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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Elvish... 😊 😊

Beautiful drabble... Ishaani defending Ranveer is always cute and the scene which u chose was extra cute.. Ranveer looked like an overwhelmed puppy in that episode with added flavor of their adorable talks.. 😳

Last part of this is beautiful... 👏 Ishani want to spend little more time with him and admiring him andar hi andar... awww... first sign of love for her... and him going all blushy blushy.. it was wow... ❤️ ❤️

But end was..😔 it mixed entire write up with those cruel acts of Ishani... but keeping that aside, it was amazing... 👍🏼

Keep writing and try to update this more frequently if u can... 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey Elvish... 😊 😊

Beautiful drabble... Ishaani defending Ranveer is always cute and the scene which u chose was extra cute.. Ranveer looked like an overwhelmed puppy in that episode with added flavor of their adorable talks.. 😳

Last part of this is beautiful... 👏 Ishani want to spend little more time with him and admiring him andar hi andar... awww... first sign of love for her... and him going all blushy blushy.. it was wow... ❤️ ❤️

But end was..😔 it mixed entire write up with those cruel acts of Ishani... but keeping that aside, it was amazing... 👍🏼

Keep writing and try to update this more frequently if u can... 🤗



Hi, Nids. :) Thank you so much!

I know. Ishani standing up for him is always a bliss to watch. ❤️❤️ Hehe. That scene was hella amazing. "Overwhelmed puppy" is the best word for him. He was such a cutie! Still drool over him for that episode. Ah, no fangirling. 😆 😆

Ishani was falling for him and would obviously want to stay with him instead of her annoying zoo family. And he is that puppy. They're cute!

Sighs. I know. I have always felt torn up about that March leap incident. And Ishani kind of defined cruelty in a different sense after that.

But I always found these particular episodes so cute when she was falling for him.

And, actually, I have exams from the next month and I need to finish Soulmates before that, so I'm working on it right now. But still I'm going to post a drabble now.

Thanks again. 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hey, all! I know I haven't updated this FF for quite sometime now, but finally it comes. And this chapter is dedicated to my friend R_ShaktiLover since she wanted me to write something like this. And I hope I have justified what you thought it should be like.

Chapter 8: Kiss of Love

"Ishani!" he pulled her closer to him and she smiled demurely, trying to hide herself away from his teasing gaze. But he pulled her chin up and made her look into his eyes. He smirked. "What's wrong, baby?"

She stammered a few words but faltered as he gazed at her lips. She wanted to get away from him... but instead, she found herself melting as his lips came nearer to hers. And before anything could happen...

"Baa!" she shrieked, horrified, and he stormed out of the room quickly, looking completely demented and frightened.

"Baa?" he looked about him and scowled at finding no one.

Ishani's giggles met his ears as he turned back to her who laughed uncontrollably at his panicked look and shook her head. But Ranveer did not look amused.

"Fine!" he cried, rushing into his room, and slammed the door behind.

Ishani followed him. "Ranveer," she said in a sing-song voice, still unable to control her laughter but no answer came. "Are you opening the door or I use my hairpin to do that?"

"The doors of RV's house are not that weak, Mrs. Vaghela!" he answered and Ishani laughed again, too loudly this time.

He suddenly opened the door, still looking disgruntled. "What are you laughing for?" he queried.

"You look so cute when you are mad at me but you know you are only pretending to be so," she said, pulling his cheeks but he only moved back to shut the door behind.

"Don't disturb me. I want to sleep. I have worked the whole day today to prepare for my wife's birthday who is not at all interested in that."

"Ah, I know." Ishani too followed him. "But don't you need your gift?"

He snorted. "Not when I'm tired. And it's your birthday, not mine!"

But neither of them knew amidst their arguments Ishani had entered Ranveer's room and now crossed her arms, looking at him, amused.

"Well?" he asked. "I want to work!" He picked up his laptop and sat on the bed, facing his back to her.

"That's cute!" She came to him and encircled her arms around his neck.

He looked back. "What?"

Ishani eyed sideways. "That gift you brought for me. Let me check."

"You are not going to take that!" He, with some difficulty, retrieved the packet before she could get her hand on it and placed it under the bed. Ishani glared at him.

"That's not fair!" she cried.

"Anything's fair in love and war!" he chimed victoriously.

"Ranveer, I can kiss you anytime... but this gift. It was my gift!"

"Alright! Then I can give you your birthday gift anytime, too. Thank you! You have already ruined my day and mood. Who the hell makes their husbands wait for a damn kiss for two whole weeks? That's crazy! You're inhuman!"

And suddenly Ishani stopped smiling and came close to him. "Are you sure you don't want to give me your gift?" she whispered in his ears and her tone made Ranveer look up in surprise as he stood up. Surely some mischief in her mind was going on! "Well, what about this?" She planted a kiss on his cheek and he glared at her.

But before he could say anything more, Ishani came much more close to him, their lips barely apart and her eyes glaring with a twinkle he had never seen before.

"What about this?" she asked and now he took hold of the matter and smiled.

"This is perfect," he whispered and she shivered, but by now his arms were tightly wrapped around her waist. No chance of escape. Ishani resisted him slightly, blushing. "Oops!" He certainly enjoyed her torture.

She struggled against his chest but he only pulled her towards him, making it harder to escape.

"Well, you brought yourself here," he answered, now tracing his thumb across her lips slowly. She closed her eyes and gulped.

"Ranveer!" she complained breathlessly. "That's not fair!"

"It is!" his voice was a hoarse whisper.

