Sanjeevani FF Prt7Pg10(IOTM)

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hi guys m neelam..n i like reading ff..and thought of writing one..hope you guys will like it..and plz do excuse my mistake...coz i ain't good at it..and might put down wrong thing..lol

Sanjeevani

= i got it frm website..so if it's someone..then sorry..

It was beautiful morning, the sky was clear and the sunrays had already touched the earth but someone was unpleasant due to the sunrays. Trying it's best to cover the face but the curtain was not put on proper way therefore, it was easy for the rays to get it…especially on the face..

Getting annoyed covered it's face with blanket and was trying to fall asleep that a unpleasant noise distract it's sleep.. "mobile rangs"

Without seeing who it was on his manly voice who was still on it's sleep: hellooo..and yawn over the phone..

Voice: hello!! Still so rahain hain ap?

Don't know whose voice was it but it brought smile on his face, finally he decided to gets up. He throws away his blanket, we could see a cute smile, attractive hazel eyes and muscular body and it's non other than Armaan: 22 years young hot dude who is studying last year medical at the heart of America-New York University and lookin forward to be a doctor at India. he is very close to his granny and is orphan.

Ar: gd morning dda!

V: gd morning magar yahan par avi sam horai hain..(laughs) kya baat hain ap ne humein kal fone nahin kiya..lagta hain apni dda ko vulgaya..

Ar(holding her photos); no way dda..ap toh meri paas ho..aur aap kya kar rahin hain?

V(lowering voice): tumein miss kar rahan hu..

Ar(knew dda was feeling sad): don't worry 1 month ki toh baat hain..aur phir hum dono milkar kubh masti karenge..kyun dda?

Finally photo is zoomed..she is very sweet and lovely by the apperance and more sweeter than a sugar by her voice. She's his Dda: Married to a business man, who is widowed and lost her son n daughter-in-law at accident, she have her relatives at Shimla. She always talk to her grandson since he've gone USA for his study.

D: haan beta usi din ka mujhe be sabri se intazaar hain..acha av tu thik tara se nasta karke..uni k liye nikal ja..main baad mein phone karti hoon..bye..beta..

Ar: bye dda..love u muwah…n hangs the phone

Dda wearing light green sari with little embroidery at the end looks very pretty: pagal..n hangs her phone..

Somewhere at India

V: d mera towel?? N takes her hand out of the bathroom..

She looks a bit annoyed coz we can see her beautiful crossed eyes but with her sweet smile makes us feel that she is use of doing it. D is non other dan anjali: She can be sweet and rude at the same time. Hates to talk without proper topic, doesn't give a toss to the people who can't help themselves.

Dll Mil Gaye

She pass the towel to d girl at bathroom: yeh loh…patanai tum kapde nahin bhuti hon magar towel ko humesa..kaisa yehi left out karti hoon?..

Finally arrives an angel with smile on her face which shows she's sweet as candy and her beautiful eyes shows she's beautiful than any angel on the earth wearing rosy coloured pyjama goes next to her sister who was busy typing on laptop and lean her hand on her back putting her head on Dll Mil Gayeit: d kya kar rahin hain?(Ridhima=Sweet n loving girl, hate boys flirting with her. Best Friend with Sapna and loves her dad and sister who is looking forward to join Sajeevani by being a doctor.

Anji(concentrating on work): hmm..ridz, science assignment..tumne karliya?

Ridz tryin to figure out looks at the laptop screen speaks confidently: haan..humne kal hi toh ki thi..so ap phir se?

Anj(covers her face with her palm-shows she's upset): haan ridz..who file lost hogaya so..yeh paper se re-type kar rahin hoon..god..nazane kab khatam hogi..tum ek kam karna..plzz..

R(drying her hair in front of mirror..looks at where anji was): ab yeh plzz kahan se agaya..bataiye kya kam hain?

A(stills typing up): if u finish dying ur hair..can u get me coffe plz..

Ridz(packing up dryer); ok..and make her way to downstairs

While she was going, she hears someone footstep..near to the main door and gets bit nervous but tryin to act brave: kaun hain?

Someone with black briefcase and glasses on eyes with gentle smile comes out saying: ap aptak jaag rahin hain? He's non other than Dr. Shashank: He's senior doctor at Sanjeevani and have 2 daughters who is the only hope of his life. Very hard working and busy person, even known as best doctor in India.

Ridz relieving her fear: oh dad..nahin who anji d ko coffee banane chalti thi..and goes near to her dad..ap change hokar ayi ye..main khana garam kardeti hoon..ok?

Shashank cupped her face: thanks beta..but I had my dinner at Sanjeevani..and make his way to his room

Ridz turn on the kettle and put 3 spoon sugar, then 1 spoon coffe and last 2 spoon whitner and make her way to her room. Finally she reaches her room and smiles after seeing anji sleeping on bed(her laptop was still on) Ridz puts her cup away and takes laptop carfully away not disturbing Anji and finally she makes her sister comfortable.

Do you like my ff?..do u think I should continue and if you want to know what ridz goin to do…plzz…comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww they look so adorable..n fankx ur pm...i really like it..it's good n keep continuing..n fanks for all ur comment on my kzk ff...really nice.. 👏
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Originally posted by: mujhi

aww they look so adorable..n fankx ur pm...i really like it..it's good n keep continuing..n fanks for all ur comment on my kzk ff...really nice.. 👏

fankx soo much...i really appreciate it..fankx u once agian

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Originally posted by: dillmillgayee1

best everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

omg i can't still believe ur pm..it really made me happy n fanks for ur comment..n can i be ur friend?..lol

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Posted: 17 years ago
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really gd startin! remember to put lots n lots of AR sences! contd soon......... 😛
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nice ff soon my friends also comment on it so continue writing
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fankx both of u=pwincess kanzi and dillmillgayee1 n will try my best to put their scene..n sorry guys i can't really describe fing so bear with me..lol..i'll try to mix it with hindi and english..lol..and fankx for ur support it's my first time.. next part will be on tomorrow..coz i have to think..lol

love neelam
Edited by nihalfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hiiii 😊
nice ff plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey neelam,
nice start thx 4 da pm continue asap
......raym.... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey neelam,
nice start thx 4 da pm continue asap
......raym.... 😳

oops sowie double posted

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