OS-Are We Perfect??? Part 3 pg 4 updated 04/6/2016 - Page 2

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nice os continue soon
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superb story...
how sad last day ended like this...
then 13 yearsss...
waiting for next...

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hellooo...kidhar ho aap...pl update Karo na
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Part 2

Ram's POV



hashhh that dream again...i cant get through it...those were the happy moments of my life...its been 13 years...I left mumbai my dad didnt allowed me a day to stay there he booked a flight and sent me away for further studies...from that day i didnt got any chance to go alone..someone always traces my back! theres nothing left fo me...i tried to get information about priya to but how am gonna know i have my contacts but dont have the proper details...i dont even know her surname!!! I tried many times to get her pofile but failed each time...its been 13 years i dont even know how she looks...is she same gorgeous as she was or she has grown more beautiful?! nothing matters to me i just want to meet her and clear the misunderstandings..tring tring my phone beeped i didnt gave much attention to it...may i come in sir!! i heard my secretary calling me out...gennie am quite exhausted right the moment cancel all the meetings i told her trying to shoo her off...sir but its about your dad! she said that caught my attention



what about him?? i asked



he is in hospital!! she told



oh no! I took my phone only to see 38 missed calls from vikram neha and my family members! I immediately called vikram



buddy where were you idiot i have been calling you since morning!!! vikram fired questions at me



vikram am so sorry just tell what happened?? I asked him



ram your dad is in hospital..he got an attack and a specialists is called she'll be here just plzz come quick!!! vikram said...it didnt even took me minutes to get up from my place..ok buddy i'll be there...i called the pilot of my private jet...and ordered him to be ready...pirvate jet was just a way of showing off but i guess it was useful in hard times and it was for the first time amusing it!we took off from delhi it will take an hour for me to reach there...my mind went back again to her...am going back to mumbai...!!! where i lost her



I rushed inside the hospital...excuse me Amarnath Kapoor i asked the receptionist



ram!! i heard a familiar voice...i turned and saw vikram standing there...he came and hugged me..



thank god brother u are here chal jaldi...he said as went up...papa ki tabiyat kaisi hai??? i asked him he is doing good..but surgery is must and now a specialist have been appointed for him she is coming from pune!



he reported me about all the happinings...ok thats the only thing i said as we reached near the OT...my family members came and hugged me...my small siblings clung to me cying i just consoled them as I know they are small for all this after formal hi hello..everyone settled down



ram chal lets have coffee u didnt had anything?? vikram asked



I dont want it vikram i denied but he dragged me up andwe walked towards the machine which was there on the corner of the corridor...we were talking about few things



when i saw vikrams expressions changed from normal to confussed...what ?? i asked him then i realised he waslooking at my back i turned and saw a lady walking andthe staff surrounded her...her back was facing me...she was wearing a white coat maybe she is the one appointed but something made me stiff at my place her voice!!!



I want all the details and reports plzz quick!!! she said as she rushed towards the OT..her hair reminds me of someone..they were same like priya her voice to was same!!!..is she??? no way we rushed towards her but I was late...she entered inside the OT I tried to peep in but I didnt got a vision of her as the staff surronded the bed...after an hour or so the door fell open...my heartbeats raised..a girl came out..nurse... I went towards her... ab kaise hai wo...??aap?? she asked



me unka bada beta hu!! I told her



aap plz doctor se miliye unhone kaha hai unke cabin me wait karne k liye...saying she said to follow her...me and vikram walked behind her my mind still got the visions of the doctor..her voice her long hair!!





we entered the cabin...and settled down on the seat..I looked at the cabin inspecting it...it was nice and clean many certificates were hunged up the walls..i looked at the name plate



Dr. Priya Sharma!! priya??? no it cant be I am not sure...I heard the sound of the door opened vikram got up and looked at her I didnt had the energy to get up but i did after few seconds as soon as i turned i got the biggest shock...yes my instinct were right she is my priya!!! we stood there facing each other...!!





Priya's POV



Ram!! yes my ram was standing in front of me..after this13 years!! he grew much more mature!! much taller and moreover a lil plump but it was suiting him..he was looking sooo cute!!



its not the time priya be pofessional I walked silently towards my seat..breaking the eye contact..I took my seat as I removed my coat and hunged in on the chair...i took a deep breath as my throat choked up dry..i took a glass of water a gulped it half



ahem ahem...taking a sigh of relief i continued...patient se related kon hai?? I asked



my father! ram said



am Dr.priya first of all...i introduced myself...grr am going insane..what are you doing priya be professional



hi am vikram and he is ram kapoor...vikram introduced them..i smiled at him



theres nothing to be worried of..seriously it was not a major attack...but we have to keep him under observation for few days! i said all this is a single breath trying to avoid rams gaze which was piercing my heart straight in the centre... he has his effect on me!!



