Ishqbaaaz OS: The Runaway Groom

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys
Back with an OS.
This time not IshKara for a change 😛😆😆 Its an Ishqbaaaz OS
The dialogues are mostly in Hindi. Hope thats not a problem!
Do read and leave your comments.
Have not proof-read so ignore the vocab/grammar.

...

Shivaay's Room:


"Kajol bhi bhaag gayi thi apni shaadi se DDLJ me" Rudra said excitedly.


"Aur vo Kareena.. Vo bhi bhag gayi thi na 3 idiots me" Omkara exclaimed.


"Aur..Aur vo Katrina.." Rudra started



"Fhat the Wuck! Will you two keep quite! Ye kya bakwas topic hai.. What should i do if these girls ran away" Shivaay almost shouted.


"Arre bhaiya, Hum to generally baat kar rahe hai.. Hume pata hai aap mein himmat nahi hai" Rudra laughed and Hi-fived Om.


"You guys discuss all this generally' ? And And.. Why do you think i would run away. Tia is the best for me anyday" Shivaay said angrily fixing his hair.


"You seem quite excited about the marriage..hun" Omkara said sarcastically, eyeing Shivaay with a smile.


"Ofcourse I am! Kuch ghanto me hamari shaadi ho jaegi! And she is the best. She has name, power, lineage. What else do i need?" Shivaay spoke as he looked at himself in the mirror, ready as a groom.


"Aur haan bhaiya ko personal Baba bhi mil raha hai.. Aur kya chahiye" Rudra laughed.


"Rudra, Yeh Tadi maarna band karoge please! It's irritating" Shivaay almost shouted.


"Tadi?" Both OmRu said in unison and smiled looking at Shivaay.


"Whaat?" Shivaay tried not to make a eye contact.


"Tadi se yaad aaya O, Anika Didi ki train kitne baje hai?" Rudra asked Om.


"10:45" Om replied looking at Shivaay. Shivaay looked away.


"Mai jaa raha hu.. Nakli wale happy dance practice karni hai.. Hamare bhaiya ka toh kuch ho nahi sakta ab" Rudra said making faces before leaving.


"What now? Why are you looking at me like this" Shivaay said as he saw Om looking at him.


"Abhi bhi time hai Shivaay! You know the truth! Just accept it! You love her" Om said calmly.


"I don't love Anika.. Do you get it?" Shivaay spat at him.

"Anika? Maine kab Anika ka naam liya, I was talking about Tia" Om chuckled.


"Oh Shut Up! I know you too well Om" Shivaay making a face.


"Tia has everything i need. She is the best life partner for me" Shivaay continued explaining.


"Bas ek cheez nahi hai uske paas!" Om said.


"What?" Shivaay raised his eyebrows.


"Tera Dil.. kyuki vo to Anika ke paas hai na" Om smiled.


"Ohh.. Damn.. You are mad! Let me get ready now! I am the groom.. Please"


"Cool.. See you downstairs. Take Care"


Shivaay looked at himself in the mirror. "Kanji ankhon walo pe ye gold sherwani bohot suit karegi"

Her voice echoed in his mind as he saw himself in a gold sherwani.

"Gosh! I'll go mad!"


...


Oberoi's Living Room:


As Om came back back from Shivaay's room, Rudra almost jumped on him.


"Kya hua O, bhaiya ko thodi akal aayi? " he asked with hope in his eyes.


"Naah.. Let's go for Plan B.. Call the girls" Omkara ordered Rudra.


In a while Saumya, Priyanka and Ishaana, all gather in Om's room [ Ish is Om's girlfriend in this OS]


"Guys, Time for Plan B.. You all ready???" Om asked


"Yes! Captain! Mission ShivIka is on!" All shouted in unison


...


Kapoor Mansion (Tia's House, The wedding venue):


The Baraat reached Kapoor Mansion. Everyone in Team ShivIka had their bluetooths on for coordination. Shivaay sat in the mandap. Tia descended down the stairs dressed as a bride.

Everyone looked and each other and smiled.


"Let's do it! Mission ShivIka Yayyy!! " Rudra said.


"Ishaana.. Are you ready" Omkara said over the bluetooth.


"Yes boss! Nakli jethaani ji ko bye bolne ka time aa gya hai" Ishaana said excitedly.


As Tia was going towards the mandap, Ishaana stopped her in between.


"Hayye.. Jethaani Ji.. You look so pretty" Ishaana said happily cupping her face in excitement.


"Thank You Ishaana" Tia replied politely and started moving forward and Ish stopped her again.


"Par ye su chhe?[Lol i dont know know gujrati, I mean Ye kya hai :P] " Ishaana said dramatically


"What Ishaana?" Tia asked.


