FF Bitter Sweet Symphony-Thread 2. ch 33 - pg 128

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Miaprincess
Nice!! Update soon..

Thanks, dear! ❤️

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#512

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Dedicating this chap to - "Faith28" 🤗

This one's going to be a long one, so sit tight and enjoy!

Chapter 26

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Okay! Lots of thoughtful moments up there - bless Suman's internal femme sage. 😎

At the last bit, I hope you noticed how someone was checking out (or not trying to check out but failing miserably) someone. ☺️ Shravan and his robe is so going to be the death of his pissed off wife.

And the akhri pasta moment. Mamma mia! 😆 Did you enjoy that, guys? Pushkar had just confirmed in this chap, I guess, that this secret is in fact a groupie one. It's safe to say I'm preparing for a surprise and some more twists in the already twisty tale of the lawyer and the cook. How many of you're excited about it? Lemme know, I'm always eager to read what all you have to say. Your comments truly make my days positive, so pls comment. And also press the like button, that would make me extremely happy!

People who likes and comments both will get a pm from me. You can reserve a comment for the time being if you are busy.

Take care.

Lots of love, ❤️

Lara.

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Nileshni Devi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Hi Lara very nice update n yeah loved it when Suman was checking him out. What is instore for the next update wishing something romantic but firstly solve the puzzle.

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Zenab

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Posted: 8 years ago

#514

Hey Lara
Amazing update as usual and Shravan is behaving normally and Suman is pissed of
Waiting for next update

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bigddfan1

@bigddfan1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#515

u updated a long time

but teh chapter was worth watcing

it was awesome

and loved every scene

specially dinning table one

poor shravan had to adjsut with pasta😆

and u r brilliant in buliding suspense

pls update soon. waiting eagelry

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Shikha Singhania

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

Lara tune ki kara!!

Chauke pe chhakka maara!!

Dil kush karaa!!

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Shivangi

@Vishakha2092

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Posted: 8 years ago

#517

Awesome awesome awesome Lara!!!!

This is solo exciting!!

Cannot wait to read the next part...

A biiiggg...Sorry for not commenting on earlier parts...

I have been very busy and stressed lately on both professional and personal fronts...but this just made my day!!!

Amazingly written Lara!!

Keep writing and keep rocking girl!!!

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pal655

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Posted: 8 years ago

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ok first let me thank you for the pm😃.thank you lara di.

now ok so once again mysterious episode , we are missing something . i mean that mysterious attitude of preeti and pushkar or i have missed something😕. well hope i will soon configure it. let me tell you this is the most favorite ff of mine ,i love it and this is the way you keep us hooked and with every update your writing skills are expressed and just love to read it. take a bow👏

ok now i think sumo is getting a little more rude , i mean we all know what shravan did but suman was also not the innocent one , she should also realise that. didnt she play with his life giving content to her wedding with him for her helplessnes. ok leave it but i think sravan deserve some care as well.

i love this caring shravan . just loved when he said-i thought you left- dead man . 😳.

pls update soon and as always pm me😊

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Silverrmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#519

Wow Lara this is getting so interesting 😃 Brilliant chapters...just read the present and the previous update...I have a feeling that may be Ramnath, Pushkar may have spoken about Shravan's reason for marrying Sumo and Preeti might have heard it and her pura khandan must have known ...so something like that must have happened and they are not revealing it to Sumo. May be shravn wants to win her by putting lot of efforts.

Its seen that he really cares a lot for her these days...how he must have had a heart attack not seeing her in his room 😆 poor guy...sumo could only stare at his abs 😉😆 Yaar love your chapters ...its soo much better than what they are showing in the show...your's FF is a must read for me yaa. If I remember well you are one of those few whose FF I have regularly followed and never wanted to miss it. You are one of the best writers I have come across in this forum and I'm glad to have come across you...ek aur baat your writing so reminds me of Hamlet's( Hammie) she is equally brilliant like you. Reading your FF always brings a smile on my face 😃...Thank you Lara for such wonderful updates...Thank you for the prev PM...Till then take care.

Edited by pearl100 - 8 years ago