TwiNj OS - Loving you was a mistake

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Posted: 8 years ago
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FOR ESHITA [Tikit]
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After knowing the truth about Jassi being Yuvraj,without paying any heed to what Yuvraj and Kunj had to say,Twinkle ran home.

She felt abandoned for the third time.

The person who had been a moral support,who had been there with her mentally and physically and whom she had considered her true friend had in reality played with her feelings.

She was once again left stranded on the road by someone whom she had trusted with her life.

Reaching home,Twinkle straight went to her room,not caring an ounce about a screaming Leela behind her.

As soon as she entered her room,she threw herself on the bed,burying her face inside the pillow and screaming as loud as she could

She screamed again and again,waiting for the pain to pass by or subside but not this time,this time the pain was too much for her to handle.

She cried and cried till her eyes soared and her pillow was covered with her tears.

Leela ran towards Twinkle's room and stood by the door,careful enough to not let her presence disturb her daughter in any way.

Like any other mother,even she wanted to make sure that her daughter was alright.

What Leela saw Infront of her made her tremble.She saw Twinkle coiled up like a baby on the bed who couldn't stop crying

Without being able to control anymore,Leela slowly walked towards Twinkle's bed

With a few drop of tears escaping her eyes,Leela laid down behind Twinkle in the same position as Twinkle,hugging her tight and covering Twinkle's body with hers.

As soon as Leela's body came in contact with Twinkle's,Twinkle's cries became louder

Leela didn't stop her,in order to let go of the pain,Twinkle had to fight it.

Time seemed to pass by,minutes turned into hours but Leela and Twinkle remained in the same position

After knowing that she couldn't practically cry some more,Twinkle got up and leaned on her headboard as she closed her eyes.

Leela quickly went towards the side table and poured some water for Twinkle

Settling herself on the bed Infront of Twinkle,Leela started

"Le putar,tera gala sukh raha hoga,thoda paani pee le"

Twinkle didn't say anything but took the glass of water and slowly started drinking it

"Thank you Maa",whispered Twinkle handing the glass over to Leela

"Putar tu theekh toh haina?"

"Maa,Jassi..."

Before Twinkle could speak further,they heard a knock at the door

Turning their eyes towards the door,they saw Kunj standing,concern written all over his face

Leela turned to look at Twinkle who kept looking at Kunj

Sensing the discomfort atmosphere in the room,Leela got up and started walking towards the door

Giving one look to Twinkle and the other to Kunj,Leela walked out,closing the door behind her

As soon as the door closed behind him,Kunj again looked up towards Twinkle but this time Twinkle chose to look down

Kunj slowly started walking towards the bed

"May I?",asked Kunj

Twinkle nodded indicating him to sit on the bed

Twinkle and Kunj didn't say anything.They both kept looking at Twinkle's hands as she kept playing with her rings on her fingers

"Kya tu theekh hai?"

"Nahi Kunj",said Twinkle looking up for the first time ever since Kunj had sat on the bed

"Nahi Hun mein theekh.You know mein thakh chuki Hun sabko yeh dikhate dikhate ki mein theekh Hun lekin you know what? Mein theekh Nahi Hun Kunj.Nahi Hun mein Theekh"

By now Twinkle had started crying again,she wasn't afraid to show her weak side right now,she just needed to let it all out so she could be at peace

"I'm sorry Twinkle"

"Kisliye Kunj? Jaane ke liye? Mujhe itna dard dene ke liye? Mujhe beech raste par chodhne ke liye? Ya phir wapas aane ke liye? Kisliye Kunj?"

Kunj didn't know what to say.When he had left the Sarna house to come here,he had promised to clear out all the
misunderstandings between them but here he wasn't able even able to answer her questions,those answers which Twinkle deserved to know.

"Twinkle..dekh mein jaanta Hun ki meine tujhe bohot dard diya hai..."