"Ghunghat Jethani Ji.. Itna pretty face, Kisi ki nazar na lag jaye" She replied and covered her face with the veil.


"Aww.. Thank you Ishana.. You are so caring" Tia replied and Ishana held her hand to escort her to the mandap.


"Saumya! Ready?" Om said over the bluetooth.


"Yes! Bade baal wale bhaiya" Saumya replied.


"Tension ke time bhi itna lamba naam bolna zaruri hai" Rudra said irritatedly.


"Shut Up you cry baby"


"Saumya! Focus" Om warned


"Sorry bade baal wale bhaiya"


"Phirse" Rudra flared.


"Shut Up Rudra" Om/Saumya/Ishaana said in unison.


"Saumya! Go!"

As Tia was just about to reach the mandap, suddenly Saumya collided with her and her plate full of food fell on Tia's dress.


"Saumya.. What did you do.. You messed up my designer lehenga" Tia wailed in her patent voice.


"Sorry Tia Di.. Ye Rudra.. He pushed me.. I am so so sorry" Saumya said with puppy eyes.


"Chalo Tia.. We'll help you clean this, Ab aise to nahi baith sakti tum mandap me" Ishaana said and hurriedly took Tia upstairs along with Saumya.


"Priyanka! Ready?" Om asked.


"Yes! Bhaiyya" she replied.


"Be careful! This is the most important part" Om said and priyanka nodded.


Priyanka too moved to Tia's room. While the girls were helping Tia clean, Priyanka came behind them and put a chloroform handkerchief on Tia's face. Tia fainted in seconds.


...


After few minutes, the bride descended down the stairs again. Shivaay sighed. All this delay was making it all the more difficult.

After few minutes Shivaay saw her sit besides him. He sighed. The best decision of his life, he reminded himself.

Soon, Om came and sat besides Shivaay. Shivaay looked at him and he gave a weird smile. Rudra sat the other side and gave the same weird smile. Shivaay sensed something fishy and looked at the bride intently. Then shook his head and concentrated on the boring chants by the priest. Om signaled Rudra to leave, pointing towards his watch. Rudra gave a Thumbs up and left.


"Shivaay.. Listen very carefully" Om said in his ear very slowly.


"What?" Shivaay asked


"This girl..ye ladki..I mean.."


"Om i know she is a girl. Are you drunk?" Shivaay said getting irritated.


"Ohho! Omkara.. Jaldi bolo.. Meri shaadi ho jaegi Jeth Ji ke sath uske baad sentence complete karoge" The girl in the veil spoke up very slowly clearly irritated.


Shivaay coughed really bad listening to this and glared at at the girl and then at Om. Om grinned.

"Fhat the Wuck! Where is Tia?" he asked shocked


"Tujhe yahaan se bhaagna hoga Shivaay.. Ye Ishaana hai" Om said


"What? Why? What bhaagna? I'm not going anywhere" Shivaay shrugged his shoulders.


"Vo meri girlfriend hai Shivaay, Kuch to sharam kar" Om told him.


"What Sharam? I didn't ask you to get you here" Said shivaay completely shocked.


"Var-Vadhu phero ke liye khaade ho jaaye" The priest announced and the family members made both Shivaay and Ishaana stand.


"Su karo chhe Jeth Ji? I love Omkara. Ye kya Paap ka rahe ho aap?" Ishaana said tensed.


"Sirf 20 mins hai Shivaay! Anika ki train hai 20 min baad.. Vo chali jaegi hamesha ke liye" Om said.


"How can i run away from my own marriage??" Shivaay questioned.


"Maine pehle hi kaha tha.. Inse nahi bhaaga jaega! Meri zindagi barbaad ho gayi ! Ab mera kya hoga! " Ishaana almost cried dramatically.


"Whooah! Relax Ish.. Why are you so overdramatic?" Shivaay looked at her in disbelief.


"Dramatic? 2 phere already chuke hai Jeth Ji.. Please bhaag jao.. Please" Ishaana pleaded.


"Shivaay.. Run" Om ordered..


"Bade Bhaiyaa.. Please run" Saumya said coming from the back.


"Bhaag Shivaay Bhaag"


"Run bhaiya Run"


Rudra comes in his car at the main door.


"Mai to bhaag rahi hu.. Aap apna dekh lo" Ishaana said and started running. Om too started running behind her.


"Hey! Wait! I'm coming" Shivaay said and he too ran behind them.


All of them sit in the car and Rudra drives off.

"Fhat the wuck! You guys made me run away from my wedding! You guys are impossible" Shivaay exclaimed.


"Where are we going by the way?" Shivaay asked and evryone looked at each other in disappointment.


"Honeymoon ke liye bhaiya" Rudra said irritatedly.


"Shivaay.. Tujhe yad hai tu Anika ke liye bhaaga hai?" Om said with a fake smile.


