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Raaz .. a mystry






Prologue-
Sanskaar POV-
I sat ina cloud if smoke... I was gulping alcohol... Slowly n slowly... I felt her touch ... I felt her fragrance... I felt her warmth.. it was so similar to that of my swara... "Swara" a tear escaped my eye... My wife she died 6 months back... Leaving me all alone.. I love u swara... I shouted in my room...
But after that incident.. I feel I am changing.. that girl is so much like my swara... I never believed her dead..nope they all say she left me.. but after that incident I have a proof... Yes I know now ki she isn't dead but jsut hidding... I know u r here around me.. looking at me... H Na...
Tell me Na swara it was u Na who came that day to my rescue... I love u... N if that girl wasn't u then .. only 2 things will happen one I will kill her two I will kill myself ... I can't betray u swara no I can't... I am sure my love will win.. n will win for sure... N if it fails.. I will kill myself...

But u know swara .. I love you more than anything... More than my life n I have full faith on my love ki we will meet soon... Very very soon...
I know I can't betray u ... Never.. I know it was u... U r here Na Swara...
I touched her picture n now I couldn't control... I cried ... N cried for long... I don't when .. my eyes got heavy n I slept ...
Sanskaar POV-ends




Characters-
Sanskaar Maheshwari- A business man.. married to his wife swara... He is now a drunkard n a smoker... Heis swara's Devdas... He does not believe that his swara died... An incident made his believe stronger... But also made him doubt himself n his love... He is scared of betraying his love unknowingly n unwillingly...

Swara Maheshwari- A lady dead 6 months before... Loved her husband sanskaar to the core.. it is tough to believe that even death can separate these two...



Sahil sengupta,- Sanskaar's business rival.. wants to throw him out n take the top most posaion like sanskaar... He wants be the biggest business tycoon like sanskaar..But couldn't do so... hence he switched on a brutal path... He wants to kill sanskaar bit somehow.. in his initial attempts could only kill Mrs swara Maheshwari n not sanskaar..
A mystry Lady- she is the girl who saved sanskaar from an attack by sahil... She spent a night with an unconscious Sanskaar...

How? Why ? What ? When ?... Who is she? ... Etc etc... Keep reading mi will soon update it...
N one more thing.. jita jaldi n zada response the faster n quicker will I update...
So do leave ur replies... egarly waiting

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Raaz Part-1
A/N - hi all Thanks for reading the prologue...Pls do leave replies pls do respond n leave replies ...

Sanskaar POV-
I woke up... N saw my self on edge of the bed... My eyes were swollen... I was crying all night.. but something which made me wonder was my comforter on me.. I never took it... How did it came... No no.. when I slept in my drunk state then too I remember I just held a picture of my swara... N no comforter on me... Wait what .. where is the picture.. n threw the converter away n scanned the whole room when I found it in its perfect place... The night table text to my bed... But when did I keep it .. n how .. this was the confusion... N Soon made my way down.. I had to search for the killer who attempted to murder my wife.. yes my wife my swara is alive n I know it... I will search her n her killer as well...
I reached the dinning table... I called my maid.. I asked her to serve the breakfast but to my surprise she didn't respond... I called.again... But still no response... I lost my temper.. I again barked at her... But on getting no response I was furiously moved to the kitchen...
To my surprise she was lieing on the floor... Unconscious... Or may be dead I.walked to.her n change checked.. thanks heaven she was still breathing... I called the doctor n her family... The professional non elaboratively spoke it was because of shock...
What shock it might have been.. I thought.. her family took her n walked to the kitchen... I was walking across the counter I saw milk boiling... Hey it wasn't there before... It must have been brunt .. seems somebody just kept it there on the gas burner... I felt a touch on my hand... I turned n found no one... N again a few minutes later ... I felt a grip on my wrist... The touch was like that of my swara..But there was no one I turned my gaze again to my hand which finally touched the casserole... It was hot... I felt the touch vanishing... I was confused n then came another shock... it had my breakfast... Before I could get anything else what all had happened the milk boiled n I turned the stove off...
I searched for a mug to pour my coffee... I rolled my eyes all over the room... N found it...it was already out... I moved n picked it up.. below it was chit ..."with Love - Raaz"... Aah.. I picked it up irritated... N y not she is the one who had eaten up my head.. more than my search for the killer my is stuck on her.. several times from past three months ... Or almost every day she is around me.. troubling me more n more... Today she prepared this... N Everytime she leaves this note... "With love - Raaz..." ... I sat on the dinning table... N slowly blew air on the hot coffee... Followed by taking a small sip... My eyes formed Moisture... It was like my swara used to make for me...
A tear rolled Down my Cheek... I kept the mug on the table... N moved to her picture I held it n clutched close to my heart ..
I took it with me... N kept it on the table. . n ate breakfast with it...
Was I hallucinating... Am I imaging her here n there... Have I gone mad ... Or is it the truth... I opened the drawer n saw her dairy..
I started skimming through its pages... The first entry of this year... It said...

