Imaginary Episode #13 - Pyar Ka Dard Hai

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hello shramanians..

Its imaginary episode #13 tonight..


Credit for writing imaginary episode #13 goes to (in order of writing) :

@sapphire3
@zindgidilse
@sahiba_07
@Ammiey
@sleepypsycho


Pyar Ka Dard Hai


Ramnath was scared by what he saw, Suman was hugging his son.He immediately walked to their side.
"Shravan!!!!"
Suman immediately broke the hug. Her eyes down ,she fidgeted with her fingers. Shravan noticed her changed body language.
Ramnath hugged his son"Kaha chale gye the tum kitna dar gye the hum sab." He said
"Sorry papa wo car kharab ho gyi thi koi mechanic mila ni, pata nhi kaise gadi me hi aankh lag gayi thi. Sorry " Shravan replied.
Suman moved aside to let the father son duo have their moment.
"Shravan tum gadi me baitho pushkar wait kr rha hai " ramnath said
"But papa sumo..." shravan didnt want to leave her
Ramnath fumed inside , he need to remind her promise
"Wo bhi apni car me ayi hai , khud chali jayegi. Tum chalo." He said rather ordered his son
Shravan glanced at sumo seeking a silent apology.She gave a 'I understand look'. He reluctantly left.
Ramnath was waiting for this moment.
"Suman!!! "He yelled.
She turned to face him
"I hope you still remember your promise." He said
"I do. I promised to stay away from your son. I never said that my feelings gonna die for him. Pyar to ho gya na uncle." She replied confidently.
"But ..."
She cut him off in midsentence
"Dont worry uncle i will not break my promise . But it needs to be improvised.
I will stay away from my love but i refuse to stay away from my best friend." She left with her head held high. Ramnath stood there dumbfounded.


ramnath could not believe what suman said to him and left..or rather she challenged him..he was confused..

he went and sat in his car with pushkar and saw suman driving off her car but her eyes were fixed only on shravan who was also looking at her with an apologetic eye.


shravan lying on his bed gazing at ceiling , thinking what was that just happened a couple of hour ago..
Flashbacks of sumo hugging him came before his eyes and he smiled unknowingly thinking about sumo...he thought , what was that he saw in her eyes,what was that he felt in her voice, what was that he saw in her gestures...what was that in that Hug...and a sudden answer hit her trance...aur kya hoga ... PYAAR tha ...sumo mujhse pyar karti hai ... main jaanta tha... tum mujhse pyaar karti ho... tumne meri ehsaas ko sach saabit kar diya...Tumne kabhi kaha nhi..par main samjhta tha..aur aj tumhari unn dari hui aankhon me mujhe sab bata diya, jinme mere khone ka darr tha ...shravan said to himself talking to sumo in his trance..with a smile that was fixed on his face.

rest of his night passed away thinking about sumo.


its a early morning, he took his car key and drove off to meet sumo to tell her what he feels for her.



He couldn't wait to tell his Sumo that he loves her. Last night's events had given him a new confidence. He was sure Sumo loved him too, only if she would admit now. He kept smiling all the time.

"Aaj to main Sumo se bol hi doonga, main uska koi bahana nahi sununga." He huffed cutely.

He reached tiwari killa which was beautifully decorated for the wedding. The wedding was scheduled a day after. He was proud of Sumo, afterall she had arranged this all. He parked his car behind Sumo's and walked inside the main door only to be greeted by the hall full of guests. He smiled at them awkwardly and asked Dabbu about his Suman didi. He was informed she was on the terrace helping the decorators put some lights up. This girl was always working! he thought. He went up to the terrace.
"There she is!" he said to himself. He went near her. "Sumo!", he called to get her attention. She turned around to smile at him. She had decided not to avoid him anymore. If she couldn't love him, why should she even hurt him. They can still be those crazy best friends.

"Hi Shravan! Tum itni subah yahan kya kar rahe ho."

"Wo mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai"

"Haan bolo" When a voice interrupted them.

"Arrey Sumo! tumhe aur koi help chahiye" It was Aditya. Shravan was visibly annoyed. Why was this guy always around my Sumo? and did hejust call her Sumo? How dare he?

"Yeh sirf mere liye Sumo hai. Tum use Suman hi bulao to achha hoga." He talked gritting his teeth. "And can you please leave us alone. I need to talk to SUMO"
"Calm down bro! Main to bas Sumo, I mean Suman ki help karne aya tha. Ok Suman Agar koi help chahiye hogi to mujhe bula lena, Ab main chalta hoon."
"Ok" was Suman's reply. He left them alone. Sumo was amused to see Shravan behave this way with Aditya.
"Tum usse aise kyun baat karte ho. Kitna sweet hai bechara"
"Bechara seriously Sumo?" Sumo laughed
"Acha use chhodo. Tum batao kya baat karni thi" Sharavan expression changed suddenly. This was much harder than he had thought. He was scared now.



