Innocent love- Nali FF chapter 13( new chapter ) on page 3

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Hey guys so I fell in love with the nandu character. And I think him and Kali would make a nice pair. So here I am writing my first story of them.some people might not lime the pair... but I will take my chance.


Summary: after yug death Kali decides to leave the house taking her baby with her. On the road she meets nandu who declared that he will take care of her after blaming himself for yug death. See how these two unlikely pair come to depend on each other and become each other strength.


Index

Prologue: page 1
Chapter 1; page 1
Chapter 2; page 1
Chapter 3; page 1
Chapter 4; page 2
Chapter 5; page 2
Chapter 6; page 2
Chapter 7; page 2
Chapter 8; page 2
Chapter 9: page 2
Chapter 10; page 2
Chapter 11; page 2
Chapter 12; page 3
Chapter 13; page 3


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg Yug is dead 😲
Honestly I love kayu and want kayu to be together. 😊
Anyways, No offence to Nandu and Kali story dear .😊 Al the best for ur first story 😊
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All the best for your first story 😊
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Prologue


Nandu desperately tries to save yug. He searched for anything, but he couldn't find. He told yug he will be back with help. Yug nod, while desperately searching for something to use in his car. He tried breaking the windows with his foot, but it wouldn't crack. When he realize nothing was working, he tap on the glass..shouting. for help.

Elsewhere, nandu ran as fast as he can shouting for help. He says accident...come...help. the people look at him like he was crazy. They payed him no mind and continue what they we're doing. He tried demonstrating with his hands, but people just laugh. Nandu frown, he says " yug...danger" but no one listen.

Dejected he turn to walk back to yug when he sees kali. He says god has answer my prayer again. He was about to call her when he saw a car heading towards her, and hit her and her daughter. Surprise he ran to catch the baby. Kali scream while getting up. She watch as nandu catch naina, before saying " baby lucky...nandu was around...or baby would have been squash on the floor" when he said this he demonstrate with his hand, the baby stare at him before grabbing his hand holding it.

He soften before smiling. Kali quickly ran to them, grabbing naina. She cried while hugging and kissing her. Nandu says " bride has nothing to worry about, nandu saves baby"

Kali thank him, but nandu says it was no trouble... he would do anything for her. Suddenly nandu jump hearing car. He suddenly remember yug. Quickly he says to Kali " come quick...yug...accident "

" what?!" " how?!"

Nandu shrug before running leading the way. By that timeYug was unconsious. When they got there Kali calls for Yug, she calls his name, but their was no response. Suddenly the car exploded. Nandu quickly move Kali and her baby shielding them. Kali watching The car explode starts to shake with tears coming out of her eyes, " Yug!!"she screams before fainting

Nandu sniffs, he says " I couldn't save my friend, now my bride is depress... what should I do ramji?"

Elsewhere, gauri desperetly tries to reach yug, but his phone went straight to voice mail. She says something is not right.
while pacing she ran to ramji statue and pray. She wince when she accidently Cut herself. " oh God, this is not good. Something must have happend to Yug " she says worriedly

To be continued...
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Chapter 1

Nandu while watching Kali says " bride always sleeping when we meet. When will bride finally talk to me"

His mom told him to let her rest. And to stop bothering her before going to make lunch. nandu pout He says " I want to talk to bride, hear her voice. And make her smile, but how can I...if bride sleeps all the time" he says

suddenly He got an idea, " I will bring bride many flowers so when she wakes up, bride will be happy", he quickly got up, but stop when he saw the baby awake looking at him. He says " I can't leave you here, so I will take you so we can make bride happy", he grab the baby and tie her to him before leaving. Once he step foot outside, Kali moved mumbling yug.

She woke up and sat up. She look around wondering where she was before remembering what happend. " yug" she cries, she says why does things always happen to her. First her love then her baby and now yug. She says why make me live, if all you will do is make me suffer...ramji. she says what will i do now, what about naina. Speaking of her daughter, she turn searching for her, when she didnt see her on the bed, she got up and look around panicking.

