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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
poor maan running away form bua...and geet finding the whole thing hilarious...she still has no feelings for maan whatsoever...wonder when that will happen...what is maan gong to do
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PART 24
Maan goes to talk with pratap
Maan: Dad ye aap kya kar rahe hai?
Pratap: kya kiya maine jo tum itna chilla rahe ho?
Maan: Wo ladki pari kyun bulaya aapne usko , maine kaha na mujhe shadi nahi karni.
Pratap:Kyun kya problem hai? Itni achhi hai , modern hai, well educated hai, she matches with our standard of khurana's. Mere dost Rakesh Kapoor ki beti hai wo .You know him maan. He is very nice man.
Maan: I know dad but i dont want to marry . why dont you understand dad?
Pratap: I understand very well. Thats why I have called pari here.Tum dono ek dusre ke sath waqt bita sako samajh sako. Spend time with her.
Maan: But dad
Pratap: Its dinner time come down fast
And pratap leaves . Maan feels frustrated. He goes behind his dad. At dining table all are gatheted.
Bua: Geet ye hai pari maan ke liye isi ka rishta aaya hai. Pari bete ye geet hai.
Pari: Hi geet .
Geet: Hi pari.
Maan was looking at geet .
Pari: Maan kaha hai .
Pratap: Ata hi hoga.
Just then maan comes. Geet avoids looking at maan as she remembers words of pratap.Geet observe that avni is not eating.
Geet: Avni kya hua khane ho hath tak nhi lagaya?
Avni: mujhe nahi khana.
Bua : kyu nhi khana ? Aise to kamjor ho jaoge beta?
Pari saw her tried to talk with her.
Pari: Agar aap dinner finish karoge to main aap ko chocolates dungi.
Avni looks at geet.
Aman: Avni khana khao . Koi chocolate ki jarurat nhi hai.
Geet: Aman tum aise gussa mat karo. Kyun nahi khana?
Avni: Kyunki aap mujhe khana nahi khilate jaise pehle khilate the .
Geet tried to hide her tears.
Geet: Bas itni si baat. Main aapko khilaungi khana.
Geet feeding her . All started eating.
Pari: uncle main kal maan ke sath office jati hun. Thik rahega na.
Pratap: Haa jarur
Maan: Dad ye aakar kya karegi?
Pratap: Wo kuch kam lekar bhi aayi hai. You help her to stud files. Wo bhi business join karna chahti hai.
All finished dinner. Geet was left as she was feeding avni. All left . Geet said avni to go she will come soon.
Nakul: Geet madam aap baithiye main aapko serve karta hun.
Geet: Nahi main le lungi aap apna kaam khatam kariye main le lungi.
Nakul goes to kitchen. Geet started eating as she finished she took dishes to kitchen. She came out of kitchen she saw Pari with maan. Pari was dragging maan with her. Maan saw geet.
Pari: Hey Geet chalo hum walk par jaa rahe hai.
Geet:Nahi. aap jao avni mera wait kar rahi hogi.
And Geet leaves. Maan realize Pari holding his arm. He says her to leave his hand
Pari: Chill yar. Kitna gussa karte ho tum. Aise gussa karoge to hum baat kaise karenge. Want to spend time with you.
Maan: Ok sorry. Are you really serious mera matlab hai kya tum sachme mujhse shadi karna chahti hun.
Pari: Haaye ye kaisa sawal puch liya . Tumse kon ladki shadi nahi karegi. You are perfect guy dear.
Maan: Boht late ho gaya hai. You should take rest. Kal office bhi jana hai.
They enters in mansion. Pari goes to her room . As usual maan pass Geets room sees light are off he goes to his room.
Maan to himself: Main jitna geet ke karib jane ki koshish kar raha hun. Wo utna mujhse dur hote jaa rahi hain. Pehli baar dar sa lag raha hai . kahi main geet ko kho to nahi raha na.
Next day,
All gets ready for their respective work. Maan sees Geet leaving and asks her wheres she going
Geet: Office jaa rahi hun.
Maan: Hamare sath chalo.
Geet: Its ok main manage kar lungi.
