SwaSan Os: Almost Perfect

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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

That was a beautiful OS. Such an engrossing read. The way you laid out evey stages of their lives really interesting. I liked your laksh very much. The only one who talked sense..

Veena

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey paro...

Your OS was such a relief..i soo needed a story to relax my self...the way you mentioned all jodi..on n off it was amaxing..n my swasan n raglak were end game..it brought big smile on my face...awesome...

Loved it..thank u...

Talia

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Lumos_18

@Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Hi
That was a beautiful OS. Such an engrossing read. The way you laid out evey stages of their lives really interesting. I liked your laksh very much. The only one who talked sense..

Veena

Thank you Veena.

Yeah, I guess Laksh was very sensible. I like writing sensible Laksh.😊

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Lumos_18

@Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey paro...
Your OS was such a relief..i soo needed a story to relax my self...the way you mentioned all jodi..on n off it was amaxing..n my swasan n raglak were end game..it brought big smile on my face...awesome...

Loved it..thank u...

Talia

Hello to you too 😳

I am flattered that you felt my story was relaxing. Thank you so much.😃

And ofcourse Swasan is the end game. Can't have it any other way can we? 😛