PYAAR KI JEET ASYA SS part 2 updated pg 1

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HELLO ALL HER I ROSY IS HERE TO
INTRODUCE U ALL WITH MY SECOND
Ss : PYAAR KI JEET .
So do enjoy this story.
here is the introduction of my characters
ZOYA FAROOQI:
Zoya Farooqi is the younger daughter of Sanam Farooqi. She always warned zoya to not to go out as she was the precious gem for Devil Family .As zoya was not aware of this is continued.Although she loved her mother a lot she always listened to her mother and did all the things which is ordered.
ASAD AHMAD KHAN:
Asad ahmad khan the only son of dilshad is a great business man of Agra.he was to simple. he was well-mannered boy. he never hated his mother and Dilshad to never hated her

thank u .
for part1
please buddy ROSYPOSY12


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Posted: 8 years ago
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banner cerdits to rosyposy:

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i am very dissapointed to see no comments or like but hope
after this part 1 u all will like.

The sense starts with the farooqui 's family. Someone ringed the bell.sanam asked zaria to open the door .zaira goes and opens the door she faints and she fells on down. sanam goes to see her. then she sees zoya has got her natural avatar. she takes zoya to her room.

"very nice i am proud of u dear zoya" said sanam laughingly.


"for what mom?" zoya asked her.

" see what u have done u should didn't come in your natural avatar" warned sanam.

"clam down mom" said zaira." why are u blaming my sister zoya?"

then what i should did her puja!?

"sorry,i did not wanted to hurt u zaia(zaira's nick name)" said zoya and went to her room . she stared remembering her childhood when her father died of an car accident. the next day she opened her eyes she saw sanam standing in front of her.

"good morning zoya dear. how are u feeling now?" sanam asked her.

"good morning mom . mom please forgive me. i really did not liked hurt zaira."

"wow wow! what a love!" said her grandmother.

" mom u came today.means yesterday u used to come no?" sanam went on chating with her. she forgot about zoya.

Afterwards zoya went to her office usual their she got a news that she is no more a member there. she started serching for jobs here and there. she went to Palace of Queens. she went inside the directors room.

"is anyone there?" asked zoya.

"come in u stupid lady" replied the director

the directors name was Ramprasad Palov . he was very bad and unmarred person. he always used to prank others.

"hey u mister! i am not an stupid. u are the actual stupid" said zoya angrily.

ramprasad came to attack on her when asad arrived . he fought bravely . after finishing he saw zoya screaming

" come one and all see what a hero he is! come one and alll!"

promo: asad askes zoya to come tommarrow for the interview.


guys if any speeling,or any grammatical errors please forgive me😭 and its very short slowly i will improve it😊
thank you
part2 will updated soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Its a good start...
Zoyas character is very nice...
Want some more asad and zoya moments..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Nice start dear ..just come across this story ..
Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Prat 2

Seeing zoya screaming he got angry. He asked her angrily

"why have u come here ?"

"for the puja of this office! areh! i came here for finding job" replied zoya in an funny voice.

"its not a joke. you must be knowing that this office is dangerous " said asad.

"so u want to tell me that this office has monsters" laughingly zoya said.

Seeing her laughing asad stopped for a while. he was simply vanished in her eyes.

"TERE RE SANG YAARA

KHUSH RANG BAHARA

TU RAT DEEWANI

MAIN ZARD SITARA

OH KARAM KHUD AYA HAI

TUHJHE MUJHE MILYA

TUJHPE MAR KE MUJHE JENA AYAA HAI...

OH TERE SANG YAARA..."

Zoya remembered that sanam has warned her "if someone looks at u continuously u just run from their as this month the full moon is dissapered and in the full moon night u take your natural avatar " and she ran away . asad said her

"come to my office and get a job their ."

"okay!" said zoya and ran laughing.

" what a girl she is! suddenly ran. and till now was saying big words. now what happende?" asad whispered to himself

asad went back to his home their dilshad was waiting for him to arrive.

"hey mom ,its already lunch time" said asad

"yes becoz of that i was waiting for u asad" repled dilshad

"mom u simply have waited for me dear" said asad ina sad voice.

" hey what happened say me i know u are sad" said dilshad

asad said the hole thing to her. dilshad was just amassed to listen that.

" why are

u seeing me like this?" Asked asad

Dilshad laughed and said"so shall we do lunch?"

"ya sure" replied asad

In the evening zoya through about asad how he saved her life. Sanam through something happened with zoya so tha she is very deep within. That time zaira went to her room and talked to her.

" hey zoya what happen ? about what u are thinking so much? asked zaira

" actually I was thinking to work mothers office replied zoya

"this means u lost your job right?said zaira

"yes no yes no confused zoya

"don't say lie u don't know the way of lieing said zaira

Promo: "yes I never through zoya would tell lie entered sanam . asad went to his mother and talked .

guys any mistakes forgive me

thank u for all your comments and likes😳

Edited by rosyposy12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
It's seems amazing
But didn't understand the plot much
What it is about
Anyways looking forward to read some new concept
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The part was good dear...
Bur a request . plz clear the plot of the story...
I hope u dont mind it
Will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Nice updates
But The story is confusing
So what is zoya a witch someone evil
And asad is he just an ordinary person
Cont and clarify

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