Arshi SS - An Unknown Feeling (Chap 1

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RomanceFanaticx

@RomanceFanaticx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Okay.. This concept suddenly came on my mind and couldn't stop myself from penning it down. So, here I am representing my another new ss on ArShi. I hope I will get response on this also.

Short story

Ek Ajnaabi Ehsaas

English - An Unknown Feeling..

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Teaser - Below

Chapter 1

Edited by ..kriya.. - 9 years ago

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RomanceFanaticx

@RomanceFanaticx

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Posted: 9 years ago

Teaser

Arnav walked in his father's room and saw him relaxing on the bed, "Dad.."

Mr Raizada opened his eyes and saw Arnav standing, "Yes Arnav.. Do you want to say something..?"

"How can you do this..?"

"Means..? What I have done..?" Mr Raizada asked back.

"How can you fix my marriage without my consent..?"

Mr Raizada sighed and walked to Arnav, he held both of his hand on his shoulder saying, "Arnav.. I am your father.. I know what's good for you and believe me Khushi is a nice girl, she is perfect for you. You both will make a good pair together."

Arnav angrily shrugged his hand off, "But I don't like her. Did you look at her..? She is so simple. And most important, I can't love her as I.." but before Arnav could say Mr Raizada said, "As you love Lavanya right..?"

"When you know everything them why are you doing this? Your decision can destroy three lives." Arnav said looking back at his father.

"Arnav.. I don't want to hear anything, I know Khushi is perfect choice for you and still if you doesn't want to marry Khushi then I will dispossessed you from Raizada industry as well as property. Now choice yours.. What you want?" Mr Raizada sternly said.

"Dad.. You can't do this, I am your son."

"When kid walks on wrong path, it's parent's duty to bring him on right track and I am doing the same." Mr Raizada said patting on his shoulder.

"Fine..!" Arnav angrily walked out from his room.

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Edited by ..kriya.. - 9 years ago

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corie

@corie

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

I like the concept. this one looks as if Arnav is going to be very hard on poor Khushi if he is forced to marry her. Lavanya seems to be negative character because the father is trying to keep Arnav away from her. Continue soon eager to read the story.

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..KaranFan..

@..KaranFan..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: corie
I like the concept. this one looks as if Arnav is going to be very hard on poor Khushi if he is forced to marry her. Lavanya seems to be negative character because the father is trying to keep Arnav away from her. Continue soon eager to read the story.

Yes.. The concept is something like this. But yes.. I will definitely spice up the things.. 😉

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice starting

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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927187

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

Fabulous story concept.will love to read more

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ckocolat

@ckocolat

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

nice start ... eager to read more.

waiting ... continue soon.

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice concept

Loved it

So Arnav is being forced to marry Khushi.Now he will show his anger on Khushi and Lavanya will rile Arnav up and make sure he never softens against Khushi.

Please continue soon

Looking forward to read

Thanks for the PM

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@Westallen

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Posted: 9 years ago

I don't like saying poor khushi but honey your in for a hard ride on your horse name Mr I love u not. as far as I get ur really nice and simply didn't get your personality if your feisty n won't take shit form anyone.

on the other hand to how Mr raizada puts it lavanya looks like a bad person maybe she is only with him for his wealth idk but just maybe.

waiting to read more. sounds interesting...

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Loved the teaser.. Arnav is all set to marry Khushi while he loves lavanya.. Sad but his father is right.. Best wishes and happy writing Ek Ajnaabi Ehsaas

Thanks for pm 😊