Her mother instinct kicked in. Nandu mother seeing her awake was about to tell her to come eat when she demand to know where her child was. She told kali not to worry and that naina is with nandu. This did not make her relax. She asks where he took her daughter, and she shrug. Kali scream saying if anything happen to her child, she wont spare them.

His mother tried reasoning with her, by ressurring her, telling her that nandu is very responsible. But Kali refuse to listen. Just then the door open, and nandu walk in with naina who was making cute baby noises. Nandu brought many flower's, he says bride will love these. He look up to see Kali standing there, he walk to her excitedly to give her the gift when Kali slaps him.

Surprising him and his mom " bride slaps nandu?!" He says touching his cheeks

Kali grabs naina hugging her before glaring at him " how dare you try to take her away, she cried. Confused nandu tries explaining, but she wouldn't listen. " dont you ever touch my daughter...you hear" She says taking her daughter. She walk right pass nandu before leaving with her daughter, Going back to her place,


nandu says " bride leaving me again."

" let her go. She's not yours nandu, shes someone else.

To be continue...

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Chapter 2


Kali walk in the house while holding naina. The whole family turn to see her, manjima walk to her before asking if shes seen yug. She says they havent seen him since he left the house. " gauri tried his phone...but his not picking up"

Kali look away holding back her tears. Majima saw this and ask her if she knew anything. She look at her and told her what happend. The whole family was shock. Yug dadi says she must be lying. Kali says she wouldnt lie about this. She says if you dont believe me then ask nan-, she stop what she was about to say when she remember what happend earlier.

Vishwa says kali must have harm yug. After all shes angry because yug married gauri. Kali denies it...and majima second that. She says she believe kali. Yug dadi says " so you believe that my grandson is dead" she says raising her voice

Majima was about to respond when inspector came in. He remove his hat before telling them the bad news. Yug dadi almost fainted, while majima cover her mouth in shock. Gauri throw something on the floor devastated.

She look at kali who was standing their rocking her baby before walking to her. " are you happy now" she says confusing kali

" you've taken everything from me, and now my husband. Congrats kali you've won, now you have something that will remind you of yug"

Kali upset says " i didnt do anything. Dont take your anger out on me just because fate was horrible to you. You got my husband while i only have my child. You have the title as his wife, while I'm just his baby mother. What wrong have i done. If anything fate wrong me by putting you in my life."

When she said this gauri slaps kali " GET OUT!! ..GEt OUT" she screams

Vishwah told her to calm down. But she refused...saying she wont be sleeping in the same house as her husband murderer. Kali says she wasnt planning on staying since she has nothing left in the house. Majima says she dont mean that, she says she do. She says she will be leaving with naina. Gauri told her to go...and to never set foot in her house.

Kali turn to leave, she sush naina while leaving , ignoring majima call.she says " one day i will come back, and take reveng for yug and her." she says determined

To be continued...
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Chapter 3


Kali sadly walks away thinking of everything. She let the tears fall, landing on naina. Naina look at her and cry, ki says " dont worry I'm here, nothing will happen to you", she walk until she saw a bench there she sat down. The wind caressing her hair, while she atrempts to put it behind her earlob.

Nandu eating saw kali. He smile with joy, he says ramji you always know how to make me happy. He held on to the ganesh statue before walking to kali. " hello wife, nandu finally found you." he says when kali didnt respond he look at the baby in the bundle confuse " why are you holding this baby again?"

Kali look at him before telling him to go away. Nandu refused saying " wife needs nandu to take care of her. I wont go"

Kali angry says " I'm not your wife, i will never be. I'm already married, cant you see"

" we took rounds"

" i was unconsious"

" lord ganesh is never wrong. I prayed to him to send me a wife, you are it" he says twitching a little

Kali sigh, she says why cant he get it that I'm married to yu- , kali stops when she realize shes a widow now. She sadly cries. Nandu tries to cheer her up, but she kept crying. He search for something anything until he came across a men selling food and drinks . He says in his head, she's probably hungry. I will get her food.

