TaaRey Fic : Broken Wings - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Very intersting concept continue soon. I'm new here can u send me pm please .I'm very great fan of ur writings.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Interesting taani is wife of rey's late brother... But Rey loves her... Waiting for next... Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
ahaa new story :D

concept *_*

waiting fr d stry...
plz di update sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Yes plz continue
It's different concept
Want to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
- | Chapter One | -


A lone tear escaped her eyes, burning her heart as she continued to stare at her dark henna covered hands. Till yesterday she was the happiest bride, she got married to the youngest son of the singhania's, one of the prestigious family of the country. It was an arranged marriage yet she was happy. Her husband was chosen by her parents.


It wasn't even a day to their marriage that he left her. Breaking every vow they had taken together around the holy fire.


She was numb with the amount of pain her heart was in. What was her fault? She was left alone on the day she started her journey as someone's life partner. The new beginning of her life turned out to be dead end.


She doesn't know what to do. With the lose of her husband, she lost the purpose of living her life.


*


Life is strange and unpredictable so are its games. Till tomorrow they were happy, they were together, celebrating the day of his marriage. But few hours and everything has changed, there is nothing left for him, for them. His brother has left him, his greatest friend left him forever.


His tears weren't stopping, he had locked himself in a room after returning back from funeral. He couldn't think straight, a part of him has left him. Both the brothers were connected by souls, and its hard for him to believe he won't be seeing his brother anymore.


Its hard to believe, he is no more. His brother has left him. His little brother, Aryan has left forever.


He was returning back home after buying a gift for his newly wedded wife for their wedding night, when he met with an accident with the other car who's driver was drunk and had lost control over speed.


He cursed the fate for doing this to his brother who hadn't even lived his life and was gone before time.


*


"Taani beta, go in your room."


Rey clenched his fists when he heard his father telling her to go in her room because few guests has come over to visit them.


He knew the reason behind his father's command but couldn't stop himself from disliking the thought.


Society spit cruel words to her. Some guests who had come to visit hadn't backed away from holding her responsible for the sudden death of the youngest singhania on his wedding day.


He got up and headed to his room. Its been a month to the fateful day that snatched his brother, but nothing has changed. The house has lost it happiness.


He was passing by the room of his late brother but stopped when he heard the sound of sobs. And he knew who it was.


"Taani, are you alright?" He knocked on the door and waited for her response but got none. Worry crept up in his heart. He couldn't stop himself from checking on her and make sure she was alright.


The 21 years old girl who had suffered the most and still suffering the pain. Nothing could be compared to her pain.


He pushed the door open and stepped inside the dark room. His eyes roamed around before his gaze settled over her small figure curled up in a corner of the room, weeping silently to herself.


He walked over her and knelt down on the floor. Sharp pain sliced through him, staring at the girl who had lost her everything and was living the colorless life of a widow.


"Taani." A soft whisper escaped his lips. He hesitated for a moment before he placed his hand over hers which caused her to look at him in surprise.


"Reyaansh? What are you doing here?" She questioned him in low, barely audible tone. She wiped her tears not wanting him to see her like this.


"Sh. It okay to cry sometimes. We all do." He whispered soothingly. He doesn't know how to start a conversation with her. They hard hardly interacted with each other. But he knew it will change soon. He won't let her ruin her life by sitting in a corner and crying. He was sure even his brother wouldn't want her to cry for him and waste her life by locking herself up in the room.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
A very meaningful start!
nice update
do update soon
n happy birthday!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
awesome update
taani husband died on first day of her marriage
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
awesome start
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most deadful day of taanis life...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
nice update
love it
it was fab
too emotional
now i got know about reys brother death
but now need to know how there love story will start
plz update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Nice update
Loved it
Poor Taani lost her husband on the day of her marriage and living life of a widow
Rey not liking all these traditions
Continue soon

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