And without giving her a chance to say anything more, he leaned and softly brushed his lips with hers before capturing them in a slow, deliberate kiss. He rested his hands on either sides of her cheeks, and tasted her lips softly. Ishani reciprocated back as her free hand reached out to the back of his head, pulling him towards her more, and another clutched onto his shoulder tightly while her lips moved in the perfect concord with his, and her eyes closed. The kiss continued on as its heat spread over her skin and she felt her heart swell with a joy she had never known before. Ranveer moved his one hand to her waist and pulled her close, keeping up with the kiss until their breaths hitched and they could not breathe. Slowly Ishani separated away and turned her back towards him.

He smiled at her as Ishani refused to meet her eyes with him and he came close to her.

"So?" he asked and Ishani looked at him, her cheeks red.

"So?"

"It's your birthday!" he whispered and hugged her again. "Happy birthday, Mrs. Vaghela!"

Ishani hugged him back. "Thank you! This is the best gift you could have given me! What about the another, though?"

His face paled and he gulped. He needed to run away before she got her hands on that damned wrong packet.

PS. I've written their kisses so much that it's so much fun now. xD In 3 updates [2 of Soulmates and 1 of this one] I have written 3 kisses. Ah, this hatrick. :D

PPS. I'll probably reply to Soulmates tomorrow, now.

Now, I run away.

Edited by Elvish_Hobbit - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Elvish. You are on fire girl
Someone is getting expert in this 😉
Well with the title I expected it but not this mesmerising 😳
She teased him and that was really cute when he gets annoyed with her it makes him much more adorable 😳 😳
And well she lured him to give the gift but got trapped herself.
I was reading this whole update with this big smile
And their kiss was dazing yar wow.
Seriously i was waiting for something like this in soulmates also. But their it will be the other way round.

What's in the packet something for sunny or for ishani?
Honestly you are getting so good at it need to progress to next level in any of your work 😉 now I ll run before you can throw something or glare daggers at me.
🤣 🤣 😉
Edited by dvprt418.py - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I was expecting something like this, when you used "crazy " for this. 😉

I haven't got over from Soulmates kisses, as i have completed them recently, and this. I have got a big treat now xD
The way he pulls her <3 <3
I used to go Gaga over him, in such scenes in the show itself and you describe it so well.

The way she tease him, and him mentioning her Mrs. Vaghela.
O God! Such cuties they are!
Congo on the hatrick. :D keep it up! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hy dr...
Amazing chap
Ur all going so good...
Keep updating...
Keep smiling 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi Elvish. You are on fire girl
Someone is getting expert in this 😉
Well with the title I expected it but not this mesmerising 😳
She teased him and that was really cute when he gets annoyed with her it makes him much more adorable 😳 😳
And well she lured him to give the gift but got trapped herself.
I was reading this whole update with this big smile
And their kiss was dazing yar wow.
Seriously i was waiting for something like this in soulmates also. But their it will be the other way round.

What's in the packet something for sunny or for ishani?
Honestly you are getting so good at it need to progress to next level in any of your work 😉 now I ll run before you can throw something or glare daggers at me.
🤣 🤣 😉

*coughs* I know, right! XD Their kisses are so amazing. Uh, I need to shut up. :p

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it so much. I'm hell afraid before posting it.

Ranveer is Ranveer. Poor soul. Ishani tortures him so much, no? But he knows how to get the job done. He goes close and she goes weak.

Hehe. In Soulmates their equation is bit different. Although he's the one that gives more in their love there, too, but his own insecurities never let him initiate things. And he doesn't have to since she does it before he can. XD In the packet, you remember a gift he'd got her but Mala by mistake brought dumbbells instead for Ishani? These are the same gifts. Just I didn't use the word since it looked odd after their romantic encounter.

Next level? Dear God, no! Not yet! Though progress will be there for sure. Soulmates hai na. :o :o And don't worry. Don't run away. Come back. I won't hit you now with anything. :p
987873 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KajalSR

I was expecting something like this, when you used "crazy " for this. 😉

I haven't got over from Soulmates kisses, as i have completed them recently, and this. I have got a big treat now xD
The way he pulls her <3 <3
I used to go Gaga over him, in such scenes in the show itself and you describe it so well.

The way she tease him, and him mentioning her Mrs. Vaghela.
O God! Such cuties they are!
Congo on the hatrick. :D keep it up! 👏

Haha. Yeah. What could be crazier than Elvish writing of their happy romance? It's suprising for me also. And thanks a lot! I'm glad I didn't turn it into a disaster as I'd feared. :p Soulmates kisses are innocent ones. This one was advanced. :D

I know what you mean. In the show that 2 weeks' phase was brilliant. Their romance was love! Haha. Thanks. I hope to make better records too. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr...
Amazing chap
Ur all going so good...
Keep updating...
Keep smiling 😳

Thank you, mate! I'm glad you liked it. :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
*coughs* I know, right! XD Their kisses are so amazing. Uh, I need to shut up. :p

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it so much. I'm hell afraid before posting it.

Ranveer is Ranveer. Poor soul. Ishani tortures him so much, no? But he knows how to get the job done. He goes close and she goes weak.

Hehe. In Soulmates their equation is bit different. Although he's the one that gives more in their love there, too, but his own insecurities never let him initiate things. And he doesn't have to since she does it before he can. XD In the packet, you remember a gift he'd got her but Mala by mistake brought dumbbells instead for Ishani? These are the same gifts. Just I didn't use the word since it looked odd after their romantic encounter.

Next level? Dear God, no! Not yet! Though progress will be there for sure. Soulmates hai na. :o :o And don't worry. Don't run away. Come back. I won't hit you now with anything. :p


Yup in soulmates their romance is ladden with innocence.
oh that gift well that day he was looking so handsome.😳
progress in soulmates*faints* *tears of happiness*☺️ really i am just dying to read their romance in soulmates because of their fierce longing for each other and the pain and suffering they have been through. a sincere request do update soulmate faster and love filled.

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