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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
chapter 6 :
AT DAWN
pratap was d first to wake up and he noticed tat ajabde was sleeping peacefully in his arms ... without disturbing her he went outside d hut to find something for them to eat
AFTER FEW MINUTES
when ajabde opened her eyes she was shocked to find tat pratap is nowhere ... meanwhile pratap enters with food & water .. sacred to death ajabde immediately runs & hugs him .. he is thus startled
pratap : kya hua ajabde ??
ajabde : kuwar pratap kaha the aap?? hume chodkar maat jayiye hume bahut daar lagtha h ..
pratap : hum toh baas pani lene gaye the ... dekhiye hum apke liye phal aur pani laye h ..
ajabde : humse bole bina kahi maat jana ...
pratap : acha teek hai ... nahi jayenge ... chaliye khana kha lethe h .. hume bhook lag rahi h
ajabde : teek h ... ( nd starts to eat)kuwar pratap ???
pratap : boliye ajabde ??
ajabde : hum yahan se kaha jayenge??
pratap : hum soch rahe the ki hum guru raghavendra k ashram chalte h ... vo hi humare liye surakshit jagah hogi
ajabde : lekin kya voh maanege?
pratap : pata nahi ajabde par hume koshish zaroor karna hoga
ajabde : teek h kuwar pratap ..
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
chapter 7 :
AT GURU RAGHAVENDRA'S ASHRAM
guru : aiyiye kuwar pratap .. bahut din hogaye apko dekhe hue ... kaise h aap?
pratap : teek h guruvar ... hume apki madat k zaroorat h guruvar ...
guru: kahiye pratap .. kya madat kar sakte hum apke liye,??
pratap : (calls ajabde) ajabde!!!!
And she enters d chamber ... pratap : guruvar yeh ajabde h .. bijolia k samanth ki putri ajabde folds her hands nd takes his blessings
guru : toh aap inhe yahan kyu laye h pratap??
pratap : hum dono ek dusre se prem karte h guruvar aur hum ghar chod kar aaye h ...
guru : kya?? yeh kya keh rahe h aap kuwar pratap? ghar chod kar aiye h aap?
pratap : haa guruvar .. humare paas aur koi rasta nahi tha .. humare gharwaale humare vivaah kisi aur se karvana chahte teh ... isiliye hume ghar se bhaag na pada
guru : aapko apne apne mata pita se baat karna chaiye tha na ki aisa bhaaf kar ana tha .. aur aap mewar k rajkumar h ...
pratap : toh kya ab hame apni jeewansathi chunne ka b adhikar nahi h??
guru : baat adhikar ki nahi h pratap .. baat samaaj ki h ... aap dono ghar chod kar aa gaye h ... ab apke gharwaloon ko kitna apmaan sehna padega aur duniya humesha purush par nahi balki ladki par h ungli utayegi ... ajabde ka h apmaan hoga kuwar pratap
ajabde : hum jante h guruvar ... humne ghar se bhaag kar sahi nahi kiya h ... lekin apne pyaar ko chod kar kisi aur k sath jee ne se toh acha maut hota h ...
pratap : teek kaha ajab ne .. lekin hum marna nahi chahte aur na hi kisi aur k zindagi ko karab karna chahte h ... isilye humne ghar choda h ..
guru : teek h .. boliye kya madat chahiye apko?
pratap : hume rehne k liye jagah chaiye guruvar ...
guru : yeh ashram to keval rajkumaroon ke liye h .. aur aap dono ka abhi vivah nahi hua h ... toh saath m rehne ka bandobast kara mushkil h
pratap : nahi guruvar hum ajabde ko chod kar nahi ja sakte h ... aap sabse keh dijiye k humara vivaah hogaya h .. aur hum travellers h .. raat ke liye rukne aye h
guru : teek h .. aap dono yehi rukiye hum aate h ...
