ISHRA SS HUMDARD SE HUMSAFAR Part 23

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Niveditha.giri

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi guys I am back it other story hope u guys like it...
I am posting it on behalf of my best friend Roshni Tapadi...

ISHRA SS HUMDARD SE HUMSAFAR

This ss is based on after AMMA'S ACCIDENT &PICNIC WHICH IS TURNED INTO FAMILY PICNIC
This ss will show the growth of ishra relationship after this incident &how both Raman _Ishita wants to make it into as normal husband wife relationship this ss mostly shows ISHRA'S FEELINGS n also shagun ashok param as villain but not overdose of them I hope u people will like it.

HERE IS THE 1ST PART OF
HUMDARD SE HUMSAFAR

After coming back from PICNIC both ishita Raman gets busy in their work ishita was hell busy with clinic,ruhi & family & Raman was busy with his office work but now he is looking forward to go home wants to spend time with ruhi & ishita also but didn't say it to her openly he was loving his evening with ishru he loves the tea made by her but instead of complimenting her he would pass some comments to her like MADRASAN CHAI BNANA SIKH GAI HAI ishita who has started understanding him takes it as compliment as she knows he will never praise her openly no matter how much happy he is with her.

ONE MORNING IN BHALLA HOUSE

Toshiji has received call from their relatives n they invite them for marriage at their home with whole family she has received call from them before also but she tells them they will try to come but now seeing their force she decided that all should go there she talks with MR.BHALLA n he agrees to her now they talks with romi,simmi they both agreed to go there Raman ishita was also there

TOSHIJI:ishita Raman tum dono bhi chalo unhone br br kaha hai tum dono k liye

Raman who was listening to them but as ishita was about to speak he holds her hand tightly she was.shocked seeing his action n looks at him he smiles at her then speak
R:maa mai nhi aa sakta abhi new project start hua hai bohat kam hai ar ishita use b to kam hai appointment hai uske
TOSHIJI:ha pr puttar koshish kr ane k
R:maa aa.sakta to jarur ata but abhi nhi ho sakta aap sab jao ar ruhi k school b to hai agle week test hai uske to wo kaise aa sakti hai

Ishita was silently listening to what he was speaking but didn't utter a word toshiji gets convince with what Raman was saying

TOSHIJI:thik hai puttar fr hum sab jate tum 3no yahi raho but acha hota agr ate to waise hume shamko h nikalna hai
R:thik hai maa tickets bna deta hu apki
ROMI:nhi nhi bhai bna lunga apko kam hai
R:are wah bhai sahabjade kam bhi krenge chal thik hai bnale but dhyanse aaj k jagah kal k na bna lena

Speaking this he leaves ishita's hand n goes to room for getting ready for office not seeing ishita coming to room he screams from room

R:ishita ishita
ROMI:bhabhi jaldi jao isase phle k bhai humpe barse
Ishita leaves the kitchen muttering RAVAN KUMAR JB DEKHO CHILLATE RAHTE HAI KUDKUD KRTE HAI

As she comes he locks the door
I:kya hai q chilla rahe ho ar bahar kya kiya apne q mana kiya mummy ji ko k mai nhi asakti kitna man tha unka ar ab chilla rahe ho
R:are bs kro yr mummy ji ye papa ji wo romi,rinki ,simmi ,ruhi sabki padi hai tumhe siway apne pati k ha kiya Maine mana kya galat hai isme agar mai kuch waqt sirf biwi k sath bitana chahta hu to ar ruhi k bina kya tum rukti mere sath q k jo PICNIC maine sirf hum dono k liye plan k thi usme to tumne pure khandan ko le liya ar ghar me sabke rahte waqt milta hai tumhe kbhi mere liye k baith k hum kbhi bat kre humesha kuch kam hota hai
I want give this relationship one chance ishita mai sach me chahta hu k hum normal husband wife k tarah rahe ar agr fr tumhe jana hai to tum ja sakti ho mai rahlunga akela jaise phle rahta tha romi se kh dena tumhe jana hai to I AM GETTING LATE FOR OFFICE BYE

