Twinj Drabble : Limited time

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Please don't leave",said Twinkle as she held back her tears.

She needed to stay strong,not for herself but for her family,for her Kunj.

Her Kunj was leaving,not for a time being but for a life time.

He needed to leave

How they were supposed to grow old together but here he was lying down on the hospital bed,breathing his last.

He had promised not to leave but he didn't have a choice,God had its plans.

"Please,I beg of you",said Twinkle desperately

"Shhh,please don't cry my siyaapa queen",said Kunj weakly

Kunj had gotten weak and paler,he was barely audible anymore.

"Mein tumhare bina nahi jee paungi"

Kunj chuckled."Tu humesha se hi drama queen thi"

"Chalo mein Bhi tumhare saath upar chalungi"

"Twinkle yeh Kya baacho jaisi zidd hai",said Kunj getting angry

"Tum isse Jo Bhi samjho"

"Twinkle tujhe jina hoga.Mere jaane ke baad,humare families Kya dhyaan rakhna hoga.Jab humara baby iss Duniya mein aaiga,tab kitna maaza aaiga na"

Twinkle looked at him confusingly

"Arre baba,mein upar se apni zindagi Ko dekhunga na.Jab Bhi Tu naya siyappa karegi mein upar se dekh kar hasunga,humare baby ka first step,first word,sab excitedly dekhunga"

"Kunj",Twinkle had started crying badly now

"Yaar agar Tu aise royegi toh kaise chalega?"

At that moment The nurse entered

"Mrs.Sarna,it's time"

"Nooo,please don't,I beg all of you please don't."

"Twinkle,you promised you'll stay strong",said Kunj stroking her face

Twinkle closed her eyes while Kunj nodded at the nurse

Slowly one by one all the family members came inside the room.

It was time for him to leave.

The nurse went ahead and pulled the plug off the ventilator.

Everybody froze as they heard the clock tick.

Kunj knew he hardly had seconds now.

So he looked at the love of his life beside him,kissed her on her forehead with great difficulty and smiled

"Next life,Twinkle Sarna,it's a promise",said Kunj as he winked at her and closed his eyes.

---THE END---
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
I HATE YOU!!!!!
Why you got to make me cry bro??!!
After all the smiles i gave you...


But in all seriousness this was devastatingly beautiful.
It was wonderfully penned down and i loved their conversation...
And Twinks is preggers too...hear that? That was my heart breaking.


And i cant believe i am going to thank you for it!
but Thank you..

I loved it!
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rula diya!
I'm speachless!
Bas itna kehna chahti hoon that it was a brilliant piece and wonderfully penned!
Love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
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K, my heart has been broken into a million little pieces 😭
This was just too emotional, their last convo made me tear up
I can't say more without getting all emotional, will get back to u later
Will prolly text you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A life without ur loved ones is unbearable & unsurviveable...
But yet we live for our love...we don't live the life but the love...

U made me emotional & i had to rush somewhere away alone to cry my heart out..

U know how good of a writer u r...& this was a great one...

Wait...
Agent k made her Snuggles cry...so k 'll have to write another story which would be just the opposite of this...

Love
Shaveerkti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm...
Kunjs dialogues...Twinkies break down...was so nicely penned down...
Kunj signalling nurse & the last part...

I commented twice & that too abrupt...sorry for that...

the story is so touching...

I can't...I had to shut my phone the first time I read the 1st & last part...then somehow read the whole...


Love u...
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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K i hate u like seriously hate u for this.
This was emotional piece.
Kunj leaving twinkle when she was preggers😭
Not fair.
Life is unfair with good people.
K it was brilliant writing😳🤗
Can u continue this with one more part s to how twinkle deals with life after kunj's death😭.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next rime se put a sad os thingy in the beginning
I so hate you for making me sob like a fool rn
Buy on a serious note magic girl, at least warn toh kiya karo
You are an amaZing writer nd the heart of mine os broken so bad that i cant even brethren anymoreH
uhhh
I am broken as per now
Baad mein i'll comment when im.okay
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kiara... Y did u made me cry 😭
I dono what to comment abt this story...but ur writing talent is amazing as always.😊
Please dont kill kunj in ur stories...I cant see it 😭
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm so loving ur Drabbles... Waiting for the next..

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