A Father's Fear : Tej OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiya fellas.. Yesterday's episode was nothing more than a disappointment đŸ„± I was expecting a worried Tej on seeing Rudra escape near death and all we got was him talking to Shivaay which gives me a doubt Is Rudra really Tej's son !!! Anyways, off with the OS.. Sheeshh.. My days in the forum are filled with writing something each day 😆 I should have been the writer for Ishqbaaaz,
Well.. Now here we go.. Hope you enjoy it..

What did I just see !! My son.. My youngest kid.. My sabse laadla almost escaped death. What was the need for him to go that damn press conference !! Couldn't he have thought about us for once ?? I almost lost him once and I wasn't ready to do it again.. Why did I ever agree to Gayathri being let ou. That vile woman almost hurt my son and she was definitely going to pay it. As I tip-toed into the room, I was met by a sleeping Rudra. My first instinct was to run and hug him to death. If only Gayathri ahd shot the bullet straight, my youngest son would have.,.. NO...I shouldn't think like that. Rudra was fine. He was absolutely alright. He was sleeping now. Not wanting to disturb him, I went and sat beside him and watched his chest raise and fall with even breaths. He shivered in his sleep and I pulled the blanket over him and switched off the AC. His habit still didn't change. I still remembered his first nautanki. A smile gazed on my face. I hear a voice behind Old Memories ?? I turned back and saw Jhaanvi standing near the door with a smile on her face. She came and stood beside me..

Jhaanvi : Old memories, Tej ?
Tej : Hmm.. Jhaanvi, tumhe yaad hai iska pehla nautanki regarding the blanket ?
Jhaanvi : Ofcourse.. AC aur fan dono chahye phir bhi balnket chahye
Tej : Hahaha.. Aur vo rote rote Om ke pass chala jaata tha aur bolta tha ki Bhaiyya, apna baal do. I was to cover myself..
Jhaanvi : I do. Om ka aur lambe baal the tab aur Om mujhe dekhke bolta tha Maa, Rudra paagal tho nahi ho gaya hai na,.
Tej : Aur Rudra pass aake bolta tha Papa, aap warm ho. Mei aapke saath sounga.
Jhaanvi : Aur tum roj uske saath sote the, covering him with ur arms, and uske sone ke baad AC switch off karke use uski room me sulaake uske dekhte rahoge.
Tej : Ye tumhe kaisa pata chala ??
Jhaanvi : Tej, mei hamesha raat ko paani keliye jaati thi. Tab tumhe dekha tha Rudra ko dekhte hue. Mei aayi bhi thi ek baar jab tumne bola ki Rudra bilkul tumhare Papa ki tarah dikhta hai.
Tej : Haan Jhaanvi. Just like my father. Isiliye tho ise unka naam rakha tha. Rudra Singh Oberoi.
Jhaanvi : Haan Tej. Jaanta hu.

They heard footsteps near the door and turned to saw Om standing there, head hug down..

Jhaanvi : Om !! Tum yaha ?? Andar aao.

Om went inside and stood beside his mother. He lifted his head up and there were tears in his eyes. Jhaanvi and Tej were shocked to see Om cry. He never cried.. This was the first time..

Jhaanvi : Om. Kya hua ?? Why are you crying ?
Om : I am sorry Maa... I have failed as a brother.
Jhaanvi : What are you saying Om ?
Om : Haan Maa. I have failed as an older brother. Mei Rudra ko khatre se bacha nahi paaya. Mei bohot gandha bhai hu.
Jhaanvi (holds his face) : Nahi Om. Aisa nahi hai.
Om : Nahi Maa. Jab vo neeche gira tha, meine kuch nahi kia. Vo mera peecha tha. Meine Shivaay ko bachaaya but Rudra ko nhi. Mei bohot gandha hu.
Tej : Om...

Om looked at Tej. His eyes were confused. I understood. Since when did I start speaking to Om like this.. But still, now I did.

Tej : Om.. Isme tumhaara koi galti nahi hai. It was an accident.
Om : Nahi Dad.Agar use kuch ho jaata tho ??

I was shocked.. He had just called me Dad.. This was the first time after so many years that he had called me Papa. He always called me Mr. Oberoi. My heart scrunched with love. Love for my son and pride that he had called me Dad. Small tears were forming in my eyes but I brushed them away. Om still hadn't realized that he had called me Papa..

Tej : Use kuch nahi hua. Dekho, vo bilkul theek hai. Aur so raha hai. Aa jaao yaha.
Jhaanvi : Jaao Om..

Om still stood there. I pulled his arm towards Rudra. Om looked at his brother sleeping peacefully and a smile formed on his face. His baby brother was alright. He was fine and he was going to wake up tomorrow and break all hell loose.

Tej : Pata hai Om, bachpan me bhi aisa hii karta tha tu
Om : Matlab ?
Tej : Bachpan me jab bhi Rudra ko chot lagti hai, tum aur Shivaay raat bhar uske saath rehte the.
Jhaanvi : Aur planning karte the kii jiski vaje se Rudra ko chot lagi uspe revenge kaise le.
Om (chuckling) : Mujhe yaad hai. Chota Bhai hai. Aise kaise jaane de sakte.
Tej : Aur hume ye bhi pata tha kii Rudra ka exam papers tum sing karte the just to shield him from us..

Om widened his eyes at that. He never expected this to be knows by them. He looked at both of them who had small smiles on their faces and broke into a smile.. Rudra got up spoke Rubi.. Paratha.. and slept.. Om understood what paratha meant while me and Jhaanvi were completely clueless..

Tej : Paratha ??
Om : Kuch nahi. Sapna dekha hoga.

I let the matter go but I knew that something was being hidden from me. But I didn't care. His son was fine and healthy. One thing he was sure of.. He had to do something.. Anything to shield his three sons away from that vile woman.. Unknown to all three, someone was watching all of this from outside with a smile and tears in his eyes. Shivaay Singh Oberoi knew that this was a start of a new happiness and he hoped that none would try and destroy this..

THE END..

Yeah. U got it right. I did not proof-read this 😆 I also think that this was not upto the mark. I wanted to see something like this but we got something else entirely đŸ„± Do read and give in ur comments 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Deepu it was too good.
I completely loved.
I badly want this to happen in the show now.
Tejvi with OmRu.
Please Rudra kae angels please make my wish come true.
You deserve đŸ€— ❀ 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing...
So deep and understanding...
It feels as if Tej does care about Shivaay too...
Can't help but imagine something like this happening in the show...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH MY MAATA!! OK, why can't serial script wright be creative like this??
It was too good. OK, u were right; you did not proof read but it was like, one of the best ever written ishqbaaz os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was absolutely fantastic.
Hope we get to see bonding like this on screen as well. When om got hurt due to pill overdose tej was shouting at svetlana but when rudra got hurt due to gayatri he didn't even ask him if he was fine.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written deepu
(hope I can call you that?)
We can actually feel tej emotions while reading it.
It was such a delight to read after yesterday's episode. Why can't our cv's grow a brain and show something like this instead of unnecessary dramas.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Deepu this was beyond amazing.How beautifully you described Tej's feelings.I so wanted thia to happen in the Episode.Gul needs to hier you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Deepu this is amazing yaar👏👏
I want to see OmRu and TejVi now. You've described Tej's feeling so well. I wish CVs can think like you.

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