praja : eloped marriage part 14 updated

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how the scenario would have been if pratat and ajabde had an eloped marriage ??? how will they face d hardships of life ??? will they b able to become soulmates forever????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
characters : same as in d story but pratap nd ajabde will b faisal nd roshni
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
The story which im gonna post is purely fiction .. i do not intend to hurt anyone .. thanx ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter:1
pratap comes to knw that ajabde's marriage had been fixed with son of a samanth who is already married.and he confornts ajabde about d same
pratap : ajabde aap ka dimag tho theek hai na aap kyu yeh vivaah karna chahti h?
ajabde : humare paas aur koi rastha b toh nahi h kuwar pratap .. apne ma aur daata k khusi k liye hume ye karna h hoga kuwar pratap ...
pratap : aur apki kushiyon ka koi matlab nahi h kya?
ajabde : iss m h sabki balai h kuwar pratap .. bhagwan k liye iss sach ko swikar kar lijiye k hum aur aap ek dusre k liye nahi bane h
pratap : ( gets anger & pushes her towards d wall & gets close to her)teek h ajabde hum maan jate h lekin apko humare ankhoon m dekh kar kehna hoga k apne humse pyaar nahi karti h aur apko hume phool k saath vivaah karte hue dekh acha lagegaboliye ajabde ..
ajabde : ( cries) nd stumbles hum apse pyaar ..nd hugs him ... hum apse bohot pyaar karte hain kuwar pratap hum apko kisi aur k saath nahi dekh sakte hain hume shama kar dijiye kuwar pratap ... lekin hume yeh karna hoga kuwar pratap yeh hi humari kismat h ... (sighs)
pratap : nahi ajabde apko aur kurbaani dene ki koi zarurat nahi h .. hum ek dusre ko pasand karte h iske alwa hum kuch nahi jante ...
ajabde : lekin kuwar pratap hum kya kar sakte h ladke waloon ne hume pasand kar liya h aur apki phool k saath sagai hone wala h
pratap : hone wala h .. hua toh nahi na?
ajabde : matlab?
pratap : yahaan se hume bhaag na hoga ajabde
ajabde : kya????
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 2 :
ajabde : kya??? yeh aap kya keh rahe h kuwar pratap? hume bhaag na hoga kya? koi aur rasta toh hoga na ...
pratap : aur koi rasta nahi h ajabde ... hum jante h ki aisa karne se sab ka apmaan hoga lekin hume yeh karna hoga ...
ajabde : ek baar aap apne daajiraj aur ranimaa se baat karne ka prayas ko kijiye na ..
pratap : daajiraj kabi nahi manege aur ranimaa sabse pehle mewar ki maharani h toh woh apni zimmedhari se nahi hatengi
ajabde : hamare ma aur daata ka kya hoga kuwar pratap? hume bohot darr lag raha h ...
pratap : jo b hoga dekha jayega ajabde aur aap fikr na kare hum apke saath h na??
ajabde : tik h kuwar pratap .. ab hume kya karna hoga kal phal dhan ka rasam h
pratap : sabse pehle hume chakrapani aur saubhagyawati se baat karna hoga
chakri : hum yehi h baojiraj .. hum humesha k tarah apke saath h
pratap : dhanyawad chakrapani .. aur saubhagyawati?
chakri : aap chinta na kare hum unse abhi baat karthe h ... ( and leaves from there)
ajabde : hum jo b kar rahe h kya vo sahi h kuwar pratap??
pratap : humare paas aur koi rastha nahi h ajabde ...

meanwhile chakri nd bhago enters
chakri : baojiraj!!!
pratap : aiyie chakrapani bhabisa ...
bhago : inhone hume sab bata diya h .. boliye kya karna hoga hume
pratap : kaise b karke hume ajabde ko mehel se bahar le kar aana hoga
bhago : hum hansa mausi s kehkar ajabde ko mandir le jane k vyavasta kar sakte h ..
pratap : yeh teek rahega .. lekin aap inke saath nahi jayengi bhago : kyu?
pratap : agar sabko pata chalega k ajabde lapatha h aur vo apke saath bahar gayi thi toh sak pedha ho sakta h ..
