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wow...nice chapter...but u know I felt something is missing that magic used be in ur updates that I didn't feel here.hey m not saying that it was not good.it was really nice..I liked rey's lines here. those lines not oly meant for nil but for vickey and Rey himself.we could feel his pain of loosing taani in those lines.then comes vickey's feelings.the reason behind his break up was jealousy with her achievements which he can't gain but love is above all these things na its more abt u and us that me na.hope he realized how wrong he was and he will mend is mistakes...thanks for update and pm.keep smiling and take care 😊
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