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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.
Tht was hot nd sexy.
I have goosebumps imagining tht scene.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
So... Umm...
The problem is... I just ran out of words for this one... I mean the kind of impact this OS had on me was something not explainable...
I can't name it in one word to be honest... It was dark, hot, captivating, engulfing, obsessive...
And let me tell you still these words can't define the beauty of this OS... You are an amazing writer and keep doing this hard work...

P.S. Please give me some writing lessons

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Ooohh!! Too hot to handle..
I love wild romance...😳
Hats of to you Red...ur writings are amazing...👏
Har baar dil jeet leti ho...
Loved this one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
superb one!! me too AnShi shipper ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Yo! Yes! Wooohooo!! [:D] [:D] [:D] [:D] [:D]
Finally babe you wrote it and you wrote it for ME .
I'm over the moon hun. I can say proudly this is the best
Oneshot I've ever read from you. Tremendous!
It made me feel delirious.
This whole oneshot was the epitome of exquisitely wooven
Words.
[B]the sight of him was like a pristine austere[/B]
[=D>] absolutely incredible. This sentence lonely defines the worth of
Literature in your pieces [=D>]
And mostly I'm honored that you wrote it for me.
It means a lot. I'm literally back from the school since few
Minutes and I'm already typing.
I'm truly your fan.
I really love people who understand the intensity of literature.
Understand its just not a cluster of words and sentences and paragraphs.
Its much more. It makes you feel by its mere presence.
Feel the energy which is being radiated by those powerful words,
With their underlying playful meanings.
It was sexy yet subtle.
Intense yet playful.
Voilent yet peaceful.
Today I really feel proud of myself that i know someone who writes so gracefully.
I know it may look like I'm boasting or buttering but I'm not.
Coz this is one of the the rare moments when i feel sheer appreciation for someone and
Nothing else.
Trust me i know you'll go really far

And one more thing.
I noticed you used the word rancour.
You know its a word which is rarely i means literally rarely used
In conversations leave literature.
Whenever i use this word my English teacher calls
Me a nerd ...i swear [LOL]
And one more thing surprisingly it doesn't even exist
In my mobile dictionary...[=))]


[U]Author's Note: - This One Shot is dedicated to Ananya, who is a hard-core Anshi shipper!
*winks* It is on her demand, so good luck baby girl! Rock your exams! I hope you like this one![/U]

[=))] thanks a lot.
I hope I'll do fine and i agree i was a little
Demanding this time like shivaay singh oberoi as you
Mentioned in the pm [;)]

Xoxo ,
Ananya.



Ps- you made my day and love you [;)] [:)]
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Its dark,that's why its so awesome 😉 .write more dear.thanks 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
A round of applause for you! 👏
This was hot, passionate, intense, full of emotions and the list can continue.
Love the way how your writing gives me insight to their feelings.
So much unsaid yet a lot is told.
This was amazing.! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your OS oozes out the passion,desire and hotness between Anika and shivaay...the two predators,never will they be a prey...you aptly captured the true potential of their to-be relationship...well done...well this is going to give me some anshi passionate dream...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
so passionate OS 😳 ❤️
im also anshi shipper now 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Oh really good dear...
Loving ur writing more each day... the passion n their feelings made alive by ur writings...
Looking forward to read ur work s...

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