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This is amazing 👏 loved it
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Part 3


At KM,


2 days passed after Arjun and Maan's conversation. Maan was now more aloof and was totaly depressed. Maan almost locked himself in KM. Savita asked Arjun to talk to Maan.

Maan will you kill your family for that mere girl whom you dont even know. Arjun almost roared.

how can you be so sure? May be I know her.


Arjun closed his eyes in anger and then felt helpless.

your may be or may not be is torturing us Maan. trust me I had checked about her. None had seen you with her Maan. that girl was only trying to cheat us. only link between you to is when you both met at new years eve. we dont have any other evidence that you both had any relation. but still I try once again.


No Maan will do it himself. Savita announced as she stood at the corridor listening to Maan and Arjun's arguement.


Arjun sighed. So you dont even trust me now. Arjun said looking at Savita with a hurt face.


No bete..Sometimes heart gives you the biggest proof that even god cannot give. Its because in front of love even god has to bow. Arjun too felt it right.


Maan just stood facing window looking specifically at nothing. After a long silence Maan broke the silence. I will go today itself.


At London.


Sid was pacing to and fro in the room. Riya stood smiling at him leaning on the wall folding her hands. this geet never listens to us...where is she?

Riya chuckled. At office.. aur kahan.

you are smiling. Do you know your baby sister is still not at home. you both will one day kill me by torturing me. Riya hugged Sid.

She called me. she went for some paperworks.

But alone..Riya I dont want to take risk... you know..

She needs some time Sid. If you will show more concern than before she will feel we font trust her. Dont remind her about her past.

Tears threatned to fall from Sid's eyes.how can someone even think to betray an angle like my geet.Sid said painfully.

My baby... Sid was not able to complete her sentence when both heard a scream.


Di... Di... Jiju... Di.. I have done it. we got the deal. Di... Sid and Riya turned to see geet screaming her lungs out. first time in months they saw geet so happy.


Di I got the deal. Our hardwork paid off jiju. we got the contract.

really..My baby is the best havent I told you Riya? Sid said kissing geet's forehead.

Its because of you jiju. you pledged each and every thing you had for money. that house was your ancesttral property. geet said feeling guilty.

heyy.. no land is more important than my baby. And I know we will repay the loan very fast. So no more worries. OK..

geet smiled and hugged Sid.


Riya smiled at them. May it have been some other guy in Riya's life he would never accept geet as much Sid accepted. For Sid geet was his first child. he could do anything for her.

Riya looked at geet smiling then it hit her. geet go and freshen up. See how tired you look. go... Riya pushed geet upstairs to go to her room. geet went cribbing,


Sid chuckled. you know Riya.. geet should call you mom not di.. always nagging to eat, sleep, get bath and all...

really??? and I feel she should call you dad. protective and ready to kill anyone who put an eye on her.

Sid's smile washed away. hope I could do that to that b*****. you both didnt even tell me his name. Sid said angrily.

thats because I dont want anymore problems. that guy was just flirting. A play boy whom our geet took seriously. She will forget it soon . Riya said with a stern face.

Only flirting..right??? Sid said mocking. why you both still want to save that a*****?

we dont want to stretch this matter. Moreover we will soon settle back in India once geet's this dream project comes to an end.

Riya knew Sid's concern for geet. She hugged Sid from back. And then we will find a cool, matured, a family man like you for our baby. Ok..

No.. Sid said calmly. Riya was confused. No.. we will find someone best and I mean the best for our geet. Riya smiled.

OK.. geet's papa now help me to make some paratha for your baby.

OK geet's mama. Both laughed and went to kitchen.


geet who stood listening to them smiled with tears. She wiped her tears and went back to her room.


After few days..



Maan Sir I checked all your appointments from this year January 1st and made the list. Adi kept the file in front of Maan. Maan had landed London the very next day after deciding to find about 'her'.

hmm... Maan went through the file. Adi I want to know about appointments that I cancelled too...

kya.. Adi was shocked. It was difficult to make this list itself. Now cancelled one was next to impossible.

