FF: Aakhir..... Kyon?

Part 1

Starts off in Walia Mansion

Everyone is sitting on the floor

And they are all wearing white!

Today is the most tragic day….

It is the funeral of Bani!

Her body is there

On the floor

And everyone is sitting around

And there is Jai

Who is sitting in front of it

And he's just dazed!!!!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe what happened!!

This seems like

This is a bad dream!!!!!

He wants it to be a really bad nightmare!!

But it isn't!!

Jai is looking at her body!!!!!!

This is no expression on his face!!!

He shouldn't be feeling anything

But this time

It seems like

His world just came to an end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Chithhi na koyi sandesh
Ho chithhi na koi sandesh
Jaane woh kaun sa desh jaha tum chale gaye

Everyone was there!!

Looking dazed and lost!!!!!!!!

The baby was crying…..

And Krishna had her in her arms!!!

Krishna wanted to give her to Jai!

But Jai wasin no mood!!!

Krishna calmed the baby down!!!!!!!!!!

It was time to take Bani's body!!!!

Jai was just there sitting on the floor!!!!

Looking at Bani!

Part 2

Chithhi na koyi sandesh
Jaane woh kaun sa desh jaha tum chale gaye
Jaha tum chale gaye
Is dil pe laga ke thhes jaane woh kaun sa desh
Jaha tum chale gaye...

Everyone stood up

Jai was in the front

He had helped lift the body up

And everyone started walking with it!!!!!!!!!!

Jai was so lost

That he didn't even realize

Where he was walking

He was just walking

On the way

He got hurt on his arm

And he got scratched

He was bleeding

But he didn't even feel that!!!

They had bought the body to the site

And Jai was doing everything!!!!

He was doing the last rites!!!!!!!!!!

He was going very slowly!!

They had given him the fire

But he had hesitated!!!

He had closed his eyes!!!!!!!!

He didn't want to!

Uday had put his hand on his shoulder

And then

Jai opened his eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!

He had finally

Burned the body

And he was just standing there

Watching her body go into ashes!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ek aah bhari hogi hamne na suni hogi
Jaate jaate tumne awaaz to di hogi
Har waqt yehi hai gham, us waqt kaha the hum
Kaha tum chale gaye



ThE ENd! (Please comment)

Bare with me!

me first

haila...bani dead...shuru shuru mein dhamaka...what else can we expect from queen of ff...😉😉😉...haila haila...there is a baby...oh oh...now let the story unfold...you know i got you babe...ill bare with you...i bare with u everyday...😆...u know i love you 🤗🤗🤗
JAZ

nice start,, but i trust u , hope bani will come back, "reincarnate" 😊 .... waitng 4 next part

I love the title of your fanfic.....seems very catchy and suitable to the story outline you have posted....well thought of I must say. 👏

Will wait and see how the drama unfolds.

totally confused..

pls contineu soon.
so abni isdeath 😭
davia

i love you no belans for you because you are jr. ekta mayi 😆

cant wait to read how this story unfolds

😭 😭
You made me cry... is there any hope in this story?
Waiting for an update 😊

hey guli.........

great startoff..............

bani is dead...............

update soon