"Dear dairy..
U know today is the new year day.. I welcome u... Wese today me n sanskaar went out.. we visited the sea shore... We lit that air Baloon at exactly 12 n then.. under the open sky.. under the moon n starts... Surrounded by the fresh cold winds... We kissed ...
Dairy u know these days of my life are the best... I love him.. I love sanskaar so much... "
The entry ended ...
Flipping more through the pages...
I paused on a random page..
Some day in the March...

"Dear dairy,
See it's 2 am sanskaar is not yet home... Nowadays it is his habbit to come home late... N we can't even go on outings... He is always busy... He says it's the end of the financial year so he have to work very hard... I happens every year... I hate this time... March..Pls go away soon..I want my sanskaar back...I hate u March... Dairy pls ask this month to leave me n sanskaar Alone... "
I smiled.". I am sorry swara... ". I whispered slowly.. I was sorry for working long hours...
I moved further...

In April...there was N entery she did ... N I must say it was the best of my memories with her...
"Dear dairy
Today I am so happy... in fact sanskaar is too very very very happy... I came to know that I am expecting... I told it to sanskaar... He hugged me.. he is soo.. Caring... He is taking care of everything.. my diet... My health .. my walk... everything...
He wants a princess.. . but I keep on teasing him by saying I want my champ.. my prince...
U know it hardly matters.. boy or girl they would be ours... N that's the best...see he came again.. uff this time he had returned with some soup... Uff .. too much... He is talking to my tummy... Too funny sanskaar... "
I smiled ..
U know swara...I too teased u like that...
Fb--
Sa- princess... Listen... Ur muma is busy with her boyfriend let me n u talk...
Swara frowned..
Sw- what ..
Sa- haan h Na yeh tumhari dairy.. tumhari boyfriend...
Sw-shut up...
N she kept the dairy away...
Sa- uff chalo thank God..princess.. ur muma kept away now ask her to take the soup..
Sw- oye sanskaar... Champ sunno ask ur dad ki muma don't want any soup ... She hates it...
Fb--ends------
Her memory her childishness ...our fights.. everything thing moisture formed in my eyes...
Our baby... I loved them both ...
My aunt visited us n she use to say that it is baby girl .. Idk how she guessed that..I asked her how she is so sure... She replied saying she could guess it n she said she can bet she was r8... Me n swara smiled... uff my aunt...
The days were so good until
I reached the last dairy entery..
July
"Dear dairy,
I am so happy... So so so happy today was my b.day n sanskaar uff he is totally mad.. from the mrng it self he is giving me surprises... 12 midnight.. he woke me... Up .. we cut the cake he was continuously talking to my baby bump...aww sanskaar how adorable he looked... We cut the cake n then he made me sleep...
He prepared breakfast for me... N then even he took a day off.. around 5 pm.. the time I was born we cut another cake the one he baked .. n now he gifted me a pink arakali.. aah.. see Na my size is increasing n so is my weight but I am liking it for the first time... He is taking me out... For a surprise... I am so happy... Dairy I want us to be like this forever... ".