Pari: Are chalo hamare sath saying so pari dragged her with them.
Geet took back seat.Pari was continously blabbering. Geet was silent.
Maan was observing her through mirror. And thought" kuch to baat hain Geet badli badli si lag rahi hain. " . They reach at kc.
Geet comes out from car and runs to the office in order to avoid maan. Maan observes
her . Then pari and maan enters in office. Maan goes to cabin. pari goes behind maan.
All staff shocks seeing maan with a girl
Pinki: Ye ladki kaun hai
Geet: Pratap uncle ke dost ki beti. Kisise kehna mat . pari ke papa aur pratap uncle inki shadi karwana chahte hai.
Pinki: What
Geet: Dhire chilla mat chal boht kam hai.
Pari: kya maan jabse office main aaye ho file me ghuse hue ho .
Pari goes near him closes the file.
Here Geet remembers she have to give file to maan otherwise maan will be angry for not giving on time. Geet in hurry goes toward maans cabin
Pari keeps her hands on either sides of his chairs arms.
Pari: Tum to mujhse thik se bat bhi nahi kar rahe.
Maan: Ye kya kar rahi ho tum.
Just then Geet enters sees their position . she turns.
Geet: Am sorry wo main ye file dene aayi thi jaldi me knock bhi nahi kiya .
She keeps file on couch and leaves.
Maan tells her to remove her hands and says he want to be alone sometime.
Maan to himself " pata nahi geet kya soch rahi hogi mere bare me
Geet: I know ye delhi hai ,par yaha ki ladkiya chipkne ke liye mauke dhundti rehti he.
Geet feels annoyed. Rest of the day passes.
They leave for km. As they stops and comes out of car. Just then pari cell rings. Maan gets chance to talk with geet
Maan: Geet tumne jo cabin me dekha mujhe pari ke sath aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
Geet: Par maine aap se kuch nahi pucha. Aapki personal life hai aap jo chahe wo karo.
After dinner , Maan says pari
Maan: Pari mujhe tumse kuchh bat karni hai . 10 min me terrace par aa jana.
Geet listens and thinks" wahi baat hogi jo subah office me kar rahe the "
Maan and pari on terrace.
Maan: Pari mujhe tumse shadi nahi karni.
Pari: Jaanti hun. Main tumhe pareshan kar rahi thi taki tum mujhse sach bolo.
Maan: sach?
Pari: Yahi sach ki tum mujhse shadi nhi karna chahte . kuch aur bhi sunana chahti thi par tumne bola nhi.
Maan: Aur kya?
Pari: Yahi ki tum geet se pyar karte ho.
Maan gets shocked.
Maan: Tumhe kaise pata.
Pari: Jis tarah se tum geet ko dekhte ho koi bhi jaan lega you love her.
Maan: Par wo mujhse pyar nahi karti.
Pari: But you love her . Usse jatao ki tum usse boht pyar karte ho.
Maan: Par kaise
Pari : Dont worry . main tumhari madad karungi.
Maan: thank you pari.
Pari: Cant we be friends?
Maan: why not
Pari hugs maan . Here Geet sees it as she sees aman is not in room.
Maan and pari sees her.
Pari: Geet tum yaha?
Geet: Main Aman ko dhundh rahi hun.
Pari: Maine use pratap uncle ke kamre me jate hue dekha.
Geet thinks khi ye kuch ulti sidhi baat na keh de uncle ko and she runs. When she runs toward Pratap uncle room . She sees aman hugging her dadaji. Pratap sees her. And says
Pratap: Kuch kehna chahta hu tumse.
Geet: jee uncle kahiye.
Pratap: Mere pote ko aur poti ko tum achhi parwarish kar rahi ho. Jo khurana khandan me honi chahiye. Jao beta aman so jao.
Geet and aman leaves to their respective rooms.
Geet goes near avni. She switch off the lights . And thinks " Shayad ab pratap uncle mujhse jyada gussa nahi hai. And feels annoyed when she recalls pari's hug with maan.
