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rkbaani

@rkbaani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I WAS A SHAYARI WRITER IN MY COLLEGE TIMES BUT FROM MANY DAYS I HAD NOT WRITTEN ANY BUT AFTER READING RAMYA'S POEM THE SHAYAR INSIDE ME WOKE UP.

SO THIS IS A SHAAYARI FROM SUMAN'S POINT OF VIEW...

Beete pal wapas aa nahi sakte,
Sukhe phoolon ko wapas khila nahi sakte,
Kabhi kabhi lagta hai aap hamein bhul gaye,
par dil kehta hai k aap hamein bhula nahi sakte.

Edited by rkbaani - 9 years ago

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Palak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#2

wow i like last line "par dil kehta hai k aap hamein bhula nahi sakte"❤️ 😊

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Good stuff hon!

You should write often!

😳

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Reshma Ahmed

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It's lovely. Don't let the shayar in you sleep now 😛 Keep them coming.

Edited by Perpetuity - 9 years ago

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#5

It's lovely baani especially last line...

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Ramya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#6

Lovely work bani! And you nailed it in the last line!! 👏

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-Ishani-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank You so much...I'll try do write more -baani

As most of you know I am her sister and her 10 posts got finished as she is a newbie so she said me to post it.

Edited by ishabani - 9 years ago

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Chaits_04

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lovely shayari👏

You should write more.

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