MANAN TS: Till My Last Breath-[part 3: page 13] 5th august THE END - Page 11

You have penned it so well
it just get connected to our hearts
i just kept on weeping after reading the last part

l literary have no word to say.
its so heart wrenching update here
from yesterday l have read it four
times and every time l can't hold
my tears.manik and nishi's emotions
it just get connected to our heart
u penned it superbly


but l am so angry with u
why why u did this?l have no
complaints abt nandu's death but
l have problem only the last minutes
of manan.only 4 to 5 minutes talk
why?tum manik ko nandu ki disease ki
aslyat janneki badh dono ko thora aur
time at 2 to 3 hrs toh dehi sathta lekhin
no ehapa toh manik shock lagne ki
pehele sab khatam.l can't get over from
their last minutes talk.

u girl made me emotional yaar.
plz l want to know manik and nishi's
life after nandu's death. if u want plz
ek epilogue update pe de sakhti ho
plz .

thnx for this emotional but lovely
story. waiting for ur next story

I didn't come to know that u updated this story along with the other two... actually I didn't expect that u will update all three story on same day that's why I didn't check...

I was so happy to know that nandini survived...

but when she had problem in breathing while kissing him then only I was hoping of not any bad news...

u made me cry so much in later half...I'm still sobbing now...
tears aren't stopping...😭

title is justified...

I was crying soo hard...
I hate u for this end...
But thnx for this story..

The way you described ..sach mein rula diya😭

You are so bad... First you got me so happy that Nandini was fine and then you took all the happiness away by killing her in the end...
It was like reliving my uncle's death again... He was also cured of cancer first and then it had reoccurred and then he left us.

Originally posted by: bangfarju

l literary have no word to say.
its so heart wrenching update here
from yesterday l have read it four
times and every time l can't hold
my tears.manik and nishi's emotions
it just get connected to our heart
u penned it superbly


but l am so angry with u
why why u did this?l have no
complaints abt nandu's death but
l have problem only the last minutes
of manan.only 4 to 5 minutes talk
why?tum manik ko nandu ki disease ki
aslyat janneki badh dono ko thora aur
time at 2 to 3 hrs toh dehi sathta lekhin
no ehapa toh manik shock lagne ki
pehele sab khatam.l can't get over from
their last minutes talk.

u girl made me emotional yaar.
plz l want to know manik and nishi's
life after nandu's death. if u want plz
ek epilogue update pe de sakhti ho
plz .

thnx for this emotional but lovely
story. waiting for ur next story

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

You are so bad... First you got me so happy that Nandini was fine and then you took all the happiness away by killing her in the end...
It was like reliving my uncle's death again... He was also cured of cancer first and then it had reoccurred and then he left us.