Imaginary episode #8 HUMARA PYAAR

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Firstly thanks to all the writers!
This episode if I may, was the best imaginary episode till date!
Absolutely marvelous maha episode!

Episode credit:
Priyam
Ritu
Vaish
Mittu
Shivi
Puba
Zoya

Without further ado, happy reading🤗

PRECAP :
secretary says to ramnath " ms suman is there in the office"
ramnath asked " suman ... tiwari "
she says "yes"
ramnath says " send her inside"

ramnath nd suman in conference room :
suman says " i thought a lot and after that i hv decided that..."


HUMARA PYAAR❤️

Suman knew what she had to do. With a determined look she entered malhotra associates. The secretary informed Ramnath about her arrival. He flashed a villianous smile , "Suman tiwari???...Send her in"
Suman entered the conference room greeted him formally.
"Uncle maine bahut socha is bare me...and" she said
"Main janta tha tum mera proposal accept kar logi. You are a smart girl , you chose your family over love. I'm impressed." He said as he cut her off in midsentence
"Sorry to say but you are wrong uncle. I am here to return your Cheque." She replied in a calm voice
Ramnath was furious , how dare she refuse him. That means she will go after shravan.
"Tum janti ho na iska anjaam kya hoga? U are well aware about your family's financial status. I think its time to call off pushkar and preeti's marriage" he warned her.

"No need to call off the wedding uncle" suman says in her confident voice.
Ramanth was surprised as why is she so confident.. He was about to speak when suman intruppted him before he could even speak " uncle aapne meri puri baat nhi suni "

suman : uncle maine kaha ki main yeh cheque aapko wapas kar rhi hu ..but maine aapki baat ansuni nhi ki hai...

She heaved a breath before speaking further

Suman : uncle mujhe yeh cheque nhi chahiye kyuki i m capable of doing marriage arrangements..aisa bhi nhi hai ki main sara arrangement khud akele karungi..nhi ..meri family mere saath hai, unka support mere saath hai, unka pyar mere saath hai..aur jab yeh sab mere saath hai toh mujhe iss cheque ki toh bilkul zarrorat nhi hai...par haan..jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki main aapke bete se dur rahoon iss cheque ke badle mein,toh aap yeh soch rahe honge ki main shravan se dur nhi rahoongi ya phir usko aapse dur kar dungi...nhi uncle aisa bhi kuch nhi hoga.,kyuki mera pyar koi BUSINESS DEAL nhi hai jise aap iss cheque se kharidna chahte hai...haan main...main shravan se pyar karti hu par iska yeh matlab bilkul bhi nhi hai ki main apne pyar ka sauda karungi inn paiso se yaar phir kisi aur chiz se...hargiz nhi.,par main aapse ek vada jarur karungi, apne pyar ke liye aur apni behen aur mere dost pushkar ki khushi ke liye ..



Ramnath was stunned hearing her words as if he was losing something...his gaze was constant on suman with fear in his eyes..


Ramnath say " kaisa vada"


Suman looks at him and says in determined voice once again " main aapke aur aapke bete ke beech mein kabhi nhi aaungi "

Saying this Suman left the office and Ramnath was shocked "Cheque bhi nahi chahiye aur Shravan se bhi door rahegi?? Chalo accha hai. Mera hi kaam aasaan kiya hai isne"
Shravan woke up in the morning and the first thing he did was to check out his phone for any messages from Sumo. Finding none he was disappointed. Then he go to thinking why did Sumo behave like that last night. "Shayad sach mein busy rahi hogi. Shaadi ke itne saare kaam jo hai. Koi baat nahi main apni dil ki baat aaj Sumo se kahunga".

Shravan calls Sumo *Ring* *Ring*. Sumo sees that its Shravan calling. She remembers her promise to Ramnath and ignores the call. Shravan calls her for another 2-3 times and there is no response from Sumo. He thinks "Weird. Kal se mera phone nahi utha rahi hai. Ab kiss baat pe naaaraz hai madam." Keeping aise the matter for now he gets back to work.

In Tiwari villa

Mami : Arrey Suman, Tum ne vo hotel aur baaki saari arrangements ki list bana di na??