Savita laughed who stood near the door with Maan's tablets. Adi looked at Savita pleading with his eyes to help him.

Adi you go. Savita said taking file from Maan's hand. Maan looked at Savita with anger. Adi was confused what to do.

Aadii.. Savita said in MSK tone. Adi left thinking Queen's order is more valid than crown prince.

Maan looked frustrated. Savita was looking at the file. Maan what did you do after office hours.

Maan did not understand.

Maan you had appointments from 10am to 3pm. Rest time you were free. what did you do that time?

Mom please you know I dont remember... Maan said helplessly.

Maan.. I want to ask something..

hmm..

did you..did you..you know.. I mean... Savita was hesitating. you had affairs so..I mean..woh.. you know..woh..

I dont sleep with them... Maan said closing his eyes tightly. he felt bad what his own mother thought about him.

I never knew you had affairs too. Even if you dont love someone never play like this. Savita said.

She herself changed the topic. I want your PA Ananya's number.

Mom she left the job .

thats why I asked Maan. Maan sighed and gave the number.


Same day @ Cafe


Savita felt Ananya had some grudges for Maan.

why you want to meet me? Ananya was already pissed of looking at the person sitting in front of her. Savita Singh Khurana. Mother of casonova Maan. She hated to have even worked at KC once.

I want to talk about a girl. Savita looked for some emotion in Ananya's face but saw none.

I dont know her. Ananya said.

Savita smirked. I dint say who dear.

Ananya closed her eyes feeling caught.

Savita took a sigh and held Ananya's hand in hers. My son lost his precious 3 years memories.

Anaya didnt know what to say. We didnt tell anyone about it because I and Arjun were tensed. what if someone try to take advantage of Maan. so only.. I dont know what actually happened between Maan and that girl. Not even what happened that fateful day. But I want to know about her. And you very well know whom I am talking about dear. Plz tell me all that you know about her.

Ananya was confused to say or not. She kept quite for sometime while Savita waited for her reply.


Past


Ananya was working @ KC since 2 years. she had job to take car of both Maan and Arjun's schedule when they were at KC. Most of the time both would cancel meetings for so called girlfriends. Ananya never felt a good wibe from them. professionally as best were the boys personally they were that worse. Ananya and geet lived at same street. geet was a bubbly, naive and cultured Indian girl who was very rare sight at their place.


One day at a cafe Ananya with her sister saw geet with Maan.

Maan sir and geet. Anaya was shocked.

kya hua Anu? her sister asked.

I 'll come in a minute.

Ananya reached near them when Maan left.

hi Ananya..geet said happily.

geet you with Maan..

you know Maanav. haan..afterall both work in KC.

but geet..

oh sorry Ananya I need to leave. my di is waiting for me. bye see you soon...


@ present

Ananya left some details and said what she felt savita should know.

her name was geet. I met her 2-3 times with Maan sir in a cafe. It was not something new to meet Maan sir with any girl. But geet was different she was not one of those models whom Maan sir always dated. I felt Maan sir actually changed after meeting her. he never went with any skinny models after geet came into his life. But... I dont know what happened suddenly. Maan sir was back to office after a week. that day only geet entered in office. No one knew her as she never came to KC. And that day she was insulted very badly by Arjun Sir. No girl can take it. But worst was when Maan sir himself denied knowing her. She left that day. And next day I left my job.I cant work at a place where a lady is only given respect by words not by heart.

Savita sighed. No situation can be so bad to humiliate a girl in front of so many people just to keep your friend safe. I am sorry to say aunty but your so called "innocent kids" just know to use women as a tissue paper. Ananya said feeling pity in Savita. Savita dipped her head. May I leave? Ananya asked. Savita nodded and Ananya went away.



@night.. at Maan's house


Savita was depressed. Maan too didnt ask anything. Maan had no clue what happened after new year party. her name was geet. Savita said to Maan who was laying keeping his head on her lap.

Maan gotup at once. you met her?

Savita had no emotion. I met Ananya. she told me.

Does she knows where she lives?

No.. but I came to know..

that I loved her Maan said looking into Savita's eyes. Savita looked surprised but was angry too. how so sure? Evidence and proofs nahi chahiye?

