AsYa OS: Teaser 4- I missed my periods, Asad- Page 32- 23rd Aug - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved reading it to the core
So glad that they finally have cleared all their misunderstandings
Happy to see a changed asad
And now the turn of the family to get to know about them
Looking forward to the mixed reactions from each of the members
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb awsm one
To gud
Luvd it
Romantic update
Waiting for d nxt part..with some lovy scenes
Thnx for d pm
Cont soon
T.c.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Even I too did not liked wat Zoya did. She wud have simply let him go after d deal he came to New York but she chose to take revenge by giving him d same pain he gave her. But being someone's nature to do sumthn does not excuses of his horrible behaviour. Hope u did not mean dis. Wen a person's nature is to bully weak people its called a bully which can't be excused whether its nature or planned. Zoya did wid plan but still wat all Asad did was wrong. Yaa, Asad may not be able to trust her but it will make him realize how much he hurt Zoya more after his mere sorry every time which made her lose her trust on him. As for back-stabbing, after airport engagement wen they returned home Asad did d biggest backstabbing to Zoya by saying d engagement was fake which he only did to please his mother n sister. Wen Asad traded Zoya, he did d biggest backstabbing by breaking Zoya's trust at d time wen she trusted him d most n made him her 1st priority. So if Zoya is bad Asad is worse.



agree there is no excuse for 1's behavior .. in the show... asad just a dummy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


No, I am not angry. I love seeing comments n then replying it😃. As for negative or positive part, d story has not yet over. Still more to come. I think its hard for many to see Zoya as a bitch or grey person but d same people easily forgive Asad in many stories even if he is an abuser, a rapist or even a murderer. In many stories, its Zoya who is insulted for a long time by Asad n she always forgives him easily wid hardly any efforts 4m Asad. In many shows, d so-called heroes plays wid heroines emotions to satisfy their big fat egos or some revenge. D recent one in dis category is ETR2's present track. But wateva Zoya did she did wid a reason. I don't condone wat she did but she wanted to show Asad dat she is not d same old Zoya who he can take for granted n use like a punching bag. In d show, Asad did not told Tanveer to leave d house even after they were engaged n almost married each other. Zoya also cud have made Matt stay in d same house during their live-in relationship but she did not. She did not ignored him n always spend time wid Matt like he ignored her for Tanveer. He always hurt her wid nakli sagaai n if she wud have agreed to marry him he wud kept on hurting her wid using more words like nakli sangeet, nakli mehndi, nakli nikaah. So Zoya brought dis nakli live-in relationship to show him how much hurt dis nakli word can cause anyone. She purposely brought Nikhat's plight to hurt him cuz he is her brother cuz he too hurt someone's daughter n sister. I think u have not paid attention to some of d parts. Please read my reply on sasir n anopama's comments. If Zoya was playing wid his feelings why she confessed her feelings, danced romantically wid him n slept next to him wen he wud not remember anyway d next morning as he was intoxicated while she was not?



i see there is some stories... which will put zoya(any girl) very below...and expect her to do miracle..
what they dont understand the negative message... they sent through writing ..

the part hard to see... not that zoya show her strong side bye her changes...i accept that..,

that she can pull that face with no emotions ... was hard.. she cry after he leaves ...

in the show worst... they show asad is a alone person... no friends ... that is self a minus

i wish they show more stronger side then a very week side asad and zoya in the show...

thanks for your explanation 😃 😃 glad you are not angry 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
6..

the test was hard... but asad manage to pull it off...

not many can stand in real life...

he went back apologies to zoya's family...

good enough...

the changes asad... look more human then robot...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


As said in d above comment, even if Asad may have hard time trusting he will realize how his actions r making her to difficult to trust him. As much as I did not liked Zoya playing wid his feelings in dis story I actually wanted Zoya to play wid his feelings in d show wen he brought back her home after trading her to make him realize how he broke her trust.



the show is a bullshit... it look so wrong ... you have explanation ... for asad to see the depth
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was gud bt im too late srry fr tht
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Posted: 9 years ago

Teaser 4: I missed my periods, Asad(for 8th Shot)

Asad n Zoya came to Bhopal after 2 months of living 2ghtr. Wen they came in KV, Dilshad came to her n hugged her but Zoya did not hugged her as she recalled her 10 day challenge. Dilshad is hurt. Zoya then hugs her realizing she regretted her mistake.

"Baaji," said Humeira.

"Hey my sweet sister," said Zoya wid a smile n hugged her.

"Asad, I am so tired. Lets go to our room," said Zoya.

Asad was going to his room n to everyone's shock Zoya also went to his room.

"Wats happening?" asked Shirin shockingly.

"They r used to living wid each 4m 3 months," replied Najma coolly.

Just then, Zoya came out of Asad's room.

"Oops we forgot dat we r back in Bhopal," said Zoya wid a smile n went to her old room.

In d evening, some relatives n guests have come. Asad n Zoya comes n sits next to each other in d hall. While others r talking, AsYa r smiling while seeing sumthn in Asad's cell.

"Arey ye kya? Asad n Zoya r still not married but still talking n smiling so freely in front of elders. Humaare zamaane me nikaah se pehle aisa nahi hota tha," said an elderly woman.

"Humaare zamaane me to ladka aur ladki akele me bhi baat karne se sharmaate the par ye to badon k saamne bhi itna khulkar baat kar rahe hai," said another elderly woman.

"Kya humne kabhi aapke zamaane me aakar interfere kiya?" asked Humeira.

D guests just lukd at her clueless.

"Nahi na? To aaplog hume humaare zamaane me jaisa chaahe vaisa rehne do qki ye humaara zamaana hai aapka nahi. Aapke aur humaare me zameen aasmaan ka farak hai," said Humeira rudely n turned back to playing Candy Crush on her cell which was already doing.

D guests r shocked n speechless wid wat she said.

After some time, d guests left.

"Humeira, u were so awesome in shutting their mouths," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Vo kya hai na, Ayaan? I don't want any regressive crap in dis house. Wid great difficulty, we got rid of Asad bhaijaan's regressive crap which I don't want again," replied Humeira.

"Humi, let it be. He is really changed otherwise I wud not be wid him," said Zoya.

"Glad dat he changed cuz I don't want u to be hurt again," said Humeira.

In d evening, AsYa r sitting in Asad's room n chatting wid each other.

"Asad, I missed my periods. I feel like eating sour things," said Zoya.

"R u pregnant?" asked Asad.

"I am not sure," replied Zoya, "I don't know how its possible wen we always tuk protection."

"I did not had once or twice. Remember," said Asad.

"Yes, I remember. Oh no! I even forgot to take pills 2-3 times," said Zoya shockingly n asked, "Wat if I am pregnant?"

Asad n Zoya lukd shockingly at each other.

"We messed up," said Asad.

"Now wat we will do. We r not even engaged let alone married?" asked Zoya.

A/N: Humeira still seems to have doubt on Asad. How do you liked the new twist? Not everyone reacts happily on knowing they are pregnant that also an unplanned pregancy? What do you think should Asad and Zoya do? Should they keep the baby or abort it?

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I liked the way humid shut their mouths..
I am not fan of living in...so I won't comment

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