Hi I am going write a story about the current track

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It will have 5 parts hope u like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please tell me know that I should continue or not
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
Abhi called up pragya


Pragya is dressing herself and thinking about Abhi how they are going to start new life

Her phone rings

Abhi is calling her but she does not pick up the phone

Pragya is putting her kumkum but it falls down but she gets scared that kumkum fell down

Her again Abhi again calls Pragya

Her Pragya comes to drawing room the phone rings
She goes and pick up the phone

Abhi tells Pragya that u should be strong I am going to tell u something u should take care of yourself dadhi and purab also


Pragya gets scared why he is telling like that

Abhi tells that he going to meet with the accident her car has no brakes tanu and nikhil aliya plans this purab called me and told me that I should not make u sit in the car but he does not know that I am there in this car so please I can't talk more take care of yourself

Pragya please don't tell like that pls were are u tell me I will save u from the accident

Abhi no Pragya listen to me it is too late now take care of yourself

I love u Fuggi I love u


Phone fell down from Abhi

Pragya gets stunned

Abhi accident ...



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In the hospital Abhi is admitted doctor say that it was major accident he is in danger only God can save him

Pragya pls doctor save my husband is can't live without him

Doctor we will try our best

Pragya goes to temple and prayer to God

All the family members comes to hospital

...


After operation Abhi opens his eyes

Doctor says that he is out of danger you can meet him

All the family members comes and sees Abhi with the bandages they feel sad for him dadhi breaks down

And Pragya sees him she also breaks down seeing him

Abhi opens his eyes after seeing Pragya he asks who are u

Abhi asks dadhi who is she
Her Tanu comes to the hospital

Abhi calls Tanu were u have been don't leave me and go

And hugs her


Her Pragya gets stunned


Pls tell should I continue pls give likes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please tell me that I should continue or not hope u are not liking my story it's OK if u tell me that also please suggest any body that I should continue to write or not pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do continue...whether its good or bad...its your story. You should feel at ease to express yourself...when you are feeling great...then, it'll portray in your writing...most of the stories here...in this forum is great. Its just so frustrating to read an interesting story, then it gets hung up. No updates whatsoever...really. I am an avid reader of all the stories here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: christasr

Part 1

Abhi called up pragya


Pragya is dressing herself and thinking about Abhi how they are going to start new life

Her phone rings

Abhi is calling her but she does not pick up the phone

Pragya is putting her kumkum but it falls down but she gets scared that kumkum fell down

Her again Abhi again calls Pragya

Her Pragya comes to drawing room the phone rings
She goes and pick up the phone

Abhi tells Pragya that u should be strong I am going to tell u something u should take care of yourself dadhi and purab also


Pragya gets scared why he is telling like that

Abhi tells that he going to meet with the accident her car has no brakes tanu and nikhil aliya plans this purab called me and told me that I should not make u sit in the car but he does not know that I am there in this car so please I can't talk more take care of yourself

Pragya please don't tell like that pls were are u tell me I will save u from the accident

Abhi no Pragya listen to me it is too late now take care of yourself

I love u Fuggi I love u


Phone fell down from Abhi

Pragya gets stunned

Abhi accident ...



Precape

In the hospital Abhi is admitted doctor say that it was major accident he is in danger only God can save him

Pragya pls doctor save my husband is can't live without him

Doctor we will try our best

Pragya goes to temple and prayer to God

All the family members comes to hospital

...


After operation Abhi opens his eyes

Doctor says that he is out of danger you can meet him

All the family members comes and sees Abhi with the bandages they feel sad for him dadhi breaks down

And Pragya sees him she also breaks down seeing him

Abhi opens his eyes after seeing Pragya he asks who are u

Abhi asks dadhi who is she
Her Tanu comes to the hospital

Abhi calls Tanu were u have been don't leave me and go

And hugs her


Her Pragya gets stunned


Pls tell should I continue pls give likes

pls dont continue i just dont want to go with tanu pls i just cannot stop crying i m in shock dont plsss😭tq
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Posted: 9 years ago
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There is twist in 3 part so please it is going to be interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that awesome plzz continued soon your next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Pragya goes near accident side in search of a high
But she can't find abhi

It is raining heavily but she can't find abhi

Purab is in search of pragya and abhi goes to abhi farm house but he can't find them

Accident site

Pragya goes near the car where abhi meet with the accident but in the car she does not find abhi but she searches him but she can't find him she prayers to God nothing should happen to him please God keep him safe place God after long time we are going to become one please don't take abhi from me I love him a lot please God