So did I swara... I wanted things to be like that .. little did we know ki as soon as we will reach the place the things I Never imagined in the wildest of my dreams will happen... I had arranged a surprise at the sea shore... For her..yes the same where we celebrated the new year... I stopped the car n walked to other side I held her hand n she came out... We were walking... I was Helping her.. when .. I herd a huge noise.. as If of a bullet .. I felt some thing splashed on my face n the next moment.. my life... My swara .. my baby.. all were gone... She lied in pool of blood...
"SWARA.." I screamed... I turned around n found no one.. I held her up .. n rushed to the hospital...
Doctors started to operate... I was sitting out ...my hands cloths everything turned red... They were all red due to her blood...
I went infront of the idol of Ganpati... I was praying for her safety.. when I felt severe pain in my chest ..I fell down .. my eyes Flickered... I opened them n saw the floor red.. the source of the colour was my blood... I looked up ... But I couldn't see anything all turned back...


2 Days. .later...
I gained my conscious... N then saw doctors around me.. I asked me where is swara...They said she died... I wasn't able to believe it was true... No it can't be.. I asked them I want to see her .. they said her dead body was stolen... How was it possible... I had a huge argument with the hospital authorities but then due to excessive stress n fell down...
I returned home n my life was gone...I was lifeless... I never believed that she was dead... No it can't happen... I at that time decided to find her as well as her killer... Idk y all the clues make me think it is Sahil... I am yet confirming it..
I kept her diary... Back n tried to leave when.. I was moving out .. the pages of the newspaper... Moved vigorously ... It felt as if wind was blowing when it was not... I felt strange n started moving out...when I felt her touch again... I turned n found no one .. I walked back n then felt a grip on my wrist... It pulled me to the news paper... I picked it up n read the headline...
It says ..
"Mr. Sahil Sengupta found dead mysteriously"
I was shocked I read further...
"The big business man of the city found dead mysteriously last night in his room.. Police found a lady in a miserable condition in a dark room at his place... "...
I felt the pull on the worst again..the force took me to the tv.. I turned it on..there the inspector answered the questions of the media
"We have found a lady... Her condition is not as stable .. she beaten up brutally..all she says is 'sanskaar'... "

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Raaz part2
A/N- hi all this the next part pls I want khulla n shandst response I will update the next part tommorow pls pls...
Sanskaar POV-
I was overwhelmed... I just ran as soon as possible but just when I reached the door .. it shut ... I was shattered.. I started shouting n Begging like a mad person to open the Door... "Raaz what u want ...Pls let me go..." I shouted almost breaking down...
I heard the sound of doors moving to n fro from my room... Well I had no option except to run upstairs... I reached my room...

The doors stopped banging... I wondered y Raaz wants me here... I was looking around with tears when my blazer felt a pull... I was dragged towards my Almera... I opened it.. n simultaneously my drawer slid out when it should not... I pulled out all the documents but only my marriage certificate fell .. I just picked it up..the all the documents in the drawer n ran...
Well the next was the drawer being closed.. yes it isn't in my dictionary ever since I met swara to close the Almera ... I want her to scold me for this Everytime...
Tears escaped my eyes .. I ran out n the door was open...I started driving the car .. when at a time was Graffiti.. "with Love Razz" ... I couldn't stop hence left...
I ran ran ran ran... Into the hospital... I reached the place where the lady in sahil's place found .. I was showed them my swara's pic n then our marriage certificate...
They let me enter.

I entered n all I could hear was..'sanskaar ... Sanskaar ... Sanskaar' ... I ran n took her pale body in lap...
"I am here shona .. " I whispered... N slowly n gradually she calmed down... Yes it was my shona...yes she is alright ... I pecked her forehead...
I waited... N waited ... N waited until she gained conscious...N meanwhile sleep embraced me unknowingly..I slept while sitting...
"Sa.. sa.. Sanskaar... " I herd her n woke up her hand was over my face...
"Swara..." I made her sit...
N then kissed all over her face...
"I can't believe ur fine.. pata h sab bole u died but I knew u didn't...".She Didn't respond to it..N hugged me..
"Save me sanskaar.. save me from that devil.." she shivered n her grip tightened...
N she sobbed...
I knew the reason... I pulled her even closer...

