I can't love u becoz I ................(TWINJ FF)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#1
  • 😛 Hi forum wasion thanx to all of u who commented on my intro ...but I got not so much response as like telly update
  • And sorry if the happens with this epi then I will not continue sorry for that
Now the epi will start from flashback han han abhi epi shurru bhi nibhua or pehle hi fb per sorry


A cafeteria is shown a boy in his mid twenties is sipping his capachiino he is talking on his phone

Boy: yr tu itna udas kun hai
Boy on phone : yr mera breakup hogya
Boy:*chuckles*
Bp: tu has mat samajh gya this time I was serious abt her
Boy: aacha ok but ye pyar vyar kuch ni hota
Bp: okk but jab tujhe hoga tab tujhe samajh aaega
Boy: hhm wo din kabhi nhi aaega aacha Ab bye ttyl
Bp: bbye

Now the boy eyes are shown then lips half face and he us our dashing hot ...cute handsome
Kunj sarna ( sid only)
He is wearing jeans and yellow shirt

He collect his things from the table and started to leave

On the opp. Side a girl is shown coming
Wearing a knee length floral skirt of black and white
Open hair almond coloured eyes
Sho sho cute girl
She is coming with full speed from opp side and

























Kunj and the girl bang with each other all her belongings fell down she bend to pick them up and kunj also
Her hair flies and she looked so beautiful
Ku: I am sorry
Girl:its ok

Ku gets up and the girl started to leave
Ku: ex cause me mmm... Can I know ur name
Girl *smiles* tw ...ummm tia
Ku: oh nice name myself kunj sarna
Both shakes hand and the girl leaves

Ku: wt an girl so beautiful
Shut up kunj and leave
Girl is watching all this and have an cunning grin on her face
Just wait and watch Mr. Kunj sarna how my revenge got completed


Epi ends here and many of u will not like my style of writing sorry for that


Keep reading guessing and commenting
Love sarovar23(bulbul)😊😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Ok nice beginning.
As far s ik the girl is twinkle nd she was about to reveal it but stopped.
So whats up with revenge?
Nice beginning👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Nice start...
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Got me guessing too much. Well.. I wanna read mofe
Update soon
Awesome beginning btw

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