Shraman OS- Broken Pieces

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holla! I know I have many SS to complete but couldn't resist myself from penning this down.This plot has been going around in my mind for long and not writing it down would give me sleepless nights. All thanks to my alarm I got time to write this down.I am very bad at writing One Shots so please bear with it.
No proof read.


Shraman OS:Broken Pieces

"How could she?DAMMIT!" Shravan shouted banging his already bleeding fist on the mirror again
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With the remaining pieces of the broken glass came crashing down,came Shravan's heart too.

"Sumooo" He shrieked
Tears from his eyes and blood from his fist made its way to to the floor where broken glass pieces along with few torn pictures of them covered with his blood.

"Why me?Why Sumo,WHY? Jab uska hona hee tha toh kyun kabhi mere dil ko yeh ishare diye,kyun kabhi mujhe dost bulaya,kyun kabhi mujhe yeh dikhaya ke mein tumhara aur tum mere ho sakti ho?Kyun?WHYYY? And Shravan broke into fresh tears banging his other fist,already bruised by boxing on the closet door.

"Aisa kyun hota hai ke humesha mein hee reh jaata hoon? Kya doosro ke khushi pehle rakhne ka yeh inzaam hai. 10 saal,10 saal pehle Sumo hum alag hoye the,uss waqt bhi tumhare liye tumhari self respect,image he sab kuch thee aur iss bar bhi voh hee tumhare liye sab kuch hai. 10 saal pehle bhi tumne mere pyaar ko marke mere dil mein tumhare liye nafrat bhari thee aur aaj 10 saal baad bhi tumne vahe kiya." Shravan laughed at himself,tears still making their way from his eyes

"I hate you Sumo,I HATE YOU SUMO! I HATE YOU DAMMIT!" Shravan shouted in the tone never heard before,not even to him
Closing his eyes,in order to find some peace he lay on the floor.

But all his mind could gather and show him were the scenes he had witnissed when he visited PCT.Sumo and Aditya stood in the old PCT land,and what he heard was an over happy Sumo thanking Aditya.

"Thank You so much Aditya,Tumne yeh joh bhi kuch kiya hai na,uske baad I cannot thank you enough,Thank You" She had said and hugged Aditya immediately
The hug had lasted for quite few minutes and it was Aditya who had broken it.
"There is one thing you could do Suman to thank me"Aditya had said
"What?" A confused Sumo had asked
"This" And with saying this he had cupped Sumo's face and lept in for a kiss.

Unable to bear the scenes unfold in front of him anymore,Shravan had rushed to Malhotra House towards,ignoring a concerned Pushkar and Lalaji on his way. And thus the following scene had followed.
Shravan didn't realize when he dozed of.
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"Sumo,jaldi aa voh bhaiyaa gate band karke zoor zoor se chilaa rahe hain,aur jahan tak mein jaanta hoon kuch tootne ke bhi awaz ayi hai" Pushkar told Suman over the phone.

"Pushkar chinta mat kar,I am on my way" Sumo replied back
Suman reached Malhotra Mansion and ran straight for Shravans room where a worried Pushkar and Lalaji stood.

"Kya hua Pushkar?" Sumo asked trying to open the door of Shravan's room

"Voh khulega nahi Sumo,bhaiya ne band kar rakha hai,mein kabse try kar rahan hoon but kuch nahi ho raha"Pushkar replied back.

"Toh kya Pushkar? Agar usne band kiya hai toh todo gate ko,aise khade rehne see kuch nahi hoga" Suman shouted looking around for something that could break the door.

And hearing this Pushkar got to work along with Lalaji and Suman helping him to break the door.After many attempts the door flung open and Suman rushed inside followed by Pushkar and Lalaji.

All were shocked beyond their imagination when they saw Shravan lying on the floor,in his closet with broken glass pieces and blood around him.
Suman was on the verge of crying but gathering herself up she signaled Pushkar and Lalji to leave,telling that she would handle him.

As they left Suman kept her bag aside and moved towards Shravan. Shoving away the glass pieces aside carefully,she picked up few torn pictures which had them in it. Sighing away she took his hand in hers and slowly,carefully started to pick out the glass pieces that were stuck in his hands. Shravan flinched in pain,making the tears that were in her eyes flow down her face.

It was when she was taking out the second glass piece did Shravan wake up only to retreat his hand away realizing it was Suman beside him.
"Shravan" Suman spoke in a mere whisper forwarding her hand to take back his hand again.

"DON'T COME NEAR ME! DON'T!" Shravan shrieked moving aside
"Shravan hua kya hai? Joh bhi hua hai I wont leave you like this.Chahe tum chao ya na chaoe mein tumhare dressing karke hee yahan see jaoongi"Sumo said,stern.

