The Predators (One-Shot) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Red,
This was brilliant! I am so sorry for the late comment...but I was way out of vicinity of the forum for a few days. And now that I have returned...*eyes pinned for Fics*😆

And now the OS.

Did I mention how much I adore your description of gunmetal grey eyes?? It gives me Malfoy feels

And Anika enters and Shivaay is there in all his devilish glory. But Anika is not any virtuous angel to be seduced. She is the blaze of fire that burns him as much as he tries to capture her.

At first she falls a bit captivated but than the hatred reamed passion wins free. Ii loved Shivaay's reaction when she said 'Pity'. It was a glimpse that his perfectly poised facade is nothing at the glance of her gaze and as vulnerable as she is to him, so is he to her.

You captured the vitality of emotions perfectly.
Hatred sometimes is even more intense than love and twice as obsessive and binding.
I loved this.

Niki

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