Sumo : Ji maamiji ho raha hai

Mami : To Suman ek baar tum Malhitra house jaake yeh sab intezaam Kamini ji ko dikha ke laana. Aaakhir vo dulhe hi maa hain. Sab kuch unki pasan ki hisaab se hona chahiye. Agar kuch idhar udhar ho gaya to hum unki pasand se badal denge.

Suman : Lekin maamiji

Mami : Leki wekin kuch nahi Suman tumhe jaana padega. Aakhir tumhi shaddi ka saara intezaam kar rahi ho

Suman : Theek hai mamiji main jaake un logon se corordinate karti hoon.

Saying this Sumo started for Malhotra house desperately hoping for Shravan to be not at home..

Sumo enters Malhotra Mansion,her hand clutching the bag tight,nervousness written on her face and her eyes searching for Shravan.

Her eyes only look towards Shravan's room and BANG!
She collides with someone hoping that its not Shravan.

She opens her eyes to be relieved,its Pushkar whose face clearly says he has something really fishy going on his mind.

"Sumo tuu idhar?Bhaiyaa see milne aye hai na?Bulataa hoon abhi" Pushkar smirked and called out for Shravan
"Aree naahi,umm mein to umm yahan Kamini aunty see milne ayi hoon"Sumo said wishing that Shravan wouldn't come out hearing Pushkar's voice
"Mummy see par kyun?"Asked Pushkar

"Voh actually tere aur Preeti ke shaadi ke liye hotel see related kuch kaam tha,mami ne bheja hai mujhe"Suman said

"Achaa" Pushkar blushed
"Par mummy toh bhabs ke saath mall gayi hai"Pushkar said

"Ohh toh fir mein aati hoon baad mein" Suman said sighing in relief and turning to leave Malhotra Mansion

"Areeyy ruk,mein bhaiyaa ko bulatta hoon"BHAIYAAA SUMO AYI HAI"Pushkar said

"AYA" Came Shravan's voice from his room

Sumo gulped.Her pace fastened up and she was just about to leave when she heard him call.
"Sumoo" Shravan called out to her

"Sumo" He was coming Down stairs.
She was Too afraid As she can she what's coming on her way.

He Came Just Front of Her and she was constantly looking down which made Puskar realise that There is something Wrong between Them and He need To Move From There.

"Guys,I think Preeti is calling me.My phone is in my Room So you carry on I might not catch-up"And Before Suman could do something He just left His Room.

Shravan was too Shock To React.She haven't notice him Yet.
"Sumo,Main Tumse baat kar raha Hoon"He said in High Tone.
"Hmmm" Sumo just look into his Eyes & looked away in second.
"Tum Mujhse Milne Kyu Nahi Aayi Kal?" He asked,His voice bit Sad.
"Maine Kaha na Busy thi Main?"She said still trying to avoid meeting his eyes.
"Sach Batao Sumo,Meri Tarf Dekh Ke Bolo"His hold her from Shoulders and made her to look at Him.

Shravan realized that Sumo wasn't quite telling the truth. So he asked his question again...

Shavan: Sumo mein phir se pooch raha hoon...tum kal nahi aayi...maine intezaar kiya...tumne aaj bhi mera koi call answer nahi kiya...what's the matter? I know that you couldn't have been busy all this while!

Sumo: Shravan...mere paas tumhe kehne ke liye kuch nahi hai!

Shravan: Don't talk to me in puzzles, please tell me what has changed in the past 24 hours...and you know I was going to tell you something important...phir bhi...your behavior is beyond weird!

Sumo just stood there...her face gazing the ground. Shravan realized Sumo wasn't going to tell him anything. So he held her hand...Sumo tried to free her hands from his grasp, but Shravan's hold had a certain determination and Sumo realized that today he wouldn't let her go without knowing the truth. Shravan then said...mere saath chalo and took her to his room...and closed the door shut with a thud!

Shravan: Tum jab tak mujhe nahi bataogi ki kya huya hai in chand ghanto mein...tum yahi rahogi!

Sumo: Theek hai...tumhe aaj mei jitna ho sake bataungi...tumne ek din mujhe kaha tha ki humare beech eh ehsaas hai...aur woh hai dosti ka...lekin meri feelings tumhare liye dosti se kayi zyada hai...lekin yeh sirf meri kahaani hai...