Sumo got up quickly taking out the first aid box from his drawer went towards him.

Carefully taking out the glass pieces she started to wipe of the blood of his wound,causing Shravan to moan in pain.

Seeing him in so much pain tears made their way out of her eyes. Shravan just watched her not speaking a word as she systematically and cautiously dressed his wound,both which he had got because of boxing and breaking the mirror.

As Suman stood to leave Shravan shouted" Haan bas yahi toh aata hai pehle zakam do,uspar marham lagao aur phir akele chod ke chale jaoo"
Suman stoped in her tracks hearing this as more tears filled her face.Her heart had wanted to run in his arms and tell how she had craved for him and only him and that she would die but never leave his side,never leave him.But seeing Ramnath standing below the stairs she gathered herself and moved forward toward's the exit.

Shravan ran towards her and in a just pulled her towards towards him with his bruised hands.She came crashing down into his chest.
"Aaj mein tumhe jaane nahi doonga" Shravan clenched his jaw
"Shravan chodo mujhe"Suman said,almost on the verge of breaking down
"Achaa toh tumhe yeh sab tabhi accha lagta hai jab voh Aditya aisa karta hai! Haina Sumo?" Shravan asked turning her the other side,so that now her back touched his chest.

"Jab voh aise karta hai to tumhe kya hota hai Sumo?Batao na?" Shravan whispered as he moved her hair on the other side running his none down her neck followed by slide biting.
Sumo felt her knees go weak,she felt that she would melt any moment.She was finally living her dreams. Ramnath's and Preeti's face came flashing by her eyes. Folding herself up she pushed Shravan accompanied by a slap right across his right cheek.

Picking her back up she brisk walked towards the rooms door.
Shravan laughed and called out to her saying"Meine sahi soch tha.Tum ek selfish aur giri vee aurat ho. Dhyaan rakhna ek baar tum iss room see bahar chale gaye toh kabhi yahan wapas nahi aaapoigi,na muje kabhi apna dost bula paogi!"

Suman stopped right there and then dead in her track.
She had now two paths to choose from,one that led to her happiness and the other that led to her sister's happiness.
Shravan's love and her family's happiness created a war leaving her in a dilemma.

She recalled how her family had created the girl she was today and how she had to pay them back but she even recalled how he had helped her,protected the name which mattered to her the most i.e. her mother's name. How he had managed to not just make her smile but her family too,how he had set things right and how everything was at peace when he was around.

And about her sister's love? Weren't they two grown up adults too?Couldn't they fight for their love themselves just like she did? Why did she need to kill herself and him for them? She could be selfish at least once right?She thought
And so Suman chose to be selfish and ran towards Shravan engulfing him in a hug.
Tip toeing,she cupped his face and crashed her lips on his.
And so the two souls explored new boundaries of love,thier love.
"Mine,say you are mine"Shravan whispered against Suman's lips
"Yours,only yours" Suman spoke smiling getting back to kissing.

Mil Jaate Hain Dil,Jo Bane EK DUJE KE VAASTE!



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-Mitali❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My god !! That was heart wrenching . Don't know how I will watch mirror scene. That is going to be really anguished.
Edit: I do always forget to thanks while immersed in shraman feelings. thnx .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ekta--

My god !! That was heart wrenching . Don't know how I will watch mirror scene. That is going to be really anguished.

Edit: I do always forget to thanks while immersed in shraman feelings. thnx .😊


Its going to be intense and I am so ready for it ☺️
Thank You for what?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful... Sumo should be selfish at least for shravan... Hope show Maine aisa kuch hojaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohmygod. This was so intense. Lit was like a wave of emotions inside me :')
First my stomach churned at his hurt and his pain.
Then the fear came rishing in.
And then a floodgate of emotion just flowed against the shores of finality.

Beautiful piece!
I am spellbound!

Lots of love,
Flibb!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a heart wrenching scene
Finally Suman decided to be selfish and accept Shravan's love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Agar yeh show mein hots to kitna achcha hota na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally she did something for them
So heart wrenching it was
Awesome Mittu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pravas007

Beautiful... Sumo should be selfish at least for shravan... Hope show Maine aisa kuch hojaye

ThankYou!
I hope so too but koi nai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flibbertigibet

Ohmygod. This was so intense. Lit was like a wave of emotions inside me :')

First my stomach churned at his hurt and his pain.
Then the fear came rishing in.
And then a floodgate of emotion just flowed against the shores of finality.

Beautiful piece!
I am spellbound!

Lots of love,
Flibb!

Hey Flib!
Your comment surely made my night,I can sleep peacefully now!
I am ever so bad at writing OS and your comment chereed me up.ThankYou🤗
You yourself are doing such an amazing job with your write ups.Nailing it.

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