry O... Bhaiya humko thank you bolne
waale hain...!!"

Om looking at Rudra-"I just hope sooo..pehli baar tere idea ko apply kia hai kuch gadbad
hui naa toh.."

Rudra-"Offo bhaiya...kya aap bhi always negative...Rudra ka idea hai toh chalega nahi daudega..."

Rudra sees that Om is still tensed.

Rudra-"Offo bhaiya..abhi tension lene se kya matlab...maine toh kaha thaa kii
hum wahin chupkar unpar nazar rakhte hain...magar aap.."
He is cut off by Om's angry glare.

Rudra-"okk..."

Om-"I hope Ankia koi raita nahi phelaye..."lost in thoughts.

Rudra shocked at his words and then smiles-"Hey O watch that language.." he says in Shivaay's style.
Only then does Om realis what he said...and shakes his head.."Anika ka asar toh hum sab
par ho raha hai..!!"


Rudra chuckles.

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10pm at Oberoi Mansion:


Shivaay enters to find everything dark.

"Phat the wuck..!! Itna andhera kyun hai..!! He calls the security but no one
responds.

He sighs and calls out.."Koi Hai..!!"

No response.


To himself:-"What the hell Om bhul toh nahi gaya..."

Tries calling Om but switched off..then tries Rudras no. switched off..!

"Yeh ho kya raha hain."

He switches on the flash light and walks towards his room. He suddenly feels
some movement behind him and turns to find no one. He looks straight and walks
towards his room. Yet again he feels some movement behind him this time along
with some sound.

"Kaun hai wahan.." he says with drops of sweat forming on his head.

He turns to look straight and takes a few steps. With the windows opens and the
gushing sound of the wind the atmosphere feels creepy. His phone beeps suddenly,
he almost throws the phone down but catches it in time .

"Phew...Mental Strength Shivaay mental strength" he reminds himself.Probably they are playing
a trick on you.He tells himself.

The message was from Om:

"Sorry Shivaay...But hum sab ko Khannaas
ke yahan shaadi attend karni thi. Maine koshish kii taalne kii par nahi talli
aur Anika toh shaadi ke liye bahut excited thii so we left. Don't worry we will
be back by tomorrow evening.In flight."

Shivaay reads that message with a sigh.

And turns to walk towards his room and yet again there was a movement with a
thud sound coming from the kitchen. Shivaay was shocked, gulping he moves
towards the kitchen.He tries switching on the corridor switches but in vain.

He finally enters the kitchen to find some scary voice playing on a mini-tape player.

"What the hell...Jarur Anika chodke gayi hogi...mujhe darane ke liye..." looking at
the small tape-player.."Maine isse nahi darne waala jaan..!!" he smiles.

"What the hell did I just say Jaan..no..Anika...rather Paanika" he says with a
chuckle to himself.

He moves towards his room with long strides.He goes to the drawer and brings out the
candles and lights them, Wondering what to do about the power cut.

He chucks his phone on the bed and removes his blazer. As soon as he turns to keep the
blazer he sees a figure standing with a candle with hair all over the face.

He moves behind hitting the table.."Phat the wuck..!!"

Scared to the core..."tttuuummm...kkkaaauuunnn..."

The figure just moves closer.He gets scared and turns towards the table to
finds a weapon for defence then picking up a vase turns.

The figure was gone.He sighs.Thinks for a moment and then realisation dawns him.

"Look guys I know its all of you playing this dirty trick on me...huuhh...maine inn cheap
tricks see nahi darne wala..."

No reponse.


Gulps looking around.

He notices a scary mask hanging on the glass window which wasn't there before.
He looks the other way to find a still scarier mask on the door.

*Splash.



There is a sound, seemed like someone fell into the pool.

He rushes to the poolside.



P.S

Please do leave your reviews and comments.
Hope you all like it.😊


Part 2




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---Angel--- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
RES😳
...UnresšŸ˜†

This part is so brilliant!
Haye my ShivIka are in love
And OmRu are a part of it!šŸ˜‰
My AniRudKara have scared ShivaayšŸ˜†
The poor guy doesn't know what's going onšŸ˜†
Your description of the house was amazingšŸ‘
Rudra is so cute😳
He wanted to keep an eye on his bhaiya and bhabhi😳
And my Omie is just loveā¤ļø
I can't wait for the next part!
I am pretty sure there is some ShivIka romancešŸ˜‰
Do continue soon dearšŸ¤—
Edited by ...Angels... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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brilliant..
Haaye.. ShivIka are in so much love but doesnt admit it.
Both Shivaay and Annika plan to syrprise each other..
wow..
Shivaay toh bohut darr chuka hai..
Good Lord!!! Annika ka plan toh sach mein khirki torh plan nikla.
continue sooonish...
thanks for the pm.
minamma thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehe
Shivaay singh oberoi ko darana aasan h
pritzz thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Omg wow... shivika in love along with nok-jhok ausum... please continue ur ff.. I wanna know what happens next...
Tanu156 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Oh so good ...can't wait to read next😃
wafa.M thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
nice...Shivay darr gaya...Om was so right bechare SSO ko surprise nahi shock de rahi hai Anika...Do continue soon :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

RES😳

...UnresšŸ˜†

This part is so brilliant!
Haye my ShivIka are in love
And OmRu are a part of it!šŸ˜‰
My AniRudKara have scared ShivaayšŸ˜†
The poor guy doesn't know what's going onšŸ˜†
Your description of the house was amazingšŸ‘
Rudra is so cute😳
He wanted to keep an eye on his bhaiya and bhabhi😳
And my Omie is just loveā¤ļø
I can't wait for the next part!
I am pretty sure there is some ShivIka romancešŸ˜‰
Do continue soon dearšŸ¤—



THANK YOU SO MUCH ANGEL 😳 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

brilliant..
Haaye.. ShivIka are in so much love but doesnt admit it.
Both Shivaay and Annika plan to syrprise each other..
wow..
Shivaay toh bohut darr chuka hai..
Good Lord!!! Annika ka plan toh sach mein khirki torh plan nikla.
continue sooonish...
thanks for the pm.



Thanks for the awsome comment... 😊
floral thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its simply awesome
loved it very much
om was so right anika is giving sso a huge shock
plzz do continue soon

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