Shravan just stood there flabbergasted.
He couldn't quite palate what he just heard.
"Kya kaha tumne? Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aya.."

"Shravan, tum mere liye dost se badhkar ho, par yeh sirf mai mehsoos karti hoon, tum toh mujhe sirf apna dost maante ho" she looked down, upset.

Shravan felt like he was hit by a blizzard. A blizzard that made him feel anger that she hadn't said this earlier, relief that she did think of him the way he did, confusion of did she feel the way he did?
Was this happening?

Sumo turned around to leave. "Maine tumse kaha na mai baat kar raha hoon, baat poori nahi hui meri"

"Kya baat karni hai tumhe? Haan? Bacha kya hai? Mai tumhari sirf ek dost hoon"

"Tumse yeh kisne keh diya?"

"Tumne"

Shravan looked at her upset, "Aur tumne maan liya?"

"Tumne kaha mujhse shravan ke hum sirf dost hai, aur tumhare papa nafrat karte hai mujh se, Woh kabhi nahi maanege"

"Kya kaha tumne?"

"Tumhare papa ko mai na pasand hoon tumhare liye"

"Yeh unho ne kaha tumse?"

"Kya farq padta hai, tum unke khilaaf kuch maante thodi ho."

"Farq padta hai tabhi pooch raha hoon, saaf saaf jawab do. Yeh unho ne kaha tum se"

"Haan, aur dhamki bhi di ke mai tumse door nahi rahi toh woh Preeti aur Pushkar ka rishta tod denge, yehi nahi, blank cheque bhi diya mujhe tumhe bhool jaane ke liye"

Shravan by now had lost it. He couldn't understand why this was happening? What was happening? He knwe his father didn't like sumo for him, he was apprehensive giving his approval, but this? This he hadn't expected. Could his father really do this? Such manipulation?

Sumo saw him lost in thoughts. "Pata tha mujhe, tum nahi manoge."

"Tumne kaha papa ne cheque diya, toh kya kia tumne uska?"

"Unhe lauta diya. Mera pyaar bikaoo nahi hai Shravan"

"Humara" Shravan was upset yes that his father could do this, but he was relieved that his Sumo didn't let him down.

"Kya kaha"

"Humara sumo, tumhara aur mera pyaar."

Sumo couldn't contain her happiness. He not only believed her over his father, but he loved her "Tum mujh se..."

"Pyaar karta hoon sumo, hamesha kia hai, hamesha karoonga"

Sumo ran into his arms and cried he heart out, "I love you Shravan, mai bohot pyaar karti hoon tumse, jabse tum gaye ho tabse, shayad usse bhi pehle se, bas samjh ab aya, mujhe kabhi chod ke mat jana, mai marr.."

Shravan pulled her away lightly, put a finger on her lips, "Kabhi aaisi baat mat karna, tumhe kuch hua toh mai nahi jee paoonga"

Sumo smiled , shravan mirrored her smile, and smiles turned into giggles. Contentment is waht they felt. Their love had finally won!

THE END...
NAH, HAPPY BEGINNING

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Title loved it ..
I agree this is best imaginary episode till date,😳


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It was lovely. All the writers 🤗 Kaash aisa show pe hota 😔
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Zoya u packaged all parts in one, so well 👏
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Agree!!! It was best imaginary episode till date
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This was really nice😃

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Had a great time writing this down.
All the writers you have done a mind blowing job!
Hats off👏

Oreo thank you for compiling.

So now next weekend it is.
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Priyam
Ritu
Vaish
Mittu
Shivi
Puba
Zoya
Tum Sab Ek kaam karo resume bhejo to EDKV team , I mean jo talent waha hona chaiye as cvs woh bechara India forum Ke samandar main dubki laga raha hai , aur jinko yaha Hina chaiye woh cvs ki kursi per bethe hai. ...
Bravo guys luvd it great job all my talented lovelies 🤗
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Guys🤗
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Blockbuster Episode👏👏
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You guyz have nailed it fab imaginery epi
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O H. M Y. G O O D N E S S.
This was the most incredible episode everrr!
I missed it again today, but OMGGG! 😲 The confession was the most beautiful aspect. It was so subtle, yet passionate.
Just imagine agar yeh actually show mein hua toh? 🤪
I can't get over how amazing this was...😲
Simply outstanding peeps! 👏

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