"Oh! Yeah! " Shivaay said casually, flicking his hair.


"Oh! Yeah!?" Rudra/Om/Ishaana shouted disappointed.


"Uski Train ka time ho gya hai Shivaay, do you get it" Om tried to knock some sense in him.


"Shivaay Singh Oberoi.. Train Rukwa dega.. Railway Station kharid lunga" Rudra made fun of Shivaay and Hi-fived with Ishaana.


"Mera Chopper lekar aao" Shivaay said.


"Use land kaha karaege? Train ke upar?" Om said sarcastically.


"Don't worry Bhaiya.. Super Rudra aapko time parr pohocha dega! Aur Indian railway par thoda bharosa rakhiye.. Train konsa time par aeegi.. Logic.. Logic" Rudra said in a funny way.


"Shut Up Rudra, Just Drive"


...


Railway Station:


The Train had arrived and Anika boarded the train with Sahil. She was standing at the door, thinking about her lost love. The train started moving slowly. She was in her own world when she heard someone shouting her name. She could see someone running with the train. She cleared her vision and saw Shivaay.

[Please imagine DDLJ music in your mind]


He was running towards her, his hand forward trying to catch her. A wide smile came on Anika's face and she too forwarded her hand. Finally they got hold of each-other's hand and she pulled him up in the train.


"Aap shaadii se bhaag kar aaye hain? " Anika asked dramatically.


"Eww.. how do you guys even travel in such dirty trains?" Shivaay said looking at the train's condition"


"Aap yaha mere liye aaye hai.. Ya iss train ka swatch Bharat Abhiyan karne?" Anika asked angrily.


"Mai vo.. I mean.."


"Bhaiyaaa... Didiii" both of them heard a voice and they looked outside to see Rudra, Om, Ishaana too running with the train.


"Aree ye teeno bhi bhaage hai.. Aaj to maza hi aa gaya" Anika said excitedly and forwarded her hand for Rudra. One by one Om/Rudra/Ishana got into the Train.


"Wow Didi.. Aaj aapne mera DDLJ moment poora kar diya.. I love you" Rudra said emotionally.


"Haan haan.. Mera dil bohot bada hai.. Sabka khyal rakhti hu mai" Anika said boasting.


"Alright! Alright! Ab ye Tadi maarna band karogi tum? " Shivaay said annoyingly.


"Tadi??" Everyone said in Unison.


"Bhaiyaaa.. Jaldi I love you bolo Didi ko.. Nahi to hum Shimla pohoch jaege" Rudra said in his funny style.


"Aap sab without ticket. Ye paap hai?" Anika said seriously and Shivaay glared at her.


"Someone pull the chain" Om said.


"O, Aap jao.. Mujhe in dono ka confession dekhna hai" Rudra said taking support of the train wall and looked at ShivIka.


"Picture hai.. Jo dekhna hai! Chalo yaha se" Om Pulled Rudra's ears.


"Okay Okay! I love you! Alright! " Shivaay said.


"Aisa lag rha hai Jeth Ji ne I love you Fek diya hai.. Jise catch karna hai karle" Ishaana commented.


"Acha hua Didi, stamp paper par likh kar nahi diya" Rudra hi-5ed Ishaana.


"Rudra Ishaana, Billu Ji ke baare me faltu mat bolo" Anika complained..

"Ohhh.. Billu Ji" they said in unison and laughed.


Anika hugged Shivaay blushing and Shivaay hugged her back.


...


Okay so i don't know how this came up!

I tried to make it funny.

Obviously the inspiration was ddlj and 3 idiots :P

And as always i did not know how to end.

So do let me know how it was!


Love

Nidhi❤️






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Posted: 9 years ago
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you just made me laugh like a mad gal... ahahahah...
pure fun and entertainment... 🤣
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Though it a sivay and anika os but i loved ishana in this alot.
Totally awesome i must say!
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O my mata... What a story Sirr g ... You nailed it ... It was very sweet and funny ... I just loved it... All the dialogues uff maza aavi gayio... Last part you just nailed it ... Rudra's dialogues were too much funny... Thanks for such a sweet story...
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Too good. I had a smile all throughout the Os.
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dat was 2 funny 🤣 widout omru meri shiv ka kiya hoga 😆
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This is amazing!!!!!
I am still laughing🤣
This is such a sweet and funny OS😆
Do write another story soon!
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Hahaha... This one is so so good ..
Enjoyed
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Oh My God!!
Hilarious it is!
I was giggling so hard in the midnight 🤣
Amezing dialogues...
Awesome job! 👏
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Omg that was fantabulously amazing
Ishana & Rudra was such a treat in this Os
"I love you fek diya" 🤣
And hayye Om's brain sahi time pe chalta hai
I loved the entire gang and shivika

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