Ram's POV



I have my effect on her! she is looking sooo gorgeous and moreover a grown up lady...as i saw her i was spell bounded she was wearing a saree!! gold color which suited her perfectly i cant ignore how it hung up on her curves!! on gosh...i didnt heard anything that she said as she didnt even looked at me i know she is quite awkward at the moment but i will clear it soon i just want to get a chance to talk to her once



so thats it i think i should leave now..she said as she got up...which broke my happy go moment staring her!...nooo thats to early i thought...me and vikram got up from our seats..



Turn once!! I said in my heart and She did...she turned and looked at me once...only for a fraction of second but that was well enough...





Priya's POV





Hassshhh my breath steadied as i was out of the radar of his proximity...i walked towards the staff to tell them the further procedure of the medications...the patient is ...Rams DAD!!!



Priya!!! I heard a familiar voice oh no is he here!! I turned to see him..yes he was standing there only..I mean Dr. Priya...he corrected...oh no how should I react? Should i be the same one who loved him!! Or still I love him only!!! Priya you dont know his life..what has happened in this 13 years!! Is he married?? Did he forgot about us??Dr. Priya ?? He snapped in front of me after not getting any reaction



Yes!! I moaned something out finally...Ammm...its to late for you to go at this hour you'll not mind if i drop you at your destination??? He asked politely..ohh i so can feel the curiosity is his voice he wants to talk to me??? Is it the right time?? How much we will wait yes its the limit i should talk to him



Ammm actually!! I agreed but the oral confirmation was interrupted by a call from back



Priya!!!!! I turned and saw who the person is...Rajat!! Oh no what he is doing here???Hey!! He came and hugged me..!!!! What!!! why is he doing this??



Where were you ? we all have been searching for you!!! He said holding me by my arms..seriously thats awkward!! I got out of his embrace and looked at ram who was just staring at us blankly



Ram's POV



A guy came and hugged her in front of me and am like astranger was just looking at them!!! Grrr i was jealous but he seemed familiar!!...and my guess was proved right by priya



Rajat why are you here?? She asked him...so he is here again!!



Hi rajat!! I broke there conversation...He looked at me..making an confused and weird face he recognized my face...RAM!! He said...not being so pleased at my presence...



how are you i asked him formally not interested in his reply...He answered and asked few questions about my where beings...



Priya chale he said all of a sudden..i looked at her..she was not at all comfortable

in entertaining him...she just looked at me with a puppy sad face which clearly defined her condition...



Amm i guess she is having some work...the Sr. Doc called priya in his office..isn't it priya?? I told a lie concluding her confirmation...ah yeah she nodded...



rajat it will take some time i guess and i'll be late so please you can go now...i'll look after myself...she told him



Priya but its late..i'll wait for you!! He tried to stay..nooo rajat just go!! She yelled



But how will you manage?? He asked in a curious tone Ram will drop me off...she answered wont you ram??She asked looking at me



Of course i will!! My inner yelled as well as I Rajat didnt seemed soo impressed by the idea But he agreed..okay he said as he again tried to hug her saying a bye but she stopped him..dont you dare!!! She glared at him..he was annoyed by her reaction...just go..she said in a rage...As he walked away she looked at me...coffee?? I asked her





Priya's POV



Uff this rajat is a head ache!! Yaar and why papa has decided to get me married to him!! No i will not..but now I have to deal with a new problem in my instant time..which was not at all a problem after all



Coffee?? He asked instantly Yess plzzz... I agreed i want to talk to him immediately We walked towards the lift...as we entered the lift..I didnt made a conversation..but he did..i guess dinner would do instead of coffee dont you think???



He changed the plan..listening to the word dinner made me feel hungry... my stomach was grumbling for food!! I didnt had anything since afternoon..Amm yeah sure am quite hungry i told him the truthwhich was quite embarrassing but i was really hungry...We reached the parking and he led me towards his car!!



BMW !! Thats his choice i know



He like a gentlemen came and opened the door... as i was going to enter he was standing at my back...i can feel his presence as his breath touched my back and i touched his front a little that sent thousands of current through my body... I immediately sat in the rare seat he came and sat in the driver seat...as he zoomed the car kissing the mumbai roads... Its getting difficult each and everysecond to ignore him...his proximity did many things...



I turned my head out looking at the late night mumbai roads which are always calm and soothing...the glass was only the barrier... before i could ask him to open it he did it himself as if he read my mind!!



Ram's POV



Yess she agreed for the dinner!! This rajat am gonna kill him..but first i need to know what has happened in this year's...i have to pull the broken knots...just plzz god let her trust me!! Plzzz...i prayed silently..a smile spread across my face...she was soo innocent in her heart..still!!



The way she was looking out of the window...and a smile always playing on her lips!! My cute angel!!



Ufff its been a tough time for us but will pay for everything I promise you that!! I pulled at the nearest hotel as i didnt mind it's standard..now the top most priority was her being hungry



we walked in..and took a seat..The waiter came up and and asked for the order...i gave him the order VEG dishes thats what she likes as she is pure vegetarian





Priya's POV



What he know that am Veg?? He ordered exactly what I wanted!! How...can it be possible...we hardly had any conversation in this 14 yrs!! Or its an coincidence?? I know you are vegetarian!! He replied



How do you know?? I asked him



Aise hi.. He said with a smile..oh that smile of his which made me go week at my knees!!





