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Heya folks!!! Wassup!! Boring weekend , no edkv . Koi na I am back with a another story .
Its my first TS I hope you guys like it. Here you go...
Shubh Mangal Savdhaan
Shravan was sitting in his cabin thinking about the last night. Last night was one of the most memorable ones. It gave him back his friend. He smiled as he recalled her worried face, the hug. She cared for him. Someone knocked the door and he came out of his reverie.
"Sir Mr. Aditya is here to meet you."His receptionist informed him.
"Aditya??...not again" he groaned.
"Hey bro!! "Aditya grinned ear to ear making him roll his eyes
"What?" He asked and gave him *not interested look*
"Chill bro!! See your cabin has turned into a furnace."Adi laughed at his own joke.
"Ho gaya tumhara? Kyun aye ho?" He asked irritated by his * I am so cool* attitude
"Main idhar se ja rha tha to socha tumse milta chalun.
Main aur sumo aaj shopping ja rhe hain." Aditya replied in an overly excited voice.
His ears perked up at the mention of her name. Without giving him a chance to speak, aditya continued.
"Ab tum puchoge ki kyun ja rhe hain. Main pehle hi bata deta . Preeti ki kuch cheezein reh gyi thi wahi lana hai...blah blah"
He didnt hear his rest of nonsense becoz his brain was busy making plans to separate this chewing gum from sumo. He picked his car keys and left for Tiwari killa
The sight before him boiled his blood. Sumo was in Aditya's arms.
Ok not exactly. She might have slipped and he had saved her but that's not the point. Why Aditya?? It should be me.
He walked straight to them grabbed his collar and punched his face. Sumo's eyes widened in horror.
"Whoa Mann!! Now what did I do??" Adi asked touching his face and winced. Now this would result in an ugly bruise he thought.
Shravan didnt feel the need to answer him , he held sumo's arms and walked outside.
Adi looked at their retreating forms.
This man needs to see a shrink. He is bipolar.
"Shravan...shravan why did you hit him? He was just trying to help me."She asked though knowing the answer. She has seen the look as he entered, as if he will tear adi into pieces.
"Mujhe achcha nhi lagta koi tumhe hath lagaye."he said with such intensity it gave her goosebumps.
The air grew intense.
"Jealous ??...haan"she smirked.
"I am not jealous . I am only territorial." He retorted
She came closer to him and placed her hands on his chest. Her eyes intense
"And why is that so?"she whispered.
He wanted to capture her lips and kiss the living daylights out of her but decided against it. It was neither the right place nor right time for it. After days of avoiding him she is finally trying to be normal with him. He wont scare her.
"You are my best friend . Its my duty to protect you from that douche."he said glaring in his direction
He was very sure he saw her smile falter at the word 'friend' but she cover up instantly
"Stop it shravan. He is not that bad." She whacked his arm. He scowled
"Yeah he is not bad he is worse." He said
"One more thing chewing gums leave bad taste in mouth if used for longer'" he winked .Sumo was confused by his behaviour What did he mean by chewing gum??
10pm Malhotra Mansion
He was working on a case when the Mighty Aditya decided to show up.
God!! Is he ubiquitous?? he groaned.
Everytime he saw him he wanted to strangle his neck.
"Are you planning to kill me?" Aditya asked in his ever annoying chirpy tone
Is he a mind reader or what??
"Dont give yourself too much importance."he replied
"Did I do something? Why do I feel you hate me??"Aditya asked
"I do not"he retorted.
"As long as you stay in your limits ,me and you are good."Shravan said stretching his limbs.
"And what are my limits?" Aditya asked arrogantly
He had to suppress the urge to break his teeth. His guy was getting on his nerves.
"Stay away from Sumo." He stated
"Sorry ...I didnt get you" said aditya
"STAY AWAY FROM SUMO" he said stressing on the word Sumo.
"And why will I do that??" Aditya cocked his eyebrow at him
He wanted to wipe off that smug look.
"Because she is mine. She was always mine and will be forever mine. I LOVE HER." He said rather warned him
"So do I" Aditya said . His temper reached its breakpoint. His punch landed straight on his face breaking his nose. New colors will now be added to his already colorful face.
Next morning he woke up early than usual, got ready in 15 mins and drove to Tiwari killa.
Sumo was busy on her phone ,didnt notice the water spilled on floor. Her foot slipped. Shravan rushed to her side, but his foot slipped over daboo's rubik cube. Both fell on the ground, sumo was lying on top of shravan. Their eyes locked and the world ceased to exist. Their trance was broken by Mamiji's shriek
"Hey bhagwan!! Suman ye kya dekh rhe hain hum?" Her mouth agape
Inhe abhi hi ana tha. he cursed his fate.
Both of them immediately got up.
"Wo..wo..mamiji mera pair fisal gaya tha to shravan..."she was fumbling
"Achcha wo sab thik hai tum jara hamare sath kitchen me aao. Kitna kam pada hai." Mamiji said
Sumo went inside the kitchen, while he made himself comfortable on the couch.
