SHRAMAN OS - Saare raste tumhi tak aate hain..

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SHRAMAN OS - Saare raste tumhi tak aate hain...

This is after the Shravan - Aditya fight before marriage when Aditya misbehaved with Sumo...

Malhotra family was standing with Shravan and trying to hold him back and Nirmala was holding Aditya...

Suman was standing with her family members and watching everything in a daze...

She was scared for Shravan .. She had seen him angry with Verma.. with her but he looked completely wild.. He was now beyond angry...

NIrmala was scolding Aditya and Aditya started blaming Shravan..

Aditya: Shravan triggered me mom.. he made me so angry...you know your son.. I wouldn't have done anything like this but he is in love with Suman and he is trying to break my marriage...

He told me to be in my limit and that made me angry. I just wanted to check with Suman if she was mine.. what is wrong in it? She is going to be my wife.. it is not as if I am trying to have an affair with her and then leave her.. She will be always with me...

Nirmala: But to force her to be intimate with you... what was that Aditya? Even after marriage that should not happen... For any physical closeness consent from both side should be there...

Aditya: But mom that is it... she can hug Shravan, he can touch her and me, she won't allow me to touch her also.. and I am going to be her husband... why mom? They make me feel as if I am coming in between them... I am her husband.. she is mine mom .. only mine... Shravan has no rights on her.. she belongs to me...

Nirmala slapped him... and then told him...

Nirmala: You were going to marry her.. no you will never ever see her as you don't deserve her..Tiwariji told me to take care of her as my daughter and by that right I will not allow her to marry you...Any mother will scared to marry her daughter to you where you are least bothered about your partner feelings, consent and you think she is your possession.

Aditya: See mom, even you are doubting me.. this is all because of Shravan... he has been trying to come between us and trying to make me doubt her... He wants her himself and that's why he has done all this... I will not leave him.. I will kill him.

Aditya pushed Nirmala and went towards Shravan to hit him again...Shravan was shocked when he saw his mom falling and then he saw Mama and mausaji were able to save his mom from falling..

By the time he realized Aditya's intention it was too late and then suddenly someone came in front of him and slapped Aditya...

There was pin drop silence and no one moved...

His Sumo has come... and then she slapped shocked Aditya again and told him...

Sumo: Stay away from him... Don't even think about hitting him.. I will break your legs and throw you in gutter...Preetha.. come on what are you waiting for ...

The whole PCT gang came and stood behind Sumo and in front of Shravan so that Aditya cannot harm Shravan.

Sumo: What did you say that my Shravan is coming in between us? What us you idiot? There was never an us.. I only agreed to marry you because of Nanu or else I would have never looked at you...

If Shravan told you to be in limit then he had every reason to. You have been trying to force your will on me again and again from the time our marriage is fixed and been hurting me and my feelings somehow again and again. Shravan meant that you should understand me and treat me right...

What marriage? I had already decided to elope because I realized there was something wrong with you and your attitude and your actions...

And how did you react when I said No for any closeness.. you tried to force me... isn't it rape? When I don't want it...

Shravan triggered you.. you idiot.. my shravan is so simple he always maintained our friendship limit, supported me..

You wanted to know if I love you ... well the answer is No I don't love you, I can never love you and I don't want to marry you.

Do you want to know why...? Well its simple.. because Shravan does not like you.. he does not trust you...

And whatever my Shravan says, feels and wants I always do that, feel that and want that..

How can I be happy when my Shravan is not happy.. My happiness is always linked with him... and always will be. You were never between us Aditya... you see you were just a irritating factor not at all important for us..

My Shravan would never try to break my marriage if he thinks my happiness is with you. He always puts my happiness before his own...

So don't even think about blaming him for your actions...

Preetha throw him out...

And then Sumo turned and looked at Shravan..

Sumo: Are you ok?

Shravan: Yes and you...

Sumo: Now I am... take care of yourself and thanks for saving me..

She gave him her 100 watt smile and hugged him...

Shravan : Sumo...

And then Sumo simply walked out of Tiwari killa...

Ofcourse dazed Shravan came to his senses and followed her...

Ramnath was watching the whole thing silently and realized... mil jate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaste..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice, short sweet and full of action!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Maya wish this happens in the episode well written. loved the slap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nileshni679

Wow Maya wish this happens in the episode well written. loved the slap

both shravan and sumo.. became victions se action hero and heroine
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow dear u write so well...keep it up...
love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Kya jawab diya hai suman ne us kutte ko
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this was awesome!
Sumo ne toh bolti bandh kar di!
Niru kamal thi iss mai!
My Shravan..
Sigh!
I like!
Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏 👏
Loved it!!
Keep writing!!
P.s.-
maya can plzz give me the link to your story EDKV 1-5 . I wud love to read them .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
totally amazing
absolutely loved it
superb

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