He told kali to wait, but she didnt hear him, she was to busy moaning. Nandu says " i will make you happy again"

He quickly pay for the food and milk before walking to kali. He says " nandu brought food... Y-you should eat"

Kali says she wasnt hungry, but she soon eat her words when her stomach growl. Nandu laughs making her turn red out of embarrassment. He says amma says that girls are very weird. And shes right, thats why we should treate them with care. Kali look at him before grabbing the food to eat.

Nandu says " i will take you to your new home after food. You will be with nandu forever"

Kali stops eating " i cant stay with you"

Nandu frown " why not?"

" because im not your wife, I'm already taken by yug"

Nandu becomes angry, he hits his head and twitch " H-how can how can yug be your husband when his dead?" when he aaid this kali got angry and slaps him. He puts his hand on his cheek...shock. She thank him for the food before saying shes leaving. nandu for the second time today was slapped. He says how many time will i get slapped. Is this how marriage is like, always getting slap.

Kali honestly didnt know where to go. She sigh, before she found another bench. Their she lay down with naina, she says " dont worry baby, kali will find us a good home. I wont rest until i do, and then take my revenge on those who hurt me and kill yug.
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Chapter 4

Kali was once again by the bench sleeping. This has been her routin. Someone walk to her and wrap their shirt around her, before sitting down to sleep. This has been the same routine everyday with kali unaware. When she wakes up, she finds a shirt on her. " dont worry naina, today i will find a job"

She walk around holding naina before stoping at a restaurant. She spoke to the manager asking if they we're hiring.. They said they we're fully staff. Kali sadly turn to leave, naina stares at the restaurant before she giggled when tje men came back out. " miss ...wait"

" yes?!"

" do you still want the job?"

Kali surprise says " i thought you we're full staffed"

" well one of the waitress just fell I'll and now shes on her way to the hospital. We could really use help"

Kali thought about it. She says she will do it, but her baby needs to be near her. She men hesitate before agreeing. He says if she would be willing to work now. Kali says ok.

Elsewhere, the family were getting ready for yug ceremony. Vishwa knocks on gauri door telling her to come out. She open the door wearing her sleepwear. Vishwa says " why arnt you wearing white?"

" because I'm not a widow, yug is not dead...but alive"

Vishwa look at gauri like she was crazy " what nonsense are you saying, the police even said his dead."

Gauri upset cover her ears.she says " dont you dare say that, yug is alive. He will come back...i know he will"

Manji coming up says " yug is dead...please stop this drama and come downstairs.

Yug dadi says " the poor girl has gone crazy, i wouldnt blame her ...first her daughter and now her husband"

" thats no excuse for her not to dress for the funeral" manji says

Gauri frustrated told them to leave her alone before going in the room locking it. Vishwa knock telling her to get out and face reality. He says dont ruin your life moaning over yug. Manji glares at vishwa, she says a men as heartless as yourself wouldnt understand a women pain. Vishwa says what is she saying.

Manji ignore him and walk away. Dadi says " we will just have to do the ceremony without her" she told everyone to head out, vishwa protested, but went along. While the ceremony was going on gauri aas crying her eyes out. Her mascare still dry on her face and her hair was a mess. She kept repeating saying yug alive while rocking herself.

Meanwhile, after a job well done.the manager gave kali money to spend. And told her to come the next day. She thank him before going to buy food. Then she fed naina milk. She says , " it wont be long before we have a place to sleep. This is a knew begining for us. I will make sure you are well taken care of."

Kali was sitting by the river area, with naina. She sadly thought of yug, before singing her song. While doing this she was unaware of a bike speeding towards her. The men on the broken bike falls off. He look to see the bike heading to kali. He scream to get her attention, but it was to late. The bike hit her making her and naina fall in the water.