Precap: Maan on date with Pari or Geet



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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update next m feeling as ur gonna start jealousy track looking forward dear n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Geet is annoyed with Pari's closeness with Maan
Was...this Pari is exactly like in the serial :D
Pratap praised Geet...
Good going!!!
Thanks for pm and pwd :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written. Maan angry with his dad! Geet sees Maan n Pari! she is annoyed! Maan wonders y Geet must b thinking as Pari was close 2 him! Pari tells Maan she knows he loves Geet! she offers 2 help! Maan n Pari nw friends! they hug! Geet sees! Aman with Pratap! Pratap praises Geet 4 bringing up his grandkids with values! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice ud
maan trying to avoid pari but she's chipku type but hr intention to knows truth from maan and after knowing about his feelings she told maan she will help him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WAITING FOR NEXT PART :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 25
During breakfast,
Aman: Dadaji aaj aap hume ghunane le ja rahe ho na? Aapne kal promise kiya tha
Dadaji: Haa haa jaldi se nashta finish karo. Aur ready ho jao.
Avni: Boht maja aayega.
Geet was happy looking at kids. She saw aman is changing.
Pari: Maan hum bhi aaj ghumne jayenge. Mujhe shopping bhi karni hai.
Maan: ofcourse hum jayenge.
Geet was surprised due to maan and thought" waise to clarification dete hai aisa hai waisa nhi hai. Sabhi ladke ek jaise hote hai. Mujhe kyun bura lag raha hai. Jo karana ho wo kare. Waise bhi tu in sabse dur rahe utna hi achha hai. Warna pratap uncle ko phirse bura lagega.
Buaji: Geet kaha kho gayi. Khao na.
Geet: Haa...
They finished. Geet made avni ready.
Avni : Masi boht maja aayega na .
Geet: haa chalo jao dada ji wait kar rahe honge.
They came out. She saw Pari and Maan were too ready to go out.
Aman: Masi aap bhi chalo na.
Geet: Nahi tum jao. Main kya karungi.
Bua: Geet tum pari aur maan ke sath jao. Ghar me kya karogi dinbhar.
Geet: Par main
Pari: Oho Geet chalo na achha lagega. Koi nahi hoga ghar me kya karogi.
Geet: Buaji hai na.
Bua: Nahi main mandir ja rahi hun satsang me jao beta delhi ghum aao.
Geet: Jee
Geet gets ready . Maan sees her . She wore simple baby pink anarkali suit. Maan just lost in her.
Pari: Chalo Maan and said in low tone ghurne ke liye pura din pada hai
Maan feels embarassed. They goes to various places in delhi. Geet remembers the time she came once with niharika and kabir. Pari asks maan she want to go to gurudwara. Maan takes them there . Geet remembers that she came with di and jiju once when they visited delhi. Geet feels emotional and tears escaped from her eyes. Pari saw it and nudged maan to see her. Maan sees and asks her what happened . Geet says nothing. Goes to pari .
Maan to himself: Bas Geet. Aaj ke baad tumhare aankho main koi aasu nahi aane dunga.
They roamed it was evening. Pari suggested him to go to restaurent for dinner.
Geet: phir to boht der ho jayegi. Hume ghar chalna chaiye.
Pari felt like she should bang her head on wall. But said.
Pari: Roj thodi na koi bahar khana Khata hai. They goes to restaurent.They reaches. Pari makes an excuse that she have to make an important call . She says Geet to go inside. She tries to find maan . pari says " Maan car park kar raha hoga tum jao andar. Geet was feeling confused but she thinks she will wait inside. When she enters she sees Restaurent is empty.
Manager: Jee aap Geet hai.
Geet: Jee.
Manager takes her with him. And they goes poolside table .Manager gives her smile and leaves. Geet sees around. She observes pool area decorated with light. Table With flowers and candle. Geet thinks may be manager misunderstan she about to leave then maan enters . Gee tries to find geet then asks.
Geet: Maan sir pari kaha hai?
Maan: Geet tum baitho.
Just then waiter comes and maan orders food.
Maan: Geet tumhe sab arrangements kaise lage?