Talking this he leaves the room without hearing her reply she was 1st shock listening to him but then smiles that he is making attempts to improve their relationship he has taken the 1st step now its her turn to do something for him
I:I won't go Raman yahi rahungi apke sath I also wants our relationship to be improved amma k accident ne bohat kuch badal diya humare bich kahi na kahi shayad ab mai apko samzane lagi hu I will wait for u shamko aap aaoge to mai apko ghar me h milungi apka intejar krte

She leaves the room n helps toshiji in packing makes lunch her day passed in blur Raman was angry with ishita thats why he didn't bother to call her n ask what she has decided n ishita due to work don't get time to call Raman as he didn't receive single message from her also infuriates him more he drowns himself into work at evening also he didn't come at home to drops them instead it he sends mihir to drops them after dropping bhalla clan to airport mihir goes out with mihika n informs Raman that he drops all at airport Raman thinks ishita also gone with them n he gets busy in work when ishita calls him he didn't pick her calls n do his work

I:had hai ravan kumar subah kh rhe the mere sath time spend krna hai ar ab jb mai call kr rhi to utha bhi nhi rahe thik hai muze bhi nhi krni bat ab kro jo krna hai

Ishita makes ruhi eats her dinner helps her in home work as ruhi was tired after playing with chachu,shravan n homework also she sleeps early than daily she used to Raman around 10pm reaches at home n opens with spare key he sees all lights off n think that now he is only alone at home he opens his room door but the sight infront of him makes him smiles ruhi was sleeping peacefully while ishita was caressing her feature keeping her head on ruhi n kissing her forehead as ishita hears door sounds she looks there n sees Raman smiling at her she don't utter a word n leaves the room Raman understand now she is angry with him n he has to manofy her

R:hey matarani bchale muze JKR to lagta hai mar h dalegi aaj mai bhi bewakuf hu calls tk nhi uthaye uske abkuch assume kr liya khudse ar ab khud h manaunga bs madrasan jaldi man jaye warna pata chala family ane tk merese bat h na kre

He change quickly n goes to kitchen n sees her arranging plates for both of them
R:ishita I am sorry yr pls maf krdo
I:Raman khana thanda ho raha hai
R:I am really really sorry yr muze laga tum bhi ja rahi ho ar pura din muze ek message tk nhi kiya to mai kya samjhata
I:yahi to problem hai apki aap sb assume kr lete ho busy thi mai time nhi mila muze ar jb maine itne calls kiye apne receive tk nhi kiya
R:I am sorry nna please maf b krdo yr
I:Raman apko kya lagta hai subah apki bate sun ne k bad mai jati itni bhi bewakuf nhi hu mai k aap kya kh rhe the samaz na pau
R:I should have received ur call I agree but I was angry to gusse me maine ignore kiya but now I am really really sorry for doing this I promise I won't repeat it
I:thik hhai khana khalo phle badme baki bate
R:to u forgive me or still angry
I:I said na baki bate badme
He eats dinner silently with her but was noticing her face n try to understand if she forgive him or not he feels she is still angry but little less than before they finish their dinner ishita cleans the table n Raman was in room waiting for her to come when he feels she is taking longer time than usual he goes to sees her what is she doing & sees her making coffee
R:coffee itni ratko kiskeliye
I:I think jb ratko bate krte hai to coffee jruri hoti hai isliye
Raman smiles hearing her reply
R:that means ur not angry with me
I:phle thi but ab nhi hu I am sorry too muze subah h samaz jana chahiye tha jb apne mummy ji ko mana kiya
R:hato hoto tum tubelight jaldi koi bat kb samaz ati hai tumhe
I:ab man gai na ar apki bhi galti thi subah meri bat sune bgair chale gye aap ar muze itna wait b kraya
R:acha yr I am sorry too ab jaldi ye coffee lo ar chalo warna pata chala 3din tk hum ek dusre ko sorry h bolte rahenge