ajabde : hum khud ma se anumathi lethe h
pratap : bhabisa apko mehel m h rehna hoga aur chakri aap abhi isi waqt mehel se bhaar jaye ... aap dono k upar kisi ko b shaq nahi hona chaiye
chakri & bhago : teek h baojiraj
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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chapter 3 : ajabde : maasa hum mandir jana chahte h ... hansa : lekin ajabde kal apka phal dhaan h ... ajabde : hum jaldi laut ayenge ma hansa : teek h ... lekin jaldi laut aana ajabde : haa maa .. pratap : kya hua? ajabde : maa maan gayi ... pratap : teek h .. hum abhi mehel se bahar ja rahe h ... aap kuch dher m hume mandir k paas miliye .. teek ajabde : hmm pratap : sab teek ho jayega ajabde .. fikr na kare .. chalthe h hum ajabde : dhyan rakhna apna pratap : hmm after sumtime ... ajabde : hum chalte h bhago bhago : apna dhyan rakhna .. ajabde : yahan sab teek toh ho jayega na bhago? bhago : chinta maat kijiye ajabde. eklingji sab sahi kar denge ... ab jayeye .. ajabde : chalte h & hugs bhago AT TEMPLE pratap nd ajabde meet pratap : kisi ko shaq tho nahi hua na? ajabde : nahi pratap : ye lijiye apne vastr badal lijiye ( and gives her a parcel ) hum apka intezaar karenge jayiye ajabde : hum abhi aate h ... AFTER FEW MINUTES ajabde comes in a simple red lehenga choli & pratap too had changed his attire into simple dhoti & pagdi they leave from d temple ajabde nd pratap meet chakri near d forest area chakri : baojiraj !!! pratap : chakrapani kisi ko shaq toh nahi hua na? chakri : ab tak toh nahi baojiraj ... pratap : teek h .. yeh lijiye isse mehel m rakh dena chakri : yeh kya h? pratap : chiti h ... isme likha h k hum dono mehel se jaa rahe h .. chakri : lekin baojiraj !!! pratap : lekin wekin.kuch nahi chakrapani .. ab jaldi ap b mehel laut jaye chakri : teek h .. yeh aap rakh lijiye baojiraj ( and gives him a bag of clothes nd some money) pratap : iski koi zarurat nahi h chakri chakri : zarurat h .. aap lijiye inhe ... waise aap dono ja kaha rahe h ..?? pratap : hum apko nahi bata sakte h .. chakri jaise humare rehne ka vyavasta ho jayega hum apko suchit karne k koshish karte h ... chakri : teek h .. pratap : ap chinta na kare hum yeha k kabar b malum karne k koshish karenge chakri : teek h pratap : chalte h ... chaliye ajabde praja then say their good byes to chakri and move towards d forest TOWARDS A NEW LIFE TOGETHER
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
you have a very good story here please do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 4 : pratap and ajabde were walking inside d forest for a while now nd they found an abandoned hut ... they decided to spend their night there MEANWHILE AT D PALACE ... hansa was worried tat her daughter was not home yet & began to worry for her raoji : hansa ajabde kahan h?? hansa : raoji voh mandir gayi thi abhi tak laut kar nahi ayi h raoji : kya?? apne unhe doonda nahi ... ratan : maasa!!! maasa !!!! hansa : kya hua ratan ?? ratan : yeh dekhiye ... jija ki chiti ... hansa : kya hame dho .. " hume maaf kardigiye ... hum aur ajabde yeh mehal aur bijolia chod kar jaa rahe h ... " - kuwar pratap aur ajabde raoji : yeh kya kiya ajabde ne samaj ke samne hamara tamasha bana dala hansa : aap une dhoond ne jayiye ... raoji : hume chittod tak b kabar dena hoga ... chalte hain ... AT JUNGLE : ( ajabde had somehow managed to clean d place ) pratap : ajabde aap todi dher vishram kar lijiye hum bahar rehte h .. ajabde : kuwar pratap humare saath rahiye .. mat jayiye na pratap : kya hua ajabde ?? ajabde : kuch nahi ... pratap : aap jhoot nahi bol sakti h toh prayas kyu kar rahi h ...?? ajabde : ab tak sabko pata chal gaya hoga k hum bhaag gaye h .. haina ?? pratap : haa ... kuch maat sochiye ajabde ... vishram kar lijiye a jabde : aap b thak gaye h ... humare saath aap b vishram kar lijiye pratap : nahi ajabde ... ajabde : kuwar pratap !!! pratap : teek h .. chaliye vishram kar lete h ... AND THEY BOTH SLEPT HOLDING EACH OTHERS HANDS UNAWARE OF WHAT THEIR FUTURE HAS STORED FOR THEM
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Read all parts in one go
Nice start
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
part 5 :
rana udai singh came to knw about d elopement of pratap & ajabde he was furious and ordered his men to find them (udaisingh to jaiwanta)
aaj pratap ne humari naak katwa diya h sabke samne jaiwanta : humne apse pehele b kaha tha k aap ajabde se unka vivaah kar dijiye lekin aap ne nahi mana
dheerbai : pratap bache hain jija lekin aap unhe badava kaise de sakthe h ??
jaiwanta : pratap bache nahi h dheer bai ji .. veh achi tarah se sahi jalat ka pehchan kar sakte h
dheerbai : toh ve yeh kyu nahi samaj paye ki marwar - mewar ka sambath kitna avashyak h ??
jb : rishte bhagwan banathe h ... aur pratap apne jeewansathi ko ajabde m dekh rahe h toh usme jalat kya h???
us : jalat h jaiwanta bai ji ... ajabde mehas ek samanth ki putri h ... aur pratap mewar k rajkumar
jb : toh kya ab unhe unki icha anusar kuch faisle lene k b adhikar nahi h???
us : jo b ho unhe iss tarah ghar chod kar bhaag na nahi chahiye tha .. aur hum unhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge
jb : apko apke rajneeti ke alawa aur kuch diktha b toh nahi h ranaji ...
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