Geet: Achhe hai. Par sirf dinner hi karna tha. Itna sab kyun. Pari bhi ab tak nhi aayi.
Maan: wo aa jaye gi. Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai Geet .
Geet: kya sir?
Maa goes near Geet and sits on knees geet feels nervous and confuse. He takes her hand in his hands
Geet: Ye aap kya kar rahe hai sir
Geet tries to remove her hand. Maan holds it again
Maan: Geet I love you, will you marry me?
Geet takes her hand out of his.
Geet: Sir aap hosh me to hai na . Ye aap kya keh rahe ho
Maan : Haa Geet . i love you a lot . Tumhare bina main apni life imagine nahi kar sakta.
Geet: Sir aap jante hai uncle ne aap ke liye pari ko pasand kiya hai. Aap ko unki decision ke bare me sochna chahiye. Pari boht achhi ladki hai.
Maan: par main tumse pyar karta hun Geet.Tum samajh kyu nhi rahi ho.
Geet: Mere paas apke sawal ka koi jawab nhi hai. Am sorry.
Maan understands what she thinking she tries to leave maan stops her and says
Maan: Geet we are friends . hope our friendship will not change . Lets go home.
Maan observes during drive that Geet became silent.Geet thinks " matlab pari sab janti thi , par maan sir jo chahte hai wo nahi ho sakta Tumhe unse dur rehna hoga. " Whole drive was silent.
They reaches home. Geet directly goes to her room. Maan see it. Maan was about to go to his room. Pari calls him.
Pari: kaisi rahi date hero? propose kiya ki nahi bas ghurte hi rah gaye
Maan: usne mana kiya pari. Shayad maine jaldbaji kar di.
Pari: Kuch to kar na padega.
Maan: nahi pari . tum kuch nahi karogi . i dont want to force her.
Pari: I am not saying to force her . par use samjhana padega. She is so innocent maan.
Maan: Good night pari.
Lagta hai best friend se baat karni padegi.
Pari goes to bua ji . pari explains everything to bua ji.
FLASHBACK
When pari came to km. Buaji told pari about maan feelings for geet. Pari promised her that she will help her for uniting maan and geet.
Flashback ends
Present.
Buaji: Ye baat hai . Geet ko main samjhaungi.
Geet was not able to sleep. She was reminding what happen in the restaurent. She was roaming here and there in km. She heard some noises.She went that way. She saw Maan was practicing Tai chi vigorously. She saw Maan trying to break ice slab, wood with his hands. During practice he hurt his hand
Maan: Aahh...
Geet ran to him. Maan saw her.
Geet: Ye aap kya kar rahe hai. Kyun har waqt apna gussa nikalne ke liye khud ko chot pohchate ho. Aisa nahi hota hai har waqt ap jo chahe wahi ho.
Geet tore her dupatta and wraps it around his palm to stop blood oozing out.
Geet: Chaliye mere sath.
Bua ji saw it that geet dragging maan
Maan was so happy cause she was blabbering like before though in anger . She dragged him with her . Applied ointment and bandaged it.
Geet: Sir kuch bate aisi hoti hai. Jo hamare control me nahi hoti. Behtari isi me hai ki un bato ke sath koi jor jabardasti nahi hi kare aur jaisi hain waisi chhod di jaye.
Maan: Sab kar lunga geet. Par is dil ko kaise samjhau. Ye to kisi ki nahi sunta na.
Geet was stunned listening him. In order to avoid him she said good night went out of his room.
She saw bua ji.
Geet: Aap soye nahi boht der ho gai hai.
Buaji : jab mere bachhe hi jagte rehte hai to main kaise so sakti hun. Pari ne mujhe sab bataya hai bete. Kya maan me kuch kami hai kya. Tumne use mana kar diya
Geet: Nahi bua ji, boht achhe hai. Aur aap jante hai uncle kitna pyar karte hai maan se. Unhone maan ke liye pari ko chuna hai. Maine dekha hai pari ko , pari boht achhi ladki hai.
Buaji: par wo tumse pyar karta hai geet
Geet: Jee bua ji , par buaji main itna nahi socha. Aman aur Avni hi meri duniya hai main khush hun aise hi.
