Tumse Mile Dil Mein Utha Dard Karara

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jitna Bhi Nikalana Chaha Kaanton se
Hum Utna Zyada Atakte Rahe
Kismat Ka Khel Bhi Ajeeb Hai
Manzil Ke Paas Ho Kar Bhi Bhatakte Rahe

This shayari is for Ishana. She wants to get rid of her problems by using Om but she doesn't knows what problem (love) she would be permanently trapped in. Om is her destination but this is a thing she won't understand now.
Today's scene was perfect for me in terms of chemistry IshKara have an amazing chemistry but the scene was so poorly edited. Writing was ok. But no proper scene continuation like how come Ishana found Om some back scenes should have been shown. And then how come Om achanak se landed up there 1 second pehle woh ghar pe tha. Yeh sab majorly screen space ke issues ki vajah se bhi ho sakta hai I mean cvs maybe wanting to give more space to anshi so they kind of rush other couples. But agar yeh sab ignore kare toh scene was good. Not the best or upto expectations but atleast we r moving ahead. I hope cvs improve they r doing a good job on AnShi. Now toh I m feeling IshKara n RumYa n just kind of fillers that they r not interested in writing (I hope not.)
And the name Bela I hope it better have some significance otherwise it just puts of modernity of their story.
But in the end we should just relax if n pray for a better scene.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the likes

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