After about 15 minutes..She broke the hug...
"Sanskaar are u okay..." She quized
"Yes I am..." I replied" but y r u asking..."
"Woh that day I saw u were attached n ..N .. " she replied to my relief n touched my face checked my head to see the injury.. I had a slight pain their in b/w my hair...
"Was it u... " I asked. N held her hand...
"Han... " N she cried...


Few days later-
Raaz ... Is missing..our last encounter was at the time when swara was found... I wonder what was it.. y was it... how... These questions clouded my brain..But then as soon as I reached the hospital..I discarded them...
In the hospital
Swara was still in the hospital... I am with her all the time.. I talk to her every time... Doctors say I need to cheer her up be with her to get her out of the shock n trauma...
N today she started crying suddenly...
I reached their...
N she hugged me again...
"Swara... R u okay.." I asked she was silent n kept on weeping without uttering a word...
I pecked her forehead...
"Sanskaar our baby..." She spoke in b/w sobs...
A lone tear escaped my eye...
"Yes swara ... I know... " I said slowly...
"No sanskaar... U don't know... " She replied n I looked at her with confusion... "She was so small... N so cute... "
"Was our baby born... " I asked her...
Tears brimmed in my eyes..
I requested swara to narrate from the beginning...



Fb--
She got up... Heself ... She was surrounded by the machines...But he wasn't around... She was scared what if they had hurt him too... She freed her self from the grip of the devices... N took fumbling steps searching for sanskaar ...when a nurse held her... She enquired about him..N forced her to take her to him.. she reached to him ... he was unconscious... She sat by his side n took his hand in hers...
But then something stircked her mind...
She turned..
"H..how...us my baby...??" She asked ...
She felt broken when a thought of Lossing her came into her mind... She held his hand tight...But to her relief the nurse disclosed that the baby was fine... She was happy n overwhelmed...
She pecked sanskaar's hand ..
"Sanskaar..U see our baby is alive .. .. see sanskaar.. " she put his hand on her belly... N was smiling... A curved formed on the lips of an unconscious Sanskaar... When the silent storm arrived.. their happiness was too short lived... Someone hit swara with a rod... She fell unconscious...
"Aahh... Beautiful... " He held her before falling...
It was sahil... A wicked smirk... Spread all over his face...
"Well must say .. sanskaar u have the collection of the best things in the city... Be it ur wife or business..." He said" but u know what only I .. I Sahil Sengupta deserve to have both of them ... N now I will snatch them...
He lifted swara n started to leave..when hospital authorities questioned him he used money n muscle power...
Swara opened her eyes... She felt a certain Pain in her head.. but then she noticed the surroundings..They weren't familiar... She sat up with a jerk when a finger caressed her face sensuously... "Sahil... " She whispered pushing him away... She found herself on his bed... He was sitting next to him...
" Hi baby.." he greted her in a husky tone...
"Sanskaar... Sanskaar... Where are u .. sanskaar" she started shouting n panicking..
"Shhh... Baby he is dead..." He replied irritated...
Swara jumped off the bed...
Tears flowed from her eyes... She held her baby bump... Anger frustration and disgust was clearly shown on her face... .
"Sanskaar... Sanskaar ... Pls don't joke Na.. where r u..." She shouted...
Sahil couldn't control his rage n slapped her hard...
"Ek bar mein samajh nahi ata...that bloody rascal is dead... " She shouted holding her hair...
"Aaahh... "She winced in pain..."never my sanskaar can't die... He is alive... N I know that... "
She sobbed...
"Sanskaar .. where r u... Pls ... See Na .. " she cried again...
N he again slapped her ..
"Sanskaar is dead.. u have to accept it... ". Sahil again lied..
He came closer n swara shifted back... He smirked n moved closer...
"Baby .. don't be afraid of me... Just don't take the name of my rival .. I hate it.. u know u r so pretty... N so appealing... Look at urself.. pink cheeks ..rose lips... Silk hair.. u r provoking a beast in me... " Sahil spoke moving closer when swara hit the wall..
"See now " he continued n moved to a shivering swara .."u don't need to put this sindoor... Especially for that sanskaar... If u want wear it for me..."
The next moment sahil felt a force on his cheek.. Sw-Ra slapped him hard n pushed him away..
". U dare not come close to me..N I know my sanskaar isn't dead otherwise I would have died as well... " She started running towards the door n tried to escape but her baby bump he condition hampoered her strength n stamina.. she couldn't do that. ..
Sahil got hold of her n pushed her into a dark room...
"Now I will see how n when ur sanskaar will save u... I think he will be dead by now if not by my bullet then the news of ur death will kill him... "He continued..
"U will now die everyday..untill u forget that sanskaar n come to me.. just a night stand will be enough for me to let u go but u have to come to me... "