"Nahi Kunj tum Nahi jaante aur Naahi tum kabhi jaan paoge"

"Twinkle mera kabhi bhi tujhe dard dene Ka koi intention Nahi tha"

"Lekin phir bhi unintentionally tumne Mujhe bohot dard diya hai Kunj.Yeh sab tumhari wajah se Hua hai.Naahi tum Mujhe yun Iss tarah chodhkar jaate aur Naahi meri shaadi Yuvi se hoti aur Naahi yeh sab Hua hota"

"Twinkle trust me,mein kabhi bhi tujhse door Nahi jaana chahta tha.I love you"

"You love me? Are you sure about that Kunj Sarna? Kyunki agar tum Mujhse pyar karte toh mujhpe trust karte aur uss din jab meri aur Yuvi ki shaadi ho rahi thi,tum uss shaadi ko rokte"

"Twinkle Mujhe uss waqt Nahi samjh aaya ki mein Kya karu.Ek Jagah mera pura face change hogaya tha aur mein daara Hua tha ki Kya Tu Mujhe accept kar payegi aur doosri Jagah Teri aur Yuvi ki shaadi,I didn't know how to react,I had completely lost my mind.Agar meri Jagah tu hoti toh tu bhi waise hi react karti jaise meine Kiya"

"Nahi Kunj tum galat ho.Mein kabhi aise react Nahi karti jaise tumne Kiya tha.Tum jaan na chahte ho mein Kya karti? Toh suno,sabse pehle toh mein tumhari shaadi ko rokh deti aur phir tumse answers demand karti.Aur baat rahi tumhare appearance ki toh Kunj mein kabhi bhi tumhare appearance se Nahi,tumse pyar Kiya hai,tumhare dil se"

Kunj bowed down his head down in shame listening to Twinkle

He knew Twinkle was right and he hated himself at the moment for ruining his and Twinkle's life both because of a stupid misunderstanding created by him

Gathering a lot of courage inside him,he started

"Twinkle",he whispered

"Mein nahi jaanta ki Mein tujhse kis muh se maafi mangu.mein jaanta Hun ki meine Jo galti ki hai uski koi mafi nahi hai.Meri Ek galati ki saaza aaj bhi hum dono bhugat rahe hai.Par tu hi bata Twinkle mein kya karta? Mere hi aankhon ke samne Meri biwi kissi aur ke saath shaadi kar rahi hai.Twinkle woh waqat mere liye Bohot mushkil tha.Kis muh se tere pass aata Twinkle? Kis muh se? Jab mein khud aapna yeh naya face accept nahi karpaya toh how can I expect you to accept my new face? Mere maan mein Bohot saare sawal the,kya tu mujhe accept karegi,have I lost you forever? Jab mein 5 saal Pehle aaya tha tab saare family members Bohot Khush ho kar Teri aur Yuvi ki shaadi karwa rahe the.Twinkle atleast Tera saath uss waqat humari family thi Lekin meine Toh mera Sab kuch kho diya tha.Meri family,Meri biwi,mera baccha..."

As soon as Kunj said "baccha",he fell to the ground and broke down.

The most painful loss for both Twinkle and Kunj was the loss of their baby.No matter how much they tried,they just couldn't go back in the past and re play whatever had happened

Twinkle closed her eyes as she let her tears flow down her face.

Though she was angry,somewhere down the line she knew it wasn't entirely his fault.
It was her fault too.

She shouldn't have gotten married to Yuvraj in the first place.

She should have taken more care of herself maybe then their baby would have been alive even today.

Slowly,Twinkle got up from the bed and sat down on the ground right Infront of Kunj.

Twinkle took her shivering hands forward and ever so lightly placed it on Kunj's cheeks while his face was bowed down.

Twinkle then pulled his face near her and wrapped her arms around Kunj,pulling him inside her into a bone crashing hug

"I'm so sorry Kunj,mein yeh bhul gayi thi ki galti sirf tumhari nahi hai,galati Meri bhi thi."

Kunj looked up to meet Twinkle's eyes which showed nothing but guilt and regret.

"Nahi twinkle,isme teri koi galti nahi hai"

With that Kunj came forward and touched his forehead to Twinkle's.

They stayed in that position for long enough to compose themselves.

Twinkle was the first one to come out of their dreamy trance

"Kunj kya hum aage nahi badh sakte?"

"Matlab?"

"Matlab ki kya hum humare past ko peeche chodh kar aage nahi badh sakte?"

