Twinj OS : Fighting through the pain.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This takes place after Kunj was shot.Anita was instantly arrested,Yuvi was ashamed so he left their lives and Kunj after being treated was back home.There was no leap and stuff.

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After being kept under special supervision by the doctors,Kunj was back home after a month.

A lot had changed in this one month.The Luthra's had left their lives,Manohar's wedding planning business became a success and finally there was happiness in the Sarna household.

When Kunj first entered the house,he was greeted with a pooja ki thali and the smiling faces of his family.

Since he was still weak due to the high doses of medicines,he was forced to rest in his room.

His food and the other necessities were to be provided to him in the room.

Usha - "Twinkle putar Tu bhi jaa kar aaram karle.Waise bhi Kunj ke welcome ke chaakar mein subhe se yahan wahan bhag rahi hai.Jaa aur ja kar Kunj ke saath thodha waqt bita."

Recalling Usha's words,Twinkle entered the room to find Kunj half lying down on the bed with his back leaned against the headboard,staring at the ground.

It looked like he was in a deep thought.

Flashback

At the Hospital
Psychiatric ward

Doctor - "Good morning Mrs.Sarna mein Dr.Mehra Hun aapke pati Kunj ki doctor."

Twinkle - "Good morning doctor.Aapne yahan mujhe Achanak kyun Bulaya? Sab theekh toh hain na? Kunj?"

Doctor - "Haan Mrs.Sarna aap bilkul Chinta mat kijiye Kunj bilkul theekh hai."

Twinkle sighed in relief

Doctor - "Mujhe actually Aapse unke condition ke baare mein baat karni hai."

Twinkle - "Condition?"

Doctor - "Ji.Dekhiye aapke pati Kunj ko hydrophobia."

Looking at Twinkle's confused
expression,she continued

Doctor - "Let me explain.Hydrophobia is a state when a person is scared of water.Woh paani ke paas jaana toh dur,Woh paani ko dekhna bhi pasand nahi karte.Seeing water can be very dangerous to the patient,they can suffer from panic attacks."

Twinkle stared at the doctor in shock.She could feel the floor below her spinning.This cannot be happening.First sickle cell anemia and now this?

Doctor - "Dekhiye Mrs.Sarna ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai,this can be treated."

Twinkle - "Lekin doctor Kunj ko Achanak yeh phobia?"

Doctor - "The thing is when Kunj was shot,he fell into the sea.Kunj ko Waise bhi swimming nahi Aati so when he fell,he must have struggled a lot trying to get out of the water which gave birth to the phobia.Yeh ek Bohot hi common cheez hai with the patients who have been through traumatized events."

Twinkle still wasn't convinced.

Doctor - "Dekhiye,Iss ka sirf ek hi solution hai.Humme Kunj ko thoda waqt dena hoga.Try to keep him happy,pamper him and most importantly take care of him.Usse iss waqt sabse zyada aapki zaroorat hai.He's in a very sensitive state.And yes,try to keep him away from water."

Twinkle - "Don't worry doctor,mein Kunj ka pura dhyan rakhungi"

Flashback ends.

Twinkle sat beside Kunj

Twinkle - "Kunj,ab kaisa lag raha hai?"

Kunj - "Mein theekh Hun Twinkle,bas thodi weakness hai,zyada kuch nahi,don't worry."

Twinkle smiled,even in his weak state he still cared about Twinkle.

Twinkle was about to get up to go to the washroom when Kunj held her hand making her stop.

Kunj - "Twinkle?"

Twinkle - "Haan"

Kunj - "Please mujhse dur mat jaana"

Twinkle smiled at his innocence.

She went and sat near him again.He slowly placed his head on her lap and she instantly started stroking his hair.

Suddenly they heard a knock at the door.
It was Ishaan.

Twinkle - "Arre Ishaan baba aap yahan?"

Ishaan - "Haan woh chachi Bebe ne chachu ki medicines bheji hai."

Hearing his partner's voice,Kunj got up from Twinkle's lap.

As soon as he saw the glass of water in Ishaan's hand,the blood drained off from his face.

Twinkle looked at his pale colourless face which only showed pain and fear.

Kunj had started sweating,closed his eyes and started breathing heavily.

All those flashbacks of that dreadful incident had started coming back to him.

Twinkle instantly understood,she took the glass and the medicines from Ishaan before bidding him goodnight.

She slowly kept the glass of water under their bed and looked at Kunj.

He was nowhere in sight.

Panicking,she got up and called out to him.Hearing no response,she went to check in the bathroom only to see it empty.

She decided to check in the balcony before she would frantically start screaming and gathering all the family members to look for Kunj.

She went outside in the balcony to find it empty again.

Twinkle started walking towards the door when she heard small sobs coming from the corner of their room behind their giant yellow chairs.

Twinkle slowly walked towards it and what she saw broke her down into a million pieces.

Her once full of life husband was crying hugging himself with his head buried inside his legs.

The sight Infront of her made her realise how weak Kunj had become and before she knew it,she had started crying as well.

Building up a little courage,she went near Kunj and sat down beside him.

She slowly touched his shoulders.

Her one touch was enough for Kunj to break down further into large sobs.

Twinkle didn't stop him,after all he had suffered a lot.He had to vent it out.

Kunj bend down further and hugged Twinkle's stomach as he continued crying.

The position they were sitting in was uncomfortable but nothing mattered right now to them other than being with each other.

After hours and hours of crying,Twinkle heard small sniffs from Kunj before he fully stopped crying.

She then made him get up and cupped his face.