The people watching scream for help. While kali tried to breath, she tried reaching for naina , and even call her name. Making water enter her mouth. She cough while holding her throat. She pray to ramji to save her and naina before going unconsious.

To be continue...
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Chapter 5


The people gather the area, whispering amongst one another. Nandu while searching for his wife sigh. He says " ramji once again I lost my wife, why do you do this to me. Why can't you let me be with her" he cries

Suddenly he heard two people passing by " poor thing she fell in the water with her child"

" is she alive?"

" we don't know,she fell to deep"

Nandu thought about it, baby...female...no-no, it's not my wife...right?" He says before running to the direction they said.

When he reached he saw people around the river. He took his shirt of and shoes and dive in. He search for Kali, but he couldn't find her. He came back up for air and dive back down. Suddenly he saw something shining bright. Curious he swam towards it. He smile when he saw Kali. He quickly grab her and took her to the surface, the people helped pull them up.

Someone said what about the baby. Nandu told them to look after her before diving back in. He search further down before coming back to the surface. He went to another area and laugh when he saw naina stuck to a branch. Turns out her diaper saved her, getting her stuck to the branch. He swam to her before saying " Nandu found you, n-now wife won't be upset" he says grabbing her.

Naina grab Nandu hair before laughing with joy. Nandu cries before saying " I guess baby happy to see Nandu too"

He took the baby and brought her back to the now conscious Kali. When she saw Naina she grab her and embrace her with love. Nandu grin, " wife happy then I'm happy"

Kali look at him shirtless before blushing and looking down. " thank you Nandu, you save two life today. I don't know how to repay you"

Nandu thought about it before saying " live with me, Nandu feels sad that he couldn't save yug, that's why Nandu wants to take responsibility for what he did "

Kali told him it wasn't his fault. She says he tried that's all that matter. Still Nandu regrets it, he told Kali the only way he will repent is by taking her in. Kali shook her head, indicating no. Nandu says why?, and Kali says because you see me as your wife, she says the only way I ca n live with you is when you stop seeing me as your wife, but instead a friend . Nandu frown, " if you can see y-yug as your husband, why not nandu."

Kali look at the necklace before holding it " I fell in love with yug, thats why my heart acknowledge him "

Nandu says " you don't love Nandu?"

" no I don't"

Nandu Wanted to cry, but he held his tears, he says he fell for her the first time he saw her. He says she was a goddess to him"

Kali told him he doesn't love her, maybe feel attractive to her, but it's not love. Nandu move towards Kalpi. He got on his knees and put her hand on his heart, Kalpi surprise asks what he was doing, Nandu says " do you hear my heart, Nandu might be slow, but Nandu doesn't joke about love"

He says " Nandu has always been missing something, and now I found it. Wont you give Nandu a chance"

Kali looks away " I'm sorry I can't"

" is it because I'm not normal, someone told me people like me, won't ever get married. Is that why you won't accept me... because I'm special"

Kali grab his hand, but Nandu let it go. " I will leave now, I won't bother wife again", Kali unease calls for him, but he ignore her. Naina seeing her distress starts to cry. She turn to where Nandu was walking and tried reaching for him.

Elsewhere, after the ceremony the family gather around. Manji says we should bring Kali back. Vishwa says gauri is moaning and all you think about is Kali. Manji says we're all moaning not just gauri, yug is gone. The only thing left of him is naina. We should try to convince Kali that shes not alone.

Dad I says manji has a point. She says we should get my granddaughter back. Gauri hearing this drop what ever she was holding, making all eyes turn go her. She was on the steps shaking " what did you say" she says angry

To be continued...


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Chapter 6


its been two weeks kali was getting the hang of things, the manager was impress with her and even promote her as a trainer. Kali after coming from work step out to see it raining. She looks at naina saying what will they do now, she says they can't sleep in the rain. While thinking the manager told them that he has someone thats renting a room, he said it's not to expensive so they can afford. Kali says she doesn't mind as long as it's safe for her and naina.

