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selenaKD

@selenaKD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Thank you so much everyone! I am glad everyone liked it

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wow
why did you have to make me cry
not fair
absolutely beautiful
loved it

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very emotional and touchy you made me cry
Beautifully penned 👏

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Aww very emotional heart-wrenching yet so beautiful...u brought tears...Time Distance Life Death never separate people whom we love truly madly deeply, who are so close to our hearts...

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Omg!! You... Seriouslyy made me cry now!!

It was so heart wrenching i mean i literally cried during the whole conversation part specially when shravan's imagination in the form of sumo spoke to him!! During the whole reading journey i hoped that sumo will come back from somewhere rather i was wishing it to be true but it dint happen n that feeling of missing sumo n never gonna see her for the rest of the life really broke me

N u knw what it was tough for me to even cry properly as if anyone from my family saw me crying they would have turned the whole house upside down in tension and worried look that what happened to me specially my mom n imagining sumo's daughter's pain made me more broken as i cant imagine my life without my parents specially mom!!

Beautiful concept mindblowingly penned down!!

Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago