OS-Are We Perfect??? Part 3 pg 4 updated 04/6/2016

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sandhya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Read the OS

beautifully writeen..love the story too

thanks for all the PMs

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leena

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Part 1
i really loved RaYa's teenage part awww both just stealing glances from each other for 2 years... he toppped in first but sh toppped in secound year... good... loved thee way she saaid no to Rajat... n asked Ram to assk her for party... lol sh is littel bold here but the damage happen was really bad they kissed still hee lost her due parents ego but how theey came there?? iit waas fearwell party right... any way RaYa seprated was sad hope he could find her soon... but will she also loving her thee way he do...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 2
omg wow too gud awesome mind blowing the way u express their discomfort the way u showed their love for each other was just mind blowing too good awesome... i just loved the way u made it... awesome mind blowing in all way... & the last part was the best too good awesome... he actually kissed her with all her love... now moving for next...

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 3
awww awsom what a narration of RaYa romance too good awesome... mind blowing too good So it was not at all dream... Ram rally kissed hr ven left her hom too... n thn like crazy lover waiting for her in her cabin... they really spend qualiity time was to amezing... now coming to Ram's part where he talked with Priya's papa with all his confidance too good n finally they got married...Ram made hr his in all senses... tooo good awesome I really liked it in all way... too good waiting for more do write soon...

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