Butterfly kisses - A story

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Discovered this story only today.

A beautiful story with a natural ending. In all your stories that I read, you seem to pick up an idea and develop so well on it that I feel the need to read again and again and again.

Its good that you left the story this way. There is an air of unresolved-ness, but I guess some things are better left to be resolved on their own.

The consistent attachment is evident by the way she feels the constant pain in her heart and by the way he visits the place on her birthdays... but where it goes from here is upto the audience guess.

A very fresh take on Maan and Geet. Loved it lots !

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I have been meaning to read this for long now... finally got to it!

Heart-wrenching yet beautiful!

I am experiencing contrasting feelings right now.

Not sure if I am sad that they did not get together in the end like I wished and hoped, or if I am happy that they are still affected by each other and are single and I can picture a happily ever after for them in my mind's eye.

Anyhow, a wonderful piece yet again! 👏

Eagerly waiting for your other stories too, please update them soon. 😊

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wiskhan

@wiskhan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

beautiful OS. I hope it's not completed. plz cont soon...

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wonderful story... Loved it.. The way they understand the feeling but not expecting anything is amazing... This is why maan dint justified and geet dint asked but kept loving each other all these years .. Though still wishing that they talk and go forward in this beautiful story...and we get to see happy ending with maneet...

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