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
part 8 :
pratap and ajabde wait in d ashram for a while ...
guru : pratap ... humne aap dono ke liye rehne ka vyavasta kar liya h ...
pratap : dhanyavaad guruvar ... kaha rehna hoga hume ??
guru : ashram k piche ek makaan h .. jahan aap dono reh sakte h ...
ajabde : aapka bohot abhaar ...
guru : aap kisi se b apne asli pehchan ko mat batana teek h ..
pratap & ajab : teek h ...
guru : pratap ab aap jaiye ... hume kuch der baat aakar milna
pratap : hmmm ...
AT HOUSE
the house was a simple one ..
ajabde quickly cleaned d place & cooked food for both of them ... after having food pratap left to meet his guru ...
pratap : kya hum andar ah sakte h ?
guru : aiyiye pratap . ..
pratap : aap humse kuch kehna chahte h guruvar ?
guru : haan pratap ... ab aage ka kya socha h apne ?
pratap : abhi tak toh kuch nahi guruvar ... guru : aise kaise bol sakte h aap pratap?bina vivaah kiye kitne din aur aap dono ek saath reh sakte h ??agar kisi ko pata chal gaya ki apka vivaah nahi hua h aur aap k ladki k saath h toh kya hoga?
pratap : hum samajte h guruvar lekin hum kya kar sakte h ??
guru : jitni galdi ho sake apka aur ajabde ka vivah karvana hoga ...
pratap : kya?? yeh aap kya bol rahe h ...???
guru : agar vivaah karne ka icha nahi tha toh ghar se bahar kyu aye aap ???
pratap : aisa nahi h k hum unse vivaah nahi karna chahte h lekin humara vivaah hoga toh kaha hoga ?? hamare gharwale hume dhoond rahe h ...
guru : hume pata h ... isliye hume socha h ki aap yahan se bhil sardar k gaon jayenge ... aur vahan humari upastiti m apka vivaah hoga ...
pratap : teek h ...
guru : aap ajabde se baat kar lijiye ... pratap : teek h guruvar chalte h ...
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
thank u for ur comments ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
part 9 :
meanwhile at chittod :
rao maldev came to knw abt d elopement of praja nd questioned udai singh
rm : yeh kya kiya h apke bete ne udai singh ..
us : hume shama kar dijiye maldev ji humne kabhi nahi socha tha k ve dono aisa kuch karenge ...
rm : ithna sab ho jane k baad aap kevel shama maang rahe h udaisingh ???
us : humne unhe doondne k koshish k h .. ab tak koi kabar nahi mila h ..
rm : jo b ho ab mewar - marwar k beech koi sambandh nahi ho sakta h ... agar koi sambandh h toh keval dushmani ka ...
us : maldev ji rukiye ...
( maldev leaves d place )
us is frustrated ...
and enquires to his soldiers about praja ...
chief : aab tsk unka pata nahi cchal paya h hukum
us : unke baare m jaldi pata kijiye iss se pehele humara aur apmaan ho ..
AT ASHRAM :
pratap reaches his house and fiinds ajabde lost in thoughts ...
pratap : kya hua ajabde ???
ajabde : kuch nahi kuwar pratap bus ma ki yaad aa gayi thi ...
pratap : hmm ...
ajabde : aap boliye kya kaha guruvar ne??
pratap : ajabde guruvar chahte h ki humara jaldi se vivaah ho jaye ...
ajabde : kya ??? lekin ...
pratap : hum jante h ajabde ... lekin unka maana h k bina vivaah kiye hum dono saath m nahi reh sakte h ... aur dekha jaye toh voh apni jagah par sahi h .. ab faisla hume lena hoga ...
ajabde : voh toh teek h kuwar pratap lekin humara vivaah gharwaloon k bina kaise ho sakta h ...???
pratap : humare gharwaale kabhi b humara vivaah nahi karwaenge ... aur yeh aap achi tarah se jaanti h
ajabde : toh humara vivaah kaise hoga ??
pratap : guruvar chahte h k hum yaha se bhil logo k gaon jaye vahan guruvar k rahte humara vivaah hoga ... ab apna faisla soch kar bata sakthi h ajabde ..
ajabde : jab hum apke saath apne ghar parivaar ko chod kar aiye the tab h hum apke ho chuke h kuwar pratap .. yeh vivaah to keval samaj k liye h .. hum humesha apke h the aur apke h rahege ... & hugs him ...