Twinkle - "I love you"

Kunj looked at her with moist eyes.

Twinkle - "I know this is hard for you Kunj.I know what you're going through but you have to be strong not for yourself but for us. You can't let this affect you.You're not my Kunj,my Kunj was strong.Kunj tumhe kuch nahi hoga,kuch nahi hone dungi tumhe,yeh mera wada hai.We have to fight through this"

Kunj - "What if we can't?"

Hearing his innocent question welled up Twinkle's heart.

"That's impossible",stated Twinkle.

Twinkle - "Tumhi ne toh sikhaya hai ke face your fears.And that's exactly what you're going to do."

"I love you too Twinkle",said Kunj as he pecked Twinkle's lips.

Twinkle slowly made him stand up and walked with him towards the bed.

Making him lie down,she put the blanket on top of him.

Kunj - "Twinkle?"

Twinkle - "Hmm"

Kunj - "Mein tujhse wada karta Hun,I'll be strong.Not for me but for us.We'll fight through this I promise."

Twinkle smiled through her tears.

She bend down to peck his hair and whisper an 'I love you' before she saw Kunj close his eyes with a big smile on his face.

That's what life is all about isn't it? No matter what life throws at you,if you have your love with you,YOU CAN FIGHT THROUGH THE PAIN.

-THE END-

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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neverlandspirit thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was amazing
First of all i am super glad about no leap thing
And secondly couple healing each other is MY WEAKNESS!!! And baby you have penned this down so well.
Poor Kunj. I particularly loved how you showed Kunj breaking down because it's not often that they show guys having a break down. So ur incorporating that was a brilliant touch.

And then the hug
plays with my heart all the time!!

In short beautifully penned down.
Amazing plot and nothing shy of brilliant.
👏
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh god this was sooo awesome.
Loved how you portrayed Kunj's emotions.
Just perfect dear.
I know how it feels to be scared of something had an accident two years back which was quite major a truck dashed into our car flipping it completely so I have still not overcome my fear of trucks and cars though I do ride in cars but I have told my mom to stay away from trucks and big buses so yaa the struggle to overcome a fear is large and you portrayed it perfectly!
Loved it
Lots of love
Sayli

Edited - loved how Twinkle said we will fight it together. And you have to stay strong for us! Gave me soo many feels!
Loved these two lines the most!
Edited by SweetSau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res.😃
Unres 😡
I am an idiot...
I am a stupid...
You know why cause I took such a longgg time to read it.

I just😡

K,you again blow your magic sticks.
This OS is simply mesmerizing.👏
Like Twinkle I am also getting sooo emotional.
& Anita...😡
And Last para is really amazing.
Twinj Bond...only
And you are right that when u held hands of your belovd one;then it seems nothing is impossible.
All existing troubles exit with just a blow.😳
Please put on the paper more just like this one.


Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok sorry for unressing after a lot of time.
But what a beautiful os.
Once a strong kunj has become so sensitive
But yes thats what life is all about😊
To fight through pain when u have ur love with u.

Nd k🤗
Thanks for pm.
Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so amazing 👏
Beautifully written
Edited by .Anisha. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kiara its so good
I am just lost in imagining all this
Ohhh Kunj is hydrophobic 😭 but why to fear when Twinkle his love is here
when Ishaan took the glass of water with meds I was so tensed as I was lost in this OS and yaa it came true Kunj remembered that incident ...I was crying reading that part
Kunj the strong Kunj was crying behind the chair 😭😭... really you are becoming a very good writer day by day K you made me cry with your writing
and the end part was so good ...after reading it I was having tears with a smile on my face
Thanks a lot Kiara for the PM for it m so happy to read it
Love you a lot buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

This was amazing

First of all i am super glad about no leap thing
And secondly couple healing each other is MY WEAKNESS!!! And baby you have penned this down so well.
Poor Kunj. I particularly loved how you showed Kunj breaking down because it's not often that they show guys having a break down. So ur incorporating that was a brilliant touch.

And then the hug
plays with my heart all the time!!

In short beautifully penned down.
Amazing plot and nothing shy of brilliant.
👏


Thank you so much Meh 🤗
It's true,we hardly get to see a guy's breakdown these days 🤔
Anyway thanks,love you 😳
Jambread3 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSau

Ohh god this was sooo awesome.

Loved how you portrayed Kunj's emotions.
Just perfect dear.
I know how it feels to be scared of something had an accident two years back which was quite major a truck dashed into our car flipping it completely so I have still not overcome my fear of trucks and cars though I do ride in cars but I have told my mom to stay away from trucks and big buses so yaa the struggle to overcome a fear is large and you portrayed it perfectly!
Loved it
Lots of love
Sayli

Edited - loved how Twinkle said we will fight it together. And you have to stay strong for us! Gave me soo many feels!
Loved these two lines the most!


I'm so sorry to hear about your accident!
Hope you overcome your fears soon 😊
Thank you so much,so happy you liked it 😳
Take care! 🤗
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Res.😃

Unres😡
I am an idiot...
I am a stupid...
You know why cause I took such a longgg time to read it.

I just😡

K,you again blow your magic sticks.
This OS is simply mesmerizing.👏
Like Twinkle I am also getting sooo emotional.
& Anita...😡
And Last para is really amazing.
Twinj Bond...only
And you are right that when u held hands of your belovd one;then it seems nothing is impossible.
All existing troubles exit with just a blow.😳
Please put on the paper more just like this one.



Oye you dare not call yourself idiot/stupid okay?
My Adi is the best 🤗
Thank you so much baby
Your comments make me blush 😳

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