Kunj looked up to her in surprise.

"Sacch?" Asked Kunj as his lips formed a wide smile

"Haan Kunj dekho tumne Bohot Saari galtiyan ki hai aur meine bhi,mein abb kisiko blame nahi karna chahti Hun,mein bas sirf tumhare saath Khush rehna chahti Hun.Meri Jo baaki bacchi life hai mein usse tumhare saath bitna chahti Hun.Kya hum phirse start nahi kar sakte?"

As soon as Twinkle finished talking,Kunj couldn't control his emotions and launched himself on Twinkle baring her in a tight hug

Twinkle could hear soft sniffs but she decided to stay quiet.She hugged him tightly only to never let go.

"Of Course Twinkle.Mein bhi Sab kuch bhul kar phirse start karna chahta Hun.Humare past ko bhul kar."

Twinkle smiled listening to him.

"Kunj utho"

"Kyun?" Asked a confused Kunj

"Arre please utho na"

Kunj got up and forwarded his hand expecting Twinkle to take it and get up herself

But she didn't

Instead,she changed her position in such a way that she was kneeling down on one knee in front of Kunj,his hand in hers

"Kunj Sarna,kya tum ek bar phir se mere ho sakte ho? Will you marry me again?"

Kunj chuckled listening to his Sherni.Twinkle never failed to take him by surprise.

Just a few seconds back,he was thinking of proposing to her and here she was already on her knees.

"Arre bolo na jaldi,Meri knees mein pain ho raha hai"

"Puri zindagi Teri saath?" Asked Kunj with a smirk on his face

Twinkle pouted

"Soch le twinkle,agar meine Haan kahan Toh mein sirf Iss life mein nahi Agli Saari lives tere saath bitanuga.Bol manzur hai? Agar nahi hai toh jao?

With that Kunj started to go

Twinkle quickly held his hand to make him stop,she couldn't let him go this time.

"Manzur hai"

---THE END---

I'm really sorry I know I'm updating after a long time.I'll try to be more regular now.I'm not really keeping well so if this didn't live upto your expectations then I'm sorry Eshu🤗 Still hope you liked it😃
Edited by Jambread3 - 8 years ago


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Shaveerkti thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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'll be back after reading..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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so good..
thank you
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww
That's the epitome of cuteness
I loved the last scene so much
And the angst and the pain the guilt.
God magic, you did do magic with your words.
It all made so much sense
Like sooo much
I loved it to the core
Do update the others too, we're waiting
Muaahh..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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At first Kudos to you...
You are simply amazing to potray the feeling of Twinj.👏
Each dialogue is soo beautifully written that I felt the show is going on in front of my eyes.
And Leela & Twinkle's relation is WOW!
Mother-Daughter relation never wait for language;It's beyond of it.😳
And the Last Promise make me smile yaar.
Thank You K & Eshu for this OS.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
--unres--
Omg.. Kiara Babs..
It as simply amazing..
Love twinj very much..
Leela and twinkle bond..it's very special..
Donno.wat else to.say..
Just keep writing more..
Love you..
LavSriya..
Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful!
Loved how you showed both their emotions. They both were wrong and yet right!
Kudos 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...it was beautiful

The way u described their emotions...amazing 👏 👏

And the last part was soo cute..."are bolo na jaldi, mere knees mein pain ho raha hai"...typical twinkle...

Loooved it k...

Waiting for the others
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Kiara u r increasing ur writing standards.
First of of twinj emotions bang on awesome.
Yes it was no one's fault the twinj lost their baby.
Aww the last part twinj made up nd twinkle proposed😳
Nd k it was not good because it was n excellent piece of writing.
Nd continue with more stories.
It was beyond my imagination🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all i want u to know i am not at all good at writing huge comments thats why i keep it short n sweet
So i'll start in being twinkles crying made me cry too then leela n twinkle bond being their for each other then kunj ka apologize n both of them in guilt loved it beautifully written n words were perfect n twinkle's proposal was the cherry on cake or icing on cake
Phewthats all i can say but these words will never be enough to describe ur piece
Update Ur other os soon will be waiting
Love a loads

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