Purab is in the car and searches for abhi and Pragya near the accident site but he can't find them butility he sees some people standing there he asked them what happened her one of the people said her one major accident happen

Purab gets stunned


Pragya finds abhi near the tree and gets shock how he got hurt on his head hands and legs

She immediately takes abhi to the hospital

City hospital

Pragya gets abhi to the hospital

Emergency pls see him he is breathing pls


Doctor said it is police case we can't admit him

Pragya her Pragya is broken because doctor is saying it is police case we can't handle it

Pragya what are u thinking of yourself her man is struggling between life and death u are not admit him and telling police case


Doctor when police will come we will admit him so please inform police that time will admit him till then no


Pragya what is this doctor for you admit an injury man is more important than calling police and filieing the case

Doctor please it is against our rule so please cooperate

Pragya please doctor admit him I will inform police place doctor I Beg u please


Doctor no we can't admit him

Pragya doctor u don't know him he is big celebrity but u can't admit him


Doctor what he is the celebrity


Pragya the rockstar abhi


Doctor I am sorry mam we will admit sorry


Pragya fast admit him

Purab in accident site


Show the photo of pragya and abhi

Man yes he is the same person who was driving the car
Purab he was alone or this girl also was there with him

Man no only he was driving nobody was with him

But after car fell this girl came running she was telling she is her husband


Purab can u tell me were she went


She went down in search of her husband were the car fell down

Purab thanks a lot


City hospital


Operation thereat

Abhi operation was going on

Pragya is praying to God nothing should Happen to abhi

After 3 hours

Operation got sccusess

Doctor came

Pragya asked how is abhi


Doctor abhi is good God has answered your prayers he is out of danger


Pragya thanks doctor


Pragya I can go and see him

Doctor yes but don't disturb him OK

Pragya OK doctor


Here Pragya goes to see abhi

She gets stunned seeing abhi with lot bandages on his head hands and legs


Abhi slowly opens his eyes

Pragya seeing gets emotions and hugs him


Purab is driving the car suddenly phone rings

It is dadhi


Purab tells dadhi abhi meet with an accident (sorry I don't want Purab to tell dadhi in detail how he meet with the accident it is how dadhi called Purab same conservation in episode how it was )

Family members come in search of abhi to the hospital


In the room


Abhi opens his eyes and sees the lady who is hugging him

Gets confused why this lady is hugging me were are my family members aliya dadhi

Pragya see abhi and gets happy that his rockstar husband is back thank God abhi I found u God can't test my love now


Abhi just pushed her and asked who are u why are u hugging me where are my family members who are u tell me


Her in the hospital family members arrives

They asked where is abhi who meet with an accident


Nurse gives them the information that he is the 2nd floor room no 202


All the family members go and sees abhi


Her Pragya gets stunned why abhi is doing like this why he is not remembering me

Abhi don't do jokes I am not in jokes do her how I lost u u don't know please for God sake don't do likethat


Abhi I asking u who are u


All the family members entered the room


Dadhi aliya all the family members seeing abhi in this condition gets stunned


Abhi who is she why she is hugging me and where is tanu aliya

I want to meet her where is she


Here aliya calls tanu


Tanu come fast bahi is asking u


Tanu tells aliya I am not coming he knows the truth now he will punish me so I am not coming

Aliya u come fast tanu

Bhai is not identify Pragya he is asking u only come fast


Tanu no aliya I am not coming


Her doctor comes and tells please keep abhi nicely he is stress he just now meet with the major accident so don't disturb him

Abhi who is she dadhi tell why she hugging me


Her tanu listen to abhi conversation and gets stunned why not he is not identify Pragya


Doctor said he is having parshial memory loss he forget 3yrs what happens in his life only he remembered his last 3yrs back

Pragya gets stunned listening to doctors words


Dadhi aliya every family members gets stunned that abhi does not remember his marriage life and Pragya

Tanu listend to the conversation and gets happy

She comes to the hospital


Abhi a Liya where is tanu

Aliya bhai she is on her way she is coming to the hospital

Aliya don't take stress bhai she is on her way


Tanu comes to the hospital enter the room

Tanu calls abhi

Abhi just comes and hugs


Her


Tanu where we're u I was missing u


And this girl was hugging me I don't no who is she


Tanu please don't ever leave me and go ppls


Pragya listening to abhi words gets stunned

Her tanu seeing Pragya face get happy



So please tell me how is part 2 please tell I should continue or not thanks for the comments and appertaining My story.
Edited by christasr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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2 part also awesome love it

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