Preeti came running with a tear stricken face
"Kya hua tujhe ?? Aise ro kyun rahi hai?" Sumo asked in a concerned voice
"Sorry di.Wo ..wo apka orange wala lehenga ..wo...mujhse phat gya" preeti sobbed
"Ab aap kya pehnoge di? Sorry " Her sobs increased
"Shhh...chup ..Arey mere pas itni sari dresses hain kuch bhi pehen lungi. Tu tension mat le. Dulhan ke chehre pe hamesha smile honi chahiye. "She tried to cheer her up
Shravan heard their convo and did a happy dance in mind.
No he was not happy that her fav lehenga got torn.
He was relieved that now she wont wear the dress gifted by that chipku Adi.
He turned to leave.
"Shravan kaha ja rahe ho?"she yelled
"Kuch kam yaad aa gya."he smiled
11:30pm Tiwari killa
Sumo scanned her room and found the heap of clothes to be ironed.
"Chal beta sumo lag ja kam pe"
There a knock at the door. She knew who might be by the secret knocking pattern. Smile crept on her lips.
She opened the door," Itni raat ko tum yaha kya kar rhe ho??" She asked
"Wo sab chhodo pehle mere sath bahar ao." He pulled her outside, made her sit on the swing and tied a cloth over her eyes.
"Shravannn...ye kya kar rhe ho??"she whined.
"Ab apni ankhein kholo."he untied the piece of cloth.
There was the prettiest lehenga in coral shade she had ever seen. She instantly fell in love with it.
"Ye mere liye hai??" She asked excitement visible on her face.
"Nahi apne liye laya tha , fit nahi hua to socha tumhe de dun" he grinned
"Ohh thank u thank u so much" she hugged him
He was shocked for few secs then hugged her back.
She realised what she did and broke the hug, blushing furiously.
He chuckled at her cute expressions
"Umm tumhe kaise pata chala mere lehenge ke bare me?she asked in a curious tone
"Bas pata hai." He winked at her and left
Two hugs in two days ...not bad Shravan Malhotra
Today was his lucky day and there are many more to come. He was humming his favourite tune' Tere sang Yara' when he heard Aditya talking to someone over phone.
"Haan ma aap rishta le jayiye . Mujhe Suman pasand hai."
So how was it?? Do you want me to continue?? Let me know. Plzz hit the like button and drop your valuable comments if you like the story , if not Chappals are not welcomed throw something else mere pas bahut chappalein ho gyi hain🤣 . Indrani I hope it was upto your expectations ...i mean the punch 😆
Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Priyam
Index
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Chap 1- pg 1
Chap 2- pg 8
Chap 3- pg 13
Its my first TS I hope you guys like it. Here you go...
Shubh Mangal Savdhaan
Shravan was sitting in his cabin thinking about the last night. Last night was one of the most memorable ones. It gave him back his friend. He smiled as he recalled her worried face, the hug. She cared for him. Someone knocked the door and he came out of his reverie.
"Sir Mr. Aditya is here to meet you."His receptionist informed him.
"Aditya??...not again" he groaned.
"Hey bro!! "Aditya grinned ear to ear making him roll his eyes
"What?" He asked and gave him *not interested look*
"Chill bro!! See your cabin has turned into a furnace."Adi laughed at his own joke.
"Ho gaya tumhara? Kyun aye ho?" He asked irritated by his * I am so cool* attitude
"Main idhar se ja rha tha to socha tumse milta chalun.
Main aur sumo aaj shopping ja rhe hain." Aditya replied in an overly excited voice.
His ears perked up at the mention of her name. Without giving him a chance to speak, aditya continued.
"Ab tum puchoge ki kyun ja rhe hain. Main pehle hi bata deta . Preeti ki kuch cheezein reh gyi thi wahi lana hai...blah blah"
He didnt hear his rest of nonsense becoz his brain was busy making plans to separate this chewing gum from sumo. He picked his car keys and left for Tiwari killa
The sight before him boiled his blood. Sumo was in Aditya's arms.
Ok not exactly. She might have slipped and he had saved her but that's not the point. Why Aditya?? It should be me.
He walked straight to them grabbed his collar and punched his face. Sumo's eyes widened in horror.
"Whoa Mann!! Now what did I do??" Adi asked touching his face and winced. Now this would result in an ugly bruise he thought.
Shravan didnt feel the need to answer him , he held sumo's arms and walked outside.
Adi looked at their retreating forms.
This man needs to see a shrink. He is bipolar.
"Shravan...shravan why did you hit him? He was just trying to help me."She asked though knowing the answer. She has seen the look as he entered, as if he will tear adi into pieces.
"Mujhe achcha nhi lagta koi tumhe hath lagaye."he said with such intensity it gave her goosebumps.
The air grew intense.
"Jealous ??...haan"she smirked.
"I am not jealous . I am only territorial." He retorted
She came closer to him and placed her hands on his chest. Her eyes intense
"And why is that so?"she whispered.
He wanted to capture her lips and kiss the living daylights out of her but decided against it. It was neither the right place nor right time for it. After days of avoiding him she is finally trying to be normal with him. He wont scare her.
