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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sakshi

@..queen..

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: amlavs
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--unres--
Am first..
Omg..sakshi my dear queen..
Dnt know wat to say..
It was such an intense one..
Can easily feel twinkles pain while reading..
Loved it..
Want happy wala os plz..
Spread love.,.
Lavs and Sriya..

First hoke bhi itna late... I was waiting for ur comment

Thank you so much.. I'm glad u liked it

One happy wala coming soon

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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ..queen..

First hoke bhi itna late... I was waiting for ur comment
Thank you so much.. I'm glad u liked it
One happy wala coming soon

Sorry sakshi...was busy with my school and stuffs..

Trying my level best to be active on Forum when I find time..

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Well How did I miss this gem of a story??!

I am so sorry!

This was fantastic! Beyond fantastic in fact...I liked how you described the small things liked her chapped lips and how she neglected taking care of herself.

Also the fact that she tried to live for his sake, really touched me.

Your description of her after seeing their balcony was BRILLIANT! Loved how you explained the scream building up in the base of her throat. Fantastic!!

LOVED IT ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jambread3

@Jambread3

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Oh my god😭💔

While reading this I had goosebumps.

This was,idk what to say,beautiful? no I can't say that because it was something way more than that

The way you captured Twinkle's emotions and expressed it👏

It was a very good idea of writing it from her point of view

The pain and agony Twinkle was going through in this story,I could feel it

I loved how you added the little details like 'sorry and thank you wala setup'

I literally felt something break inside me when I read "but I don't feel you Kunj,I know you're gone" and the lines that followed

I don't like reading sad stories but I read this one and I don't regret one bit

Amazing work Queen👏

This might sound childish but after reading this I just hope I wouldn't ever have to face something like this because I know I won't be able to bare that pain

Great work,love you bub!🤗

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