Ishita takes coffee for both of them n goes to their room they seats at floor close to each other Raman start talking
R:I want to tell u about my life how it was before u come in my life how after shagun's betrayal I change myself
I:I think something I know about it
R:ar wo kya
I:aap aise nhi the jaise abhi ho aap ek normal husband k tarah the jo apni family se apne wife ar bacho se pyar krte the jo unhe sari khushi dena chahte the but apne apne rishte k tutne k bad ek galti k apne ruhi ko us bat k saja di jisme uski koi galti nhi thi use to kuch bhi nhi pata tha fr bhi
R:I still feel ashamed of myself jo Maine ruhi k sath kiya uske liye but jb bhi ruhi ko dekhta tha shagun k yad ati thi
I:kya apko ab bhi shagun k yad ati hai
R:nhi bilkul nhi q k ab mere pas meri ruhi hai tum ho jo meri bate samazti ho tumhe pata hai mere liye sbse mushkil kya hai
R:kisise pyar se bat krna
I:majak nhi kr raha mai SHARING bohat mushkil hai mere liye q k muze adat h nhi hai mai sabse bada hu bhai behan me to kisi k sath share nhi kr pata tha kuch papa ka tum janti ho ab jakr humare bich thoda kuch normal hua hai ar maa wo meri har bat samazti thi but unhe mai pareshan nhi krna chahta tha isliye unhe b kuch nhi btata tha sbkuch apne dil me rakhta tha
I:ar mihir wo to apki parchai hai kya use b nhi btate the aap kuch
R:mihir use sbkuch pata hai shayad sbse achi tarah wo h janta hai muze use kuch btane k jrurat nhi thi wo apne aap samaz jata hai but mai use assure kr deta tha ye khke k mai thik hu ar agr fr b na manta to uspe chilla deta hu to wo kuch nhi khta jb apko thik lage tb btana khke chala jata tha
I:apko pata hai maine ek bat notice k hai apme
R:kya
I:jb bhi aap koi bat chupana chahte ho ar koi use samaz jaye ya janane k koshish kre to aap gussa krte ho chillate ho taki koi apse bat na kre ar ye bat maine in dino notice k jb aap accident case k breme chupana chahte the ar mai humesha apke piche padi rahti thi
R:I know ar tum wo chij k muzse expectations kr rhi thi jo mere liye sbse mushkil thi
I:Raman dard batne se kam hota hai ar jbtak aap use kisiko btaoge nhi apka dum ghutate rahega isliye aap apni bate muzse share kiya kro mai koshish krungi k mai apki HUMDARD bn pau mai ye nhi khti har choti bat muze btao but jb bhi taklif ho aap muze bta sakte ho I am good listener I promise mai apki bat sunungi n holds his hand he holds it more tightly assuring her he will share everything with her
R:yahi bat sbse achi lagti muze tumhari tum humesha dusro ko samazne k koshish krti ho
I:chalo koi bat to hai muzme jo apko achi lagti hai 1st benefit of talking
R(smiling):sach kah raha hu yr compliment de raha hu ar tum majak uda rahi ho acha btao konsi bat hai jo muze khushi deti hai
I:hmmm jb aap ruhi k sath hote ho ur happy,cricket dekhte waqt khush hote ho
R:correct ar btao
I:hmmm jb kam apke hisab se hota hai ya koi apko praise krta hai q k khud k tariff pasand hai apko
R:galat usase jyada khushi muze tb mai maa papa k chehre pr smile dekhta hu jo meri success se milti hai ar maa proudly khti hai k ye maine kiya hai
I:that's really nice point of difference but khushi hui janke k is bat ko acha ab mere bare me aap kuch btao jo muze pasand hai ya mai khush hoti hu usase
R:sbse khush tum ruhi k sath hoti ho duniya basti hai usme tumhari
I:correct ar kya hai
R:hmmm u love ur work logo k dat nikalne me maja ata hai tumhe
I:Ramannn aap majak uda rhe ho mera R:sorry but u love ur work ar ghar me jb sab khush hote hai tum bhi khush hoti ho
I:hmmm correct ravan kumar know many things about me I didn't know u notice itt
R:andha thodi hu sabkuch dekhta hu
I:ab mai ek batau apke breme u hate my lectures & kanjivaram saree specially than apki bhasha me
R:lectures to I hate but than se utna nhi chidta muze maja ata hai jb tum chidti ho jb mai tane marta hu tumhari saree's ko leke
I:very bad u love to tease me
As they were talking from long time Raman puts his hands around her shoulder first sge looks at him questioningly but then smiles n moves closer to him he smiles seeing her response
I(seriously):aap bohat hurt hote ho na jb aap adi k ankho me apne liye nafrat dekhte ho tb
R:ha adi mera pehla bacha hai ishita but isme adi k koi galti nhi hai shagun ne jehar bhar diya hai uske dimag me mere liye
I:believe me Raman aap best father ho ar ye bat humari ruhi ko dekh kr koi bhi keh sakta hai ar dekhna adi bhi ek din fark samzega shagun me ar aapme ar apse utna h pyar krega jitna ruhi krti hai
R:I wish aisa ho wo din mere liye sabse khubsurat din hoga
(Thinking to himself):mera dard to tum janti ho but tumhare dard ka kya mai janta hu tum bohat hurt hoti ho jb koi tumhe banz khta hai but humari ruhi angel hai usake wajah se tum humesha muskurati ho but tumhare liye mai wo kandha bnana chahta hu ishita jispe sir rakh k tum ro sako mai na sirf tumhara HUMDARD BALKI TUMHARA HUMSAFAR BNANA CHAHTA HU
I started expecting things from u as wife ab muze ghar ana acha lagta hai ye soch k koi hai jo mera intejar kr raha hai jiske sath mai apna sbkuch share kr sakta hu