"You are my best friend . Its my duty to protect you from that douche."he said glaring in his direction
He was very sure he saw her smile falter at the word 'friend' but she cover up instantly
"Stop it shravan. He is not that bad." She whacked his arm. He scowled
"Yeah he is not bad he is worse." He said
"One more thing chewing gums leave bad taste in mouth if used for longer'" he winked .Sumo was confused by his behaviour What did he mean by chewing gum??
10pm Malhotra Mansion
He was working on a case when the Mighty Aditya decided to show up.
God!! Is he ubiquitous?? he groaned.
Everytime he saw him he wanted to strangle his neck.
"Are you planning to kill me?" Aditya asked in his ever annoying chirpy tone
Is he a mind reader or what??
"Dont give yourself too much importance."he replied
"Did I do something? Why do I feel you hate me??"Aditya asked
"I do not"he retorted.
"As long as you stay in your limits ,me and you are good."Shravan said stretching his limbs.
"And what are my limits?" Aditya asked arrogantly
He had to suppress the urge to break his teeth. His guy was getting on his nerves.
"Stay away from Sumo." He stated
"Sorry ...I didnt get you" said aditya
"STAY AWAY FROM SUMO" he said stressing on the word Sumo.
"And why will I do that??" Aditya cocked his eyebrow at him
He wanted to wipe off that smug look.
"Because she is mine. She was always mine and will be forever mine. I LOVE HER." He said rather warned him
"So do I" Aditya said . His temper reached its breakpoint. His punch landed straight on his face breaking his nose. New colors will now be added to his already colorful face.
Next morning he woke up early than usual, got ready in 15 mins and drove to Tiwari killa.
Sumo was busy on her phone ,didnt notice the water spilled on floor. Her foot slipped. Shravan rushed to her side, but his foot slipped over daboo's rubik cube. Both fell on the ground, sumo was lying on top of shravan. Their eyes locked and the world ceased to exist. Their trance was broken by Mamiji's shriek
"Hey bhagwan!! Suman ye kya dekh rhe hain hum?" Her mouth agape
Inhe abhi hi ana tha. he cursed his fate.
Both of them immediately got up.
"Wo..wo..mamiji mera pair fisal gaya tha to shravan..."she was fumbling
"Achcha wo sab thik hai tum jara hamare sath kitchen me aao. Kitna kam pada hai." Mamiji said
Sumo went inside the kitchen, while he made himself comfortable on the couch.
Preeti came running with a tear stricken face
"Kya hua tujhe ?? Aise ro kyun rahi hai?" Sumo asked in a concerned voice
"Sorry di.Wo ..wo apka orange wala lehenga ..wo...mujhse phat gya" preeti sobbed
"Ab aap kya pehnoge di? Sorry " Her sobs increased
"Shhh...chup ..Arey mere pas itni sari dresses hain kuch bhi pehen lungi. Tu tension mat le. Dulhan ke chehre pe hamesha smile honi chahiye. "She tried to cheer her up
Shravan heard their convo and did a happy dance in mind.
No he was not happy that her fav lehenga got torn.
He was relieved that now she wont wear the dress gifted by that chipku Adi.
He turned to leave.
"Shravan kaha ja rahe ho?"she yelled
"Kuch kam yaad aa gya."he smiled
11:30pm Tiwari killa
Sumo scanned her room and found the heap of clothes to be ironed.
"Chal beta sumo lag ja kam pe"
There a knock at the door. She knew who might be by the secret knocking pattern. Smile crept on her lips.
She opened the door," Itni raat ko tum yaha kya kar rhe ho??" She asked
"Wo sab chhodo pehle mere sath bahar ao." He pulled her outside, made her sit on the swing and tied a cloth over her eyes.
"Shravannn...ye kya kar rhe ho??"she whined.
"Ab apni ankhein kholo."he untied the piece of cloth.
There was the prettiest lehenga in coral shade she had ever seen. She instantly fell in love with it.
"Ye mere liye hai??" She asked excitement visible on her face.
"Nahi apne liye laya tha , fit nahi hua to socha tumhe de dun" he grinned
"Ohh thank u thank u so much" she hugged him
He was shocked for few secs then hugged her back.
She realised what she did and broke the hug, blushing furiously.
He chuckled at her cute expressions
"Umm tumhe kaise pata chala mere lehenge ke bare me?she asked in a curious tone
"Bas pata hai." He winked at her and left
Two hugs in two days ...not bad Shravan Malhotra
Today was his lucky day and there are many more to come. He was humming his favourite tune' Tere sang Yara' when he heard Aditya talking to someone over phone.
"Haan ma aap rishta le jayiye . Mujhe Suman pasand hai."
So how was it?? Do you want me to continue?? Let me know. Plzz hit the like button and drop your valuable comments if you like the story , if not Chappals are not welcomed throw something else mere pas bahut chappalein ho gyi hain🤣 . Indrani I hope it was upto your expectations ...i mean the punch 😆
Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Priyam
Index
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Chap 1- pg 1
Chap 2- pg 8
Chap 3- pg 13
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