"I won't ever betray my sanskaar... I won't kill me I'd u want to.. u jerk.. " she too shouted back...
N sahil shut the door n went away...
Days passed n sahil every day tortured swara .. she saved herself from him just because of the courage sanskaar"s unconditional love gave her...
She lived for her baby
One day-
Swara was in the dark room. .. she was crying continuously when she cried in pain...
"Aah... Help... Aah... Sanskaar... Aaahh... "
Sd he bangged the door...
"Help ..Pls someone open the door. .. pls aaah.. sanskaar.. hh...".
It was her labour pain.
Sahil came n opened the door...
Sahil- swara stop taking his name again n again..
Sw-pls sahil help us... Me n sanskaar..our baby ... Pls take me to the hospital...
She held his feet n begged him to help her... Sahil held her hair n dragged her out... He sat on the sofa n started drinking... N swara continued to wince in pain.. he enjoyed her condition n took her to the hospital in the semi unconscious state...
He wanted the baby to die but unfortunately for him she survived.. yes it was a baby girl...
Swara was so happy...
She held the baby in her hands delicately.. her features were like her...N actions like sanskaar... She was looking at her mother in amusement.. swara pecked her forehead... N the baby touched her cheeks which were blue due to the slaps n torture sahil gave her...
She had tears in her eyes... Seeing the baby... But sahil threw her n her baby in a dark room again... Swara begged him for the freedom of the baby n her own self but he denied...N Beated her ... She just sat in a corner waiting for Sanskaar to come .. who like a mad was searching for her.. he was dead without her...
Sahil enjoyed his suffering.. but the only wish of his which remains unfulfilled is getting swara... He wanted swara on his bed...
He tried to harm the baby ...N swara saved her anyhow...
2 weeks later...
Swara was sitting in a corner with her baby... She was pale n week... So week... The baby cried out of hunger n swara was trying to calm her down.. she herself didn't eat anything for long... She was crying... She couldn't feed the baby.. she somehow managed to control her... She stopped crying n slept in her mother's embrace...
Swara..her head spun like anything... She fell unconscious with the baby in her hand .. when sahi came ...He thew ice cold water on both of them... Swara was furious..She slapped hi. 5 times...
" U have any shame .. I am some one's wife.. we have our baby pls let me go... Pls.. what u want Han. ... She bend down to lift the newborn baby but sahil pulled her...
"U.. I want u ... " He shouted n swara sensed he was drunk...
"Sahil get out... N get lost u r drunk... " She pushed him..bit he held her hand n dragged her to his bed..He pushed swara n came over her... She was protesting... Bit he was no one to listen... He Removed his short n threw it.. he threw her dupatta away on the floor . .. n tore a sleeve of her dress.. he stated placing wet kisses on her shoulder... When swara git hold of a vase n she hit him... .sahil fell unconscious on the ground... She covered herself n ran to her baby.. she lifted her up n started running out when his men caught hold of her... They dragged her n tied her feet n hands they snatched the baby away from swara.. the baby cried due to hunger n cold.. Swara begged then to leave her bit they didn't..soon sahil gained conscious...
He came out n pressed her face in b/w his fingers..
"U bloody w***e ... I will now teach u a lesson... He poured cold water on the baby ..She cried more.. Shail holding the baby in his hand .. aww Babu ko thabd lagi..Wait.. he got hold of some liquor n from a spoon started dropping few drops of liquor in her mouth..He again held the baby carelessly... Swara was Begging him..
Sw-sahil take me with u do what u want but pls leave my baby...pls ..I am ready to come with u pls leave her...
Sahil- no swara darling now u have to pay the price to insult me... U slapped me hit Me Na now I will show u...
He dropped the baby from his hand n it fell on the ground... The ecohes of her crying stopped...
"Princess.. " Swara cried ..
But no her princess left her for forever.. she dragged herself n saw her dead baby...
She was too shocked...no already sahil claimed that sanskaar was dead n now their princess... She didn't know what to do ... She couldn't handle the shock n fainted..
Fb ends------...


Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Raaz part3
A/N- hi all this is the last part of the ts.. pls do leave replies .. n I will soon give it's epilogue as well.. sorry for the delay had my exams... infact have them...

Swara was crying uncontrollably... Sanskaar was numb n broken... His princesses.. his daughter.. he loved her before her birth so much but .. it was so unfortunate his daughter... He couldn't even meet her once .. he couldn't even hold her in his hands... His princesses.. was killed Brutally he pulled swara closer... He had tears in his eyes ... He was helpless.
Sanskaar POV-
I hate myself..I am neither a good husband nor a good father... I couldn't even save my wife n daughter...
But then swara said something leaving me all shocked
Sw- Sanskaar pata h that day I escaped sahil
I cupped her face
Sa- when
Fb--
A week after the baby died...
Swara was all lifeless... She had a fear of losing sanskaar as well...
It is the Time when sahil came to know about sanskaar getting proofs against him.. he was furious n then decided to kill him...
Sanskaar had asked a man to meet him on a cliff near the river...
Sahil came to know about it... He himself wanted to kill him..
But before leaving he entered swara's room
Sahil- swara..
Caressed her face sensuously..
She shifted back...
Sahil- kab tak bhagogi swara ... U know I have a good news.. today I am going to kill ur so called husband... N then I will make u mine forever...N ever...
Saying this he tried to kiss swara forcefully... She pushed him...N ran to a corner...
Sw- stay away u bas***d... U can't him... U can't kill my sanskaar...
Sahil moved closer... N blocked her way...
Sahil- I can n I will.. u just wait n watch...
He lifted her chin..
Sahil- u wait baby... Don't go anywhere... I am coming soon... N then we can have some fun..
He winked at him n went away...
Swara POV-
I was scared I could not get what to do when a pink glowing light entered my dark room I was shocked I tried touching it.. but I flickerd n moved away...
It was magical... It passed through the keywhole n the door of my room went agar... I slowly opened it n found no one around all his men were out with him.. still a few were there...But not all of them... I followed the pink spot.. which led me out from the back door .. escaping wasn't that easy... There were electronic fencing around his house.. what I could do I wondered when the light popped n hopped n took me to a part of the wall which was broken.. I used a rod n broke it... The light kept on poping n hopping... Till I reached a cliff .. I could hear water flowing it was all silent.. but it broke when I heard a loud shout...
It was a male voice .. "Aahhh... " I ran in the direction of the noise n saw sanskaar... Sahil hit him badly with a metal rod.. n pushed him into the river .. it was flowing ... Water was flowing ... N it was taking him along.. I ran... N saw his body drowning..He had already lost his conscious... I jumped along... I managed to get hold of him... I was patting his cheek but no response.. I clutched him tightly..if we die we will die together n if survived then too we will be together .. I tried to swim with him.. n somehow with great difficulty we touched the bank.. I pulled Sanskaar.. I touched his face.. I was so happy..we were together... I looked around we were close to our farm house... I somehow took him there in.. the watchman should not be scared seeing me... Hence I covered my face... He let me enter... With sanskaar.. I switched on the heater... I changed his clothes.. bandaged his wounds... A sort of first aid.. I asked the watchman to go n call the doctor... It was an isolated place where the farmhouse was situated... I was waiting for the doctor but the watchman had informed me that it will take sometime around 4-5 hrs till the aid reached here... I switched on the heater... But then it stopped working..I didn't know what to do sanskaar his lips were turning blue ..
I was worried... He was shivering... I then moved to him n placed my lips on his.. yes my body was much more warm than his... I rubbed his arms... His feet .. his hands... His chest... I cuddled with him n slept... providing all the required heat...
Swara POV-ends
Sanskaar POV-
I was sleeping .. I was unconscious when I felt pain in my head... I couldn't see anything... I turned around n saw a girl... I couldn't see her face but felt her hands touching my bare chest.. n my hand was wrapped around her waist... I rubbed them n realised that she wore a saree... Idk what happened to me with her touch I was overwhelmed... But still couldn't aee her face... She woke up.. n then the next moment she sealed my lips with hers.. we kissed.. idk .. y I did that... But then I again lost my conscious due to excessive pain...
Sanskaar POV-ends
Swara POV-
He again lost conscious the little he gained... I rested my head on his chest... N then I heard the sound of a car ... It was the doctor.. I covered my face again... N he started checking sanskaar... He inserted drip in his hand... N then gave me medicines.. n he left He came from some charitable hospital.. no fee was charged .. Sanskaar was still unconscious I thought to make something but what .. the farmhouse was locked up since long.. I decided to go out.. my biggest mistake.. Sahil saw me in the market place n took me with him...
POV-ends
Fb ends------
Sw-Sanskaar r u okay
Sa- swara I am so so sorry I was not there with u ..
Sw- hey sanskaar it's okay...
Sa- swara but..
Sw- shh.. I love you...
Sa- love u too.. but Swara I am not a good husband nor a good dad.. neither ..I could save u nor my daughter.
Sw- Sanskaar pls don't say like this...
Sa- par...
Sw- shh...
They tighten their grips around eachother...
Sa- tell me swara what else did that jerk do... He killed our baby.. he tortured u... But how did he die...
Sw- I I .. I really don't know sanskaar... I don't know... It was still a mystery to me...
Sa- matlab...