I want to follow what my heart says. I am fedup of this proofs and mind games. Maan said.

At present I dont even believe your heart too Maan.

Mama..

I forgot to teach you both how to respect women. Even if everything comes in right place. I dont know how I will forgive you two as a lady.

Mom... kya hua... Maan asked worriedly.

Savita yelled at Maan.

Arjun said only what you guys feel about a women. And you too are not so cool. chi.. I feel ashamed of about you two.

Mom I.. I dont understand why are you over reacting. when you know what actually happened...

oh really!!! Maan... then teach me how to react when you know your sons actually change girlfriends like clothes. For them ladies are just for entertainment or for time pass.


Arjun entered at same time. he had reached that morning and slept due to jet lag. he woke up when Savita yelled at Maan.


So here comes my son. Savita said. she went near Arjun . Arjun tell me what all have you told to geet? Arjun was shocked. he realised months back that he was wrong but when today Savita stood in front of him he understood till what point he was wrong. Arjun bow his head.

Savita continued.. your brother feels you were right Arjun then why are you so tensed? why to think about what I feel. After all I am a mere women right?

Bua...Arjun gasped.

why ..why so shocked. I am a women at last. If you feel all women only good for entertaiment. they all are cheap..selfish..moneyminded and so am I.

Mom plz.. dont compare you with those girls. Maan said standing between Arjun and Savita.


why ..I am a l women too Maan. And so was geet. Are all men innocent? how can you infer women with knowing few selfisgh girls.

Savita caught Arjun's collar. Did that girl asked you money. she once wanted to meet Maan. then why did you say that Arjun? you even quoted a price for that girl. how could you fall so low.

Maan was stunned.

Tears filled Arjun's eyes. I ...I am sorry bua. I just...

Savita closed her eyes. First find geet and ask her to forgive. If she does then show your face to me. And you too maan. you love her or not go and ask her forgiveness first. After what I got to know from others I feel ashamed to call you my sons.

Savita left room leaving Maan and Arjun in remorse.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow superb update...
maan n arjun r in fix by savitha ...
superb savitha contacted Ananya...
hope they find out maan soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely update maan was frustrated as his heart was not supporting his mind he felt geet is right savtri wants maan to follow his heart that mmaybe maan does know the girl maan decided he will find the girl here geet was working hard on her dream project sid hates the guy who ruined geets life but they r unaware of the actual truth maans mom wants to know abt his past she is shocked to know maan dated so many woman but never crossed his limits savitri talked to maans pa ananya who told she saw geet with maan a couple of times though maan dated many woman but after geet came in his life he cahnged but savtri was shocked to know abt the convo between arjun and geet she was ashamed to have them as her son who dosent know how to respect a wioman
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Thanks for pM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great update
Geet is giving her full in business to forget Maan
Maan is trying to remember the memories of Geet
It's Great Savita calls Ananya
Arjun's words are too cruel
Now both have to find Geet and ask her forgiveness
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update!!
Loved it to the core!!
Like a pendulum , maan is oscillating between his heart and mind regarding Geet
Loved sid's character
He is concerned abt his baby ie; Geet
Geet is putting all her hard work into her dream project
Savitha had a convo with ananya
Who revealed that she as seen maaneet together a couple of times
Savitha showed mirror to both maan and arjun the way they used girls and the way arjun humiliated Geet and the way they respected women!!
She was ashamed of her both the sons
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Waiting for the next update
Thank you for the pm!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm dear
That's awesome update
Geet was trying to get over past,maan wants to follow his heart ,he believe he loved geet.
Arjun got good scolding for his behavior with geet.
Waiting for next 😊
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome ud
geet di and jiju really loved geet like their own kid's
maan was distributed since he met geet
he want to find out about hr but this time he don't
want any proofs he want his heart to recognize truth
savita inquire about his son's character and very disappointed
to know how they used to behave and consider women as entertainment object
savita even met Annaya maan's ex secretary and get info about geet she scold arjun fr his conversation with geet and without proof blamed hr

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