RAM's POV



Sooo...ammm kaisi ho priya?? I tried to push the conversation ahead and fast..



Priya's POV



Thik hu!! I replied..holding my breath...Bohot saal beet gae!! Its been a long time..i tried to ease the situation but i guess its being the worse!!!13 years!! I told him 13 years...5 months 16 days!!



I know the exact days..i replied as i realized am being emotional!! Priya plz control yourself!!!



Ram's POV



What!! she knows the exact days!! well that made me realize that she loves me...!! should i tell her about my feelings!! noo...just let me clear the misunderstandings...the order came and she didnt waste much time so as...this was the worst thing...coming between us!! sudden awkwardness took its lead in our proximity!! maybe the gap of 13 yrs has its effect on us..but don't worry my lady!! will pay for my every deed...ese kya dekhrahe ho?? she asked me all of a sudden (Shit...am staring at her!!???) nothing!! saying such i started eating my meal



Priya's POV



I concentrated on my meal...as i dont want any further interaction with him...but the word i dont want doesn't suit my situation!! its just that i craved for him to comeall this years!! and he is here..which made me go weak!! i just need some time...sometime to know whether he still loves me...or that was just an affection on teenage!! nooo that thought..kills me...



I felt his gaze on me...he didn't even touched his food...he was looking at me that made my heart beats fast..ese kya dekh rahe ho..!! i asked him barely any voice coming out of my throat... his gaze pierced my skin...sweat beads formed on my forehead...i just felt a sudden need in my heart!! no priya just ignore...I concentrated on my plate again not waiting for his reply...



Ram's POV



oh gosh...she is looking angelic!! the way she looked down..not looking at me make me go crazy...i so want to hug her!! just hold her in my arms and tell her that I'll always be there with her...i paid the bill as we walked out...she denied for a dessert..thats strange..well as long as i know she loves kulfi...i was going to order it for her but she just denied...hmmm...beach par chale...?? i asked her...



Priya's POV



he asked for dessert I soo love kulfi but i dnt want itfrom this hotel...i love matka kulfi...



beach par chale!! he asked all of a sudden...i cant deny that for sure...yess...i said quickly with a smile...we reached towards the nearby beach...oh its soo pleasant always to come here...i walked ahead towards the seashore not so close...i stood there gazing at the endless seas...ohhh...a cool breeze kissed me making me feel chilled thoroughly...!! i crossed my both hand vice versa rubbing my arms...as a sigh came out from my lips...i felt a warm cloth covering my back...i looked at my back to see ram was covering me up with his blazer!! it touched me!! he kept his hands still on my shoulder for few seconds...that felt soo good yet soo breathtaking...i looked straight into his eyes! his face looked so magical in the soft moonlight...his eyes never left mine...an unknown fear engulfed my mind that made me broke our magical moment!! i looked aside covering myself more in his blazer...feeling his presence in his...ammm that deo!! it was strong...and exotic...!! that made a certain arousal...!! I sat on the sand...pulling my legs up..resting my hands on my knees...i pulled off my heels scandals...uff that were such a pain...i felt him sitting besides me...



Ram's POV



its been a long time!! i started the conversation...yeah...she replied...you still love me!! i asked it directly



Priya's POV



you still love me!! he asked it finally!! do i have any other option?? i replied being calm...



Author's POV



ram was surprised with her sudden change of tone..kyu nhi karna chahiye ab bhi pyar?? she asked innocently...esa nhi hai..yar..ram was trying to tell her something but was interrupted by priya...why are you being so shy?? she asked a little furiously...jab propose kiya tab itna nahi khabrae...aur sabke samne kiss bhi kiya!! tab bade mard the tum...!! ab jab 13 saal baad aae ho...then u are being formal...trying to be a gentlemen... what you are thinking that let me see if she loves me or not...if yess then you will propose me if not then what??!!...she yelled at him clearing her heart out...



Priya's POV



I yelled at him...putting out everything that was stuck in my heart and mind all this years...tell me damn it!! i yelled again but before i could say anything my lips were sealed!! his lips captured mine!!! oh he was still so dominating...!! but it remind me of the cruel past which separated us!!... he kissed me hard...



controlling my emotions...i didnt made anymove...i just

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too gudwaiting eagerly for the next update
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So superb waiting for ur update pls do update soon
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superb update. so Priya is dr. RaYa met after 13 years. and they still love each other. ram proposed her and kissed her. wow. I am loving it. thanks for pm pl continue
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Superb update... Waiting for next...
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lovely part...priya bcm a dctr...atlst raya mt aftr 13 yrs sprtn...bth stil lvs each othr..priya's prnts fxd her mrg wd rajat.hw ram wl react aftr knwng dt.. egrly waitng fr nxt...
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wow Priya became Dr.Priya very nice..
Raya met after 13 years..n still loving each other...
waiting for next update...pls continue soon..

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