I:Raman Raman kaha kho gye aap
R:hmmm kuch nhi waise dont u think humara bat krana utna bura experience tha jitna hum phle sochte the
I:its good aaj hume bohat kuch janane mila ek dusre k breme jo phle nhi jante the ar ye bhi pata chala k hum dono ek dusre k liye important hai
THINKING TO HERSELF
(I don't know Raman ye kya hai konsa ehsaas hai but mai apme ab apna partner dekhne lagi hu jaisa mai chahti thi ab muze apna dard apni bate chupani nhi pdegi q k muze pata hai mushkil me aap mere sath ho)

They talk for some more time teasing each other talking about their past talking about random things n dose of in each other arms ishita's head on his shoulder and Raman head on her they sleep like this feeling contend n solace in each other arms :-) :-) :-)

TO BE CONTINUED I HOPE YOU PEOPLE WILL LIKE IT I TRIED MY BEST WAITING FOR ALL YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS :-) :-) :-) :-)

Index

Part 1: Page no. 1

Part 2: Page no. 3

Part 3: Page no. 6

Part 4: Page no. 9

Part 5: Page no. 13

Part 6: Page no. 16

Part 7: Page no. 19

Part 8: Page no. 22

Part 9: Page no. 25

Part 10: Page no. 27

Part 11: Page no. 30

Part 12: Page no. 32

Part 13: Page no. 35

Part 14: Page no. 39

Part 15: Page no. 44

Part 16: Page no. 47

Part 17: Page no. 51

Part 18: Page no. 55

Part 19: Page no. 59

Part 20: Page no. 62

Part 21: Page no. 66

Part 22: Page no. 60

Part 23 : Page no. 72

Edited by Niveditha.giri - 7 years ago