Fb--
Swara was in the dark room almost lifeless.. when sahil entered n threw ice cold water on her face...
Her body had temperature due to fever n now she shivered to more extent...
Sahil- so howz u baby doll...
Swara could not speak a word... She manged to slowly shift backwards...
Sahil- swara darling kahan jaogi.. tell where n how will u escape me... Sanskaar is dead ur daughter is dead.. tell me..
Swara just kept quiet she didn't want him to know about Sanskaar being alive...
Sw- s.. sahil ... Stay away...
Sahil- y dear
Sw- pls ... (She said almost shivering)
Sahil- for whom u r saving urself.. ur dead sanskaar .. ur dead daughter... Han..
Sw- sahil just go...(in a stern voice)
Sahil- no baby not so easily... Wese u know I shouldn't have killed ur daughter just imagine u on my bed with me n she would be working like a maid all day ... Nahi.. wese what u called her 'Princess' ... Uff my mistake but no worries come ... Come to me.. Swara...
Hearing nonsense about her daughter swara was enraged.. she slapped sahil hard. .
Sw- be in ur limits...
Sahil- (rubbing his cheek)- wait I will show u...
He started putting ice cold water on her... Swara's fever was growing more n more but he had no mercy... He enjoyed her shivering in cold..
Sahil- Swara u have only two options die or sleep with me...
Swara was loosing conscious n Sahi was enjoying her condition when she saw the pink light again... She tried touching it but it hoped away n entered into Sahil...
He started sweating ... He was chocking... He losened his clothes...removed his shirt... But sweat wasn't drying instead it grew more. ... His body then started feeling as if set on fire... Burn marks come on his skon...He ran here n there .. his eyes fell on the ice cold water.. he pour that onhis body.. he was relaxed... But then started shivering.. his burn marks started irritating him... They turned red... His blood was clotted... And mysteriously .. his capalaried n vein tore ... causing internal bleeding... He vomited blood... Blood clots... Turning the floor red...
He felt it was easier to die but no it seems even the Angels of death were enjoying his state ... His body shivered like that of Princess... N was heated ... He was lying on the floor.. begging for mercy but like he was merciless was was some one else...
Swara could not bear the horrible seven n lost conscious...
Sahil shouted screened but no he couldn't even die... After 3 hrs of torture .. he died.
Fb ends------
Sw- pata nayi Sanskaar how it happened but...
Sa- she swara pls ... Don't cry...
He himself could not stop but tears flew from his eyes continuously...
Swara was like a leaf shivering in his arms...
"Sanskaar... " She screamed as the lights went off...
Sa- swara... (Rubbs her back...) ... (Wet voice)- swara .. calm down... Pls...
Sw- Sanskaar... Bahar lights h...
He looked around.. yes it was true... Only their room was all dark...
Sa- do.. don't worry swara ... Wait I will see...
Sw- (clutching his shirt) nahi.. no .. pls no sanskaar... Tum kahin nahi ... Jaoge...Pls stay... with me... Don't leave me alone in this darkness.. pls...
Sanskaar rubbed her back.. n arms...He pecked her forehead..
Sa- swara see I am here only... See Na...
She was breathing heavily... He wanted to see her but she didn't allow to break the hug...
Sa- shona...
He wiped her sweat as much as possible...
When the door opened... They couldn't see anyone... It was closed n locked again...
They looked at eachother...
They could see a translucent figure approaching them...
It moved closer n closer...
Her eyes .. nose features. . hands all were like swara...
Sanskaar broke the hug .. he touched her face n her arms... N felt her... Yes it was his swara.. swara who was beside him but who was the one approaching them...
He was scared.. scared to loose her he took her in a bone crushing hug... So did she...
They had closed their eyes and when they opened them all could they see was luminous words in the air saying"With Love Raaz"...
They broke the hug n looked on...