Buaji: Soch lo beta, chije badlate der nahi lagti. Maan se nahi par shayad kisi aur se kabhi na kbhi shadi karogi. Har ladki ko kani padti hai. Tab to tumhe aman aur avni se dur hona padega.
Aur maan kisi aur se shadi bhi kar le. Par kya wo aman aur avni ko itna pyar karegi jitna tum karti ho.Rahi baat pratap ki kabir ke liye ab bhi wo pachtata hai. Wo kuch bhi aisa nahi karega jisse maan usse dur ho jaye.
Geet : Mere kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Main kya karu. Main maan sir ke bare me aisa nhi sochti.
Bua ji: Sochne samajhne ke liye kabhi kabhi ek pal hi kafi hota hai. Haa keh do maan ko. Maan boht achha ladka hai tum khush rahogi uske sath
Geet: par kya main unhe khush rakh paungi .
Bua ji: kyun nahi. Jab hamari shadi hui thi hamari arrange marriage thi. Par hume koi problem nhi hui. Waqt ke sath sab sahi ho jata hai. Jao aram karo. Mere baton ke bare me sochna jarur
Geet: Good night.
Next morning ,
Bua ji goes to pratap.
Pratap: Didi aap subah subah kuch kam tha
Buaji: Haa geet aur maan ke bare me
Pratap: Yahi na ki maan geet se pyar karta hai.
Buaji shocks
Pratap: Haa janta hun. Jo bate main nahi samajh paya. Wo pari ne mujhe samjhayi. Abhi thodi der pehle mujhse bat karne aayi thi. Par maine use mana kiya hai maan ko kuch kehne se. Main chahta hun ki maan mujhse is bare me bat kare. Rahi bat geet ki to maine aap logo ki baat suni geet shayad thoda confuse hai. But main janta hun geet aur maan ek sath khush rahenge. Ab sahabjade mujhse bat karle is bare me.
At breakfast table, all gathers except geet. Buaji asks where is geet and pari nakul informs she left with kids . said she have to go to office early. Pari mam shayad so rahi hai .
Pratap: Maan main chahta hun tumhari aur pari ki engagement Jald hi ho jaye.
spoon drops from maan's hand .
Pratap: Kya hua?
Maan: main geet se pyar karta hun.
Pratap: To kab karni hai shadi?
Maan gets shocked.
Pratap: Aise shock hone ki jarurat nhi hai. Didi ne mujhe sab bataya. Didi aap geet se baat kar lijiye. Hum jald hi in dono ki shadi karayenge. Kahi sahab jade phirse apna irada badal de.
Maan feels embarassed. Bua ji says to maan " maine geet ko samjhaya hai . Tum ek bar usse bat kar lena.
Maan: Am done.
He leaves for office. In car he thinks " Everyone are happy but geet , agar wohi khush nahi hogi toh kya matlab Bua thik keh rahi hai main geet se baat karta hun. He reaches in office . He asks adi to send Geet in his cabin."
Geet goes to maan cabin.
Maan: Geet kal maine tumse jo kaha
Geet: Sir mera jawab ha hai.
Maan: Geet koi jaldbaji nahi hai. You can take your time.
Geet: Sir main ye nhi kahungi ki main aapse pyar karti hun .par aapki respect karti hun. Sach baat ye hai ki aap boht achhe insan hain. Par main ye rishta puri imandari se nibhaungi.
Maan smiles and feels happy. He comes near her. Takes her hand in his hands. Geet feels emotional.
Maan: Geet main tumhe boht khush rakhunga. Ek aasu nahi aane dunga tumhari aankho me and wipes her tears.
Geet: Aap boht achhe hai. I hope main aapki expectarions puri karungi.
Maan: Tumne shadi ke liye haa kar di yahi boht badi baat hai. I love you Geet.
Maan kiss her hands. Geet shies and goes out of his cabin.
Precap: pratap fixes date of marriage.







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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nyc update waiting for next finally geet said yes
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wow lovely update
maaneet r going to marry

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