Shravan couldnt hold himself back any longer now as soon as suman asked him to say what he wanted to say immediately he wanted to shout at the top of his voice that he loves her ... But he controlled and all his control power went to his lips which smiled broadly like an idiot

'Really this love really do make people look like an idiot' he thought smiling and nodding at his own idiotic act

Suman was searching his face all confused when he noticed her thus and arched his eyebrows to ask 'what? '

"Idiot buddhu !! Tum mujhse kuch kehna chahte thay right? Toh mujhse kya pooch rhe ho ulte " she laughed at his wierd act "aur aise yu larkiyo ki tarah kya sharma rhe ho? " she laughed even more

Shravan just adored her smiling widely
"Vo mujhe... Mujhe tumse... Kehna tha ki... "
"Shravan beta jaldi boliyega ? Shadi ka ghar zada time nai milta aise baar baar! Kahin mai fir se tumhare haath se nikal na jaaun!! " she laughed
It was supposed to be a joke but... As soon as the words left suman's mouth shravan's eyes first grew wide then dead serious which made suman concious and she stopped laughinh sensing something went wrong

"Shra... Shravan?? Kya baat hai?? Bolo?? "
She asked serious or rather concerned for him
Shravan took a step closer filling the remaining gap between them and held her shoulders

"Sumo... " he whispered "ainda kabhi bhi bhool se bhi matt kehna kisi bhi tareeke se nahi ... Ki tum mujhe chhor k chali jaogi... Smjhi? "
Suman started to feel a bit uncomfortable
"Shravan bass mazak tha vo... I ... Im sorry... " she looked down and again changing the mood she asked
"Achha bolo toh ab kya kehna tha tumhe.. "
"Haan vo... Sumo... " he again whispered this time slowly coming near her ear making her body tremble with the heating sensation ... His lips almost touching her earlobe ... Slowly she closed her eyes
"Haan... Bolo... Mai sun rhi hoon... " she whispered back totally not in her senses..


"Summooo"Shravan called out softly
Hmmm was she all replied back

"Sumo aankhen kholo"
And in a shot she opened her eyes only to be met by his orbs that held a darker color of brown than his usual one.
They stood their eyes melting in each other and time passed by without their notice.

It was only the slight voice downstairs that brought back them out of the trance.

"Tumhe kuch kehna tha?"Suman asked slight blush creeping up her cheeks

"Hmm" Shravan said and made her sit on a cot near by and sat on the floor on his knees with his hand wrapped on hers.

"Sumo aaj mein jo kehna jaa rahan hoon please uske ek baar,bas ek baar bina kuch kahe bina kuch bole sunna. 11 saal ho gaye jabse hum ek doosre ko jaante hain aur ek bhi din aisa nahi hai kee meine tumhe apne dil aur dimaag mein nahi rakha,I know 10 saal ke liye kuch dooriyaan ayi thee humare beech mein but those just pushed us towards each other harder,I know I behaved like a jerk,not once but lots of times,sorry but tum toh jaanti hee ho naa mein hoon he aisa. Par ek baat toh sirf mein nahi but tum bhi maanogi ke jab bhi humne yeh maana ke hum alag alag raaste chalenge tab tab destiny humme kheech ke vapas leye. Sumo mein bas itna kehna chata ke mein tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon,I LOVE YOU,NOT JUST FROM TODAY BUT FROM THE TIME I SAW,FOR THE FIRST TIME I DID YOUR HOMEWORK,FOR THE FIRST TIME I SAW YOU COOK,FOR THE FIRST TIME I CALLED YOU SUMO AND FOR THE TIME I SAW THE REAL SUMO. Kya karoon mein I am hopelessly,madly and deeply in love with you Miss Sumo aka Suman Tiwari. "
Shravan now removed his hands that wrapped around hers and standing up said"Dogi mera saath?"

Precap : suman says to shravan "i don't... love you"




Ps : thank you participants for participating in writing the imaginary episode #13 ... and thank you readers for reading.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely episode ...great works sisters a tight hug for you all 🤗
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What a wonderful episode it turned out to be😳
Absolutely amazing.

Hugs to my fellow writers🤗
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Guys You All are Awesome👏
*Hugs & Kisses* For You all🤗
I missed it😭
I will take part on Next Saturday,Aaj to Ghar Pe hoon So cannot Participate😔
Precap aisa kyu?😵
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2mlog kitna accha likhte ho 😭 *tears of happiness* Hugs to all 🤗
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Awesome episode...Well done 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My lovelies!
This was awesome!
I loved it!
Kaash CVS take a leaf or two out of this...
I loved sumo's answer to Ramu ..
Literally go f**k yourself attitude!
Shravan's proposal!
Wow!
Well done pycho on that bit, it's my favourite in this one..
Ritu, precap aaisa kyun😆
Il wait to read #14

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