Raaz POV-
I entered the cabin.. mom n dad were scared ... Ofcourse a shadow scares all... They opened eyes n I wanted to tell them .. hence I indicated... Writing.."With love Raaz"..
Dad imidiately looked at me... N so did mom..
I bent down n touched... Or rather gave a fail attempt of touching their feet...
They were shocked but kept their hand on my head...
"Raaz... " Dad spoke up in a shivering wet voice...
I smiled ... N spoke..."yes dad..."..
Mom tried touching my Cheek .. but in vain...her hand went through me .. tears escaped her eyes... "Princess..." She slowly whispered...
"Yes mom say it Na... " I asked her .
But she couldn't say a word.. I extended my hand n touched her wound... The only satisfaction I have is reuniting mom n dad n yes killing that jerk...
How dare he torture Maa... Try to kill dad... ... Then I am left with regrets of loosing them... Dad he used to talk to me hours... At night .. me his Unborn baby... N Mom... She had gone through so much for giving birth to me...
I got up started to leave... It was my fate... DEATH...
"Raaz .. Princess... Where r u going ... " They asked walking towards me...
I turned to them..
"Maa papa pls sit... Mom u r not well... Pls ... I... I will come back soon... " I said...
" No pls don't go... We won't be able to lose u again..." They pleaded...
"Mom dad.. it was my Destiny ... I will come back for sure... " I replied with watery eyes and left...
I herd mom crying badly... Dad was again n again pleaded me... But I couldn't stop...
I left switching on the the lights...
"Bye mom and dad" I whispered and left...












Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Harshi,😊
Very interesting prologue and cs.😉 I also hope that Swara is not dead.😕 Poor Sanskar. Felt bad for him.😭 And Sahil!😡 I have started to hate him right from the cs only!!!!😆 And who's the mystery girl??😕 Eagerly waiting.😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Kya wo mystry grl swara ha?is she smhw hostaged by sahil?swara isnt dead ri8?4m far away she z with sanskar ri8!
Dnt wnt swara 2b dead...
Waiting 4 nxt updts of ur swasan stories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Harshita dear...
Superb update...full of suspense..will wait for story to proceed...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
interesting prologue.
continue soon.. thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow raaz like a moive its interesting i like to read it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 1 Harshi.😳
Unresed!!😃
Awesome Awesome Awesome!!!!!👏👏👏
Its so intriguing!! Very interesting!!!😉 Felt bad for Sanskar.😭 Poor boy lost his wife and baby.😭 And who's the mystery girl?? Is she Swara?? SwaSan had a good time together.😃 But their good time was cut short by Sahil!!😡😭 Hate him!😡 So he is murdered by someone right?😕 Good!😆 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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