The manager drove Kali to the house. Their she was unease, she looks at the house thinking it looks familiar before the manager knock, he knock few times until the person opens. " you?" She says

Kali was also surprise, the manager told them if they know each other. They both nod, the manager says this will be good for both of them. Amma told Kali to come while the manager explain everything. Amma says she would be happy to rent her the room. They sat down and went through the procedure before Kali paid her. After the manager left Kali went into the room and lay naina down,then change her clothes.

" this is good, now I can provide more for you without worrying about a place to sleep", she lay next to naina and pat her head while singing her song. While singing she she'd tears thinking of yug.

Nandu sleeping next door wake up to her voice. He sleepily. Says why do I hear my wi...I mean Kali voice." He look around before hitting his head, " I must be imagining, Kali wouldn't be here, she want nothing to do with me", he lay back down and close his eyes before falling asleep.

The next day Nandu took his shirt of and wrap his towel around his waist. He was ready to do his normal routine. He opens the door and walk to the bathroom. Just when he was about to open Kali came out. She was drying her hair with a towel. She look up to see Nandu, they we're both surprise.

" Nandu?"

"K-kali!"

Kali took a look at Nandu, he look completely different from the time she saw him. He had a clean shave, his hair was more shaggy then ever, probably because he just woke up. He looks like a complete different person especially with the expression he was making. Is this really Nandu? She thought

Nandu on the other hand was trying to see if he was dreaming again. He put his hands on Kali shoulder and pull her for a hug. He could smell the shampoo she used. He says it smells nice.

Kali calls for him, she told him To let her go. Nandu snapping out of it, remove his hand" I'm sorry... Nandu thought you weren't real"

Kali face a little red, says " it's OK, you must have been surprise to see me"

" yes, I thought Kali didn't want to live with Nandu? "

" I didn't know I would be here either"

Their was a short pause before Nandu smile " I'm glad wif-.. I mean Kali is here, now I can take care of you"

Kali was about to protest, but Nandu ignores her and walk in the bathroom, closing it. She sigh and walk to the room to see naina awake, she quickly change her and walk to the kitchen. " your awake Kali "

" yes, me and naina have to shop later on"

" eat first and then you can go"

" I'm not that hungry"

" don't be silly Kali..eat" she says

Nandu after showering came down, he was wearing his usual clothes, Amma says Nandu is looking dashing like his father. Nandu told her to stop comparing him to his dad. But Amma ignore him and talk about the good old days.

Kali while finishing up says they will leave. Amma told her to take Nandu, Kali was about to protest, but Amma says it gets dark quick so she needs someone to protect her. Nandu says he will do it, and quickly gulp his food. He almost choke making Amma scold him, Kali chuckle a little.

While they we're leaving a car pull over Amma house, the men in fancy suit walk to the house and knock. When Amma open she was surprise to see him. The men walk in looking at the place in disgust before turning to Amma. " you still live in this place?"

" of course, this was the house you built for us"

" I told you to come with me, why do you still punish yourself"

Amma walk to the kitchen to clear the table " I'm living my life, the way I wanted too, you chose to leave us for money"

" I was doing it for us" he says

" it wasn't for us, but for your own greedyness."

The men sigh " how is Nandu?"

Amma hit her hand on the table " don't you dare speak my son name from your mouth. Besides why would you be concern of the son you disowned because he was mental "

The men frown " it wasn't like that, I told you to give him up for adoption"

" what difference does it make, you still didn't want him. But no worries my Nandu is growing up to be a fine men. He thinks his father is a good men because of the stories I told him"

" listen I'm here to apologize to Nandu. I want To take him with me to get treated. "

Amma whole body froze, she told him that Nandu isn't going anywhere, she says they didn't need him before and they don't need him now. The men tried to explain, but Amma told him to leave before she calls the police.

The men fix his suit and told her that he will be back. He says Nandu will have to make the decision for himself. After he left Amma sat down while crying, she says her Nandu isn't going anywhere.

To be continued...

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