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Amazing parts
Interesting concept😊
Edited by Nonie12345 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
part 10 :
AT NIGHT :
pratap : kya hua ajabde ... ???
ajabde : kuch nahi kuwar pratap ...
pratap : ajabde ...!!!!
ajabde : kya hum chakri aur bhago ko kabar bhejne ki koshish kar sakte h ...?? humare vivah k bare m ...
pratap : nahi ajabde ... jaise h humara vivah hojaye hum unhe kabae dene k koshish karenge ... agar kisi ko pata chal jaya tho ... aap samaj rahi h na...
ajabde : teek h kuwar pratap ...
pratap : kya hum apse kuch pooch sakte h ajabde ????
ajabde : haa kuwar pratap ..
pratap : kya aap ko humse dar lagta h ajabde???
ajabde : nahi toh ... hume aapse daar nahi lagta h ...
pratap : to h phir aap humse apni man ki baat batane k liye kyu jijak rahi h ...
ajabde : aisa kuch b nahi h kuwar pratap ... pheli baar kisine humare vicharo ko importance de raha h ... yeh sab humare liye naya h ...
pratap : humari ek baat dhyan se suniye ajabde ...
humare liye humare matra bhoomi , humare rani maa h sab kuch the ...
lekin ab aap b humare liye sab kuch h
... hum maante h k humne apko apni zindagi m 3 ra place diya h ... kabi b hum apko niraash nahi karenge ..
ajabde : hum jaante h k aap hume niraash nahi karenge .. humra place apke zindagi m 3 ho ya 100 hume koi farak nahi padtha kyunki hum jante h aap hume kuch nahi hone denge ..
chaliye ab hum vishram kar lete h
pratap : ha jitna chahe aap abhi vishram kar lijiye kyunki vivaah ke baad apko vishram karne ka vakt nahi milega ..
ajabde : kyu ??
pratap : kya apko nahi pata ki vivaah k baad kya hota h pati - patni k beech m nd goes near her ..
ajabde pushes pratap nd says ... jo b hoga vivaah ke baad hoga ... ab vishram kar lijiye ...
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
love u lots ... ur comments mean a lot ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
just read all the parts in one go

interesting concept

good one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
part 11 :
AT DAWN ...
PRATAP AND AJABDE LEAVE FOR D BHIL'S VILLAGE ...
pratap : ajabde aap khush toh hai na ??
ajabde : kuwar pratap ... hum iss vivaah se bahut khush hain .. lekin maa aur daata ki yaad a rahi thi ..
pratap : aur koi baat toh nahi hai na ...??
ajabde : ji nahi ...
AT MARWAR :
PHOOL'S BEHAVIOUR CHANGED EACH BY EACH PASSING DAY ..
phool : ajabde ne hume dhoka diya h ... hum kabhi b usse khush nahi rahne denge ... & breaks d mirror ...
AT CHITTOD
CHAKRI IS ENQUIRED BY UDAI SINGH
us : toh boliye chakrapani ... kya aap nahi jaante h k kuwar pratap aur ajabde kahan h ...???
chakri : hume nahi patah k voh dono kaha h ... unhone hume kuch b nahi bataya ...
us : teek h aap jaa sakte h...
us then asks his soldiers to keep an eye on chakrapani ...
BY NOON ...
PRATAP ND AJABDE HAD REACHED D VILLAGE
they both recieved a warm welcome from d villagers ...
as guru ragavendra had already informed them abt d wedding of pratap & ajabde preparations had been made accordingly ...
it was decided tat d haldi & mehendi would take place in d evng & wedding by the next day ...
pratap & ajabde were escorted to their tents seperately by